Taarey OS-Pyaar me Twist - Page 5

Originally posted by: sreeja_rox

hehehe i had started writing dis OS arnd 2 weeks pehle,aj jaake khatam hua😆Thank u soo mch dear😳

Hahaha.. lazy fellow..😊

Awesome...

It was awesome :D
The pakode scene and the catch..aww
But I want to know what happens after and what was swayam's reaction.. :(

Originally posted by: KunwarKiDeewani

Boring ?? Are u mad dis is amaazing Srsly sree u shud more often re :| y u soo lazy -.-
I actually wait 4 a pm from ur end - hopin ki koi naya Os/ff/ss ho 😃
I love ur imagination and dis one was also tooo goood :D
the best part was wen u described how dey were makin out ☺️
I maself cudnt stop blushin 😳

awww...thank u sooo much for such a lovely comment yaar!!! It feels a lot to me😳

Originally posted by: sreelu094

it was a very nice os👏

loved it completely😛

well i've a request-next time when u make an os please give atleast 10 punches to shivam from Rey's hand😃

well thanks for the pm 🤗

thanx dear...glad that u liked it😳 hahahaha ok next time 10 punches to shivam fixed😆

Originally posted by: mysticlover

nice one dear...

now a little busy to comment more...

thank u...not a prob!!!!😳

Originally posted by: Natasha.

Wow this was amazing sree, I love it especially the part where Rey order Taani to cook for him he so deserve that hot chilli 🤣 and omg the last part Rey on top of Taani uff, just superb. Hmm but bad timing on Swayam part 😳
Plz write a second part 😳

thank u so much for such a lovely comment yaar😊 hahahaha will try writing a second part😉

Originally posted by: nazmin_devil

Waooo sreeju..bht acha os tha.Luv naughtyness in d pakode wala scene:D...n lst prt wz jst owsum..dat kiss wala prt ;) it made me blushng...,aisa hi hot scene rehne se tb asli maza ata h:phehe .plz iska continue krna..i m eagerly waitng fr ur nxt os!!! U r jst superb in writting:)..

hahahahahahaha thank u...tu na tu hi rahegi hamesha!!!😆😆

Originally posted by: ...vibha...

res
though i am kriyaansh fan will read coz u wrote

oops meko nahi pata tha koi gal nahi mere liye padna to hoga😉

sree edited my comment on page 5 :)