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Suhaima Kazi

@.wanderlust.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Boring ?? Are u mad dis is amaazing Srsly sree u shud more often re :| y u soo lazy -.-
I actually wait 4 a pm from ur end - hopin ki koi naya Os/ff/ss ho 😃
I love ur imagination and dis one was also tooo goood :D
the best part was wen u described how dey were makin out ☺️
I maself cudnt stop blushin 😳

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Jerryberry

@Jerryberry

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

comment edited on page 1...😊😊

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sreelu094

@sreelu094

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

it was a very nice os👏

loved it completely😛

well i've a request-next time when u make an os please give atleast 10 punches to shivam from Rey's hand😃

well thanks for the pm 🤗

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

nice one dear...

now a little busy to comment more...

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marina

@Loveurlife1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

awww sreee it was amazing loved it

it was sooo cute wen they kissed

and it was not boring at all :)

😳

Edited by loveurlife - 13 years ago

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Wow this was amazing sree, I love it especially the part where Rey order Taani to cook for him he so deserve that hot chilli 🤣 and omg the last part Rey on top of Taani uff, just superb. Hmm but bad timing on Swayam part 😳
Plz write a second part 😳

Edited by Natasha. - 13 years ago

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Sreeja Nair

@sreeja_rox

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Jerryberry
Yipee me 1st...😊😊1st of all let me ask u sumthng...tujhe itna likhne ka tym kaha milta hai??? i feel so exhausted 2 sit nd write sumthng...nw coming back to the update... who the hell told u dat its boring???😡 it was sch a cute os... mujhe padne mein bahut maza aaya... kash aisa kch d3 mein hota...😛omg... the last part was awesum...it made me blush...why the hell did u stop it there???? wanted to see swayam's reactn...😆😆finally rey also realized dat hes in love wid taani...😊😛iska continuation hai kya???? If yes, m waiting...😊😛

hehehe i had started writing dis OS arnd 2 weeks pehle,aj jaake khatam hua😆Thank u soo mch dear😳

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nazmin_devil

@nazmin_devil

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Waooo sreeju..bht acha os tha.Luv naughtyness in d pakode wala scene:D...n lst prt wz jst owsum..dat kiss wala prt ;) it made me blushng...,aisa hi hot scene rehne se tb asli maza ata h:phehe .plz iska continue krna..i m eagerly waitng fr ur nxt os!!! U r jst superb in writting:)..

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Vibha

@...vibha...

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

res
though i am kriyaansh fan will read coz u wrote

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Nikhat

@blossom1234

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

res

--edited--

sorry sorry sorry,i am really sorry for editing it so late,bhool gayi thi😆😆

Buss usse pata na chale ke usi ki behan ke room me chad raha hu ab mai'."

loved this line🤣

awww,loved the Rey pipe se charh ke aana and saying sorry part,too cute

"Taani as the GS I order you to go and make some pakoda's for me!!!

yahaan bhi GS...o god,bohot acha hua mirchi laggi🤣🤣

Finally Rey caught her and pulled her by his arms towards her,but Taani tried pulling back from him but in the process she fell on the couch which was behind her.Rey fell on her while trying to give her balance.

OMG☺️☺️☺️

OMG OMG OMG...the kisss☺️☺️...Sreeju,What The Hell...u said it wasn't a hot OS...jhooti😡🤣🤣

"You are in love with Taani,Rey!!!!You are in love with Swayam's sister'!!!!"

i want this in the show now...the kiss and the confession,want it want it want it

Ufff...i loved every bit of this OS

Sreeju i just love the way u write👏👏

amazing amazing amazing OS⭐️

Edited by blossom1234 - 13 years ago