SS: His Smiling Girl Part 10 updated on Pg 108

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essess

@essess

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!

And cant wait for the rest of the parts!

Your writing is so wonderful!

So much emotion and such soft feelings in all the words. Loved the part where Arnav looks in his car mirror and wonders who is this cruel man with a smile on his lips! Felt so much for him then.

And so proud that he wants all the past and his diabetic truth out in the open first off. even though it is not really necessary! What a nature of the man!!!!!!!!!

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divvk

@divvk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Amazing update yaar.. please continue.. if possible, PM if u can yaar.. thank u so much for converting it into a SS 😊

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Aww i loved it!

He even had a meet with her family? Thats good!

So khushi wants to learn further. Will Arnav and His family accept for it?

I am totally loving it! :) I love this Arnav! ❤️

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Nice !!! Looks like fires on both side !! Love at first sight for both of dem !!!
Waiting for dem to come to knw abt the rishta !! :)

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Hey amazing again oly hours ago I read part 1n 2 n nw I get 3 lol shud hv waited for a while more I guess n hes too good wants to tel dem evetyn nice n one down that hes diabetic nw lets see hw next ones revealed n wow their meetin cudnt h. Been better too good man!!
cheers for the post :)

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#186

A fab update...aww he is such a sweetheart and so madly in love but still doing the right by not hiding anything abt himself from his prospective bride and in laws.

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

Love you Smita, for this heart-warming story...

Arnav bitwa, you are a smart one, aren't you?

And he is taking the absolute right path, to inform Khushi's family about his past and about him being a diabetic.

'He had the craziest family on earth. His Khushi would fit in perfectly. A small smile played on his lips.'

I am smiling like a fool after reading that line.

And the way he must have said...'tum theek ho?'

God, thank you for Arnav Singh Raizada, he brightens up so many gloomy days.

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

that was a wonderful update... thank god arnav wants to reveal his murky past at the very outset... that's the way to go... khushi falling into his arms and then being mesmerised by his melting brown eyes was adorable... this arnav doesn't seem to be as scary as the one in the show... hopefully this story will have some light moments because I don't think I can deal with death and doomsday at present, what with the depressing events being shown in the serial

He owed the pigeons a big bag of channa.the concluding line cracked me up, I believe arnav will be indebted to those pigeons for life! and what a picture of his lopsided smile!

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Smita,

I had thought this was an OS. Now after reading this I feel like shouting YIPEEE! Now the problem is whether to have the daily small doses or the entire thing at one go.

I know I'll decide on the later but end up with the daily dose. So much for my resolve!!!