FF: IPK: A Baby for my Di...Thread 1 Complete

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A Baby for my DI...


Part 1

Arnav is standing by the glass door...looking in at his Di..feeling guilty...Its all my fault... I did this all... I should have been careful... Damn... He felt a hand on his shoulder... He didnt wanted to be touched... She should go or I she wont let me suffer...He turned to face her and removed her hand from his shoulder n said... Khushi...go home...you must be tired...
K: Arnavji... you are also tired... you should go home and..
A: Please Khushi...go home...im fine... please...
Khushi looks in his eyes...they were full of sadness and they had lost its spark... She could see him going back in his shell...and she was scared they were again loosing him... She nodded and left...

As soon as she left Garima came to the hospital...And came face to face with Dadi... Dadi saw her n said...Oh so now u are showing me ur face... If I tell Arnav what u did...he will not marry ur niece...
Garima...no please dont do this...you know shes innocent...
Dadi: I will tell Arnav...your niece is bad luck for our house...see the min she enters our Anjali lost her child...Shes like you...only know how to break homes...get lost from here...i dont want to see your or your nieces face again... Crying Garima leaves...

Dadi turns and sees Arnav... He had been silently listening to their conversation and asks dadi...what were you telling Aunty and why is she so upset?

Dadi: so much has happened I dont want to tell u anything...

A: Dadi I want to know...NOW...what were u two talking about...

Dadi...with a smile in her heart...conti...well if u should know... this woman...garima...shes the reason your mom committed suicide...And you are going to marry her niece...

Blood drained from Arnavs face...fuming...clutching his fists...you are lying...you never wanted me to marry khushi in the first place and now you have found an excuse...

Dadi...didnt let him complete...NO...im telling u what happened 14 yrs back...Garima is the reason why ur mom committed suicide...believe it or not...And she walked away...

Arnav was shattered...he didnt need all this now...not now... His di had suffered the greatest loss n he can never reimburse her for it and now this...It was as if his whole life had crashed on him...

Devastated he ran to GH... and was standing by window when he heard Garima telling Khushi...it is all my fault...and for my sins you will have to suffer and pay...
K: Amma what are you saying... I dont understand...
A:Opened the door and came n stood in between Khushi and garima and asked... What ever my dadi said...is it true?? Plz tell me its not true...

Garima: what she said did happen ...but...

A: raising his hand dadis way and said..enough...I cant believe u never told me this...
G: How did I know who you were...I didnt know u were the Maliks...u never use that name...

A:cutting in...if all this true then I can not marry your daughter...i dont want anything to do with her...

He turned to face her and saw her disbelieving n shattered face and said... I cant marry u...Ur aunty broke my parents marriage and u are somehow responsible for the breakage of my Dis marriage...My dadi is right...you are not fit to be my wife...

Tears running down khushis face...she was mum...
Garima...what did u say??? I didnt not break their marriage...

A: Enough...i wont hear anything else...im here to tell you that the wedding is off...and I have nothing to do with any of you and walks out...

Khushi just sank on the floor...Garima ran to gather her in her arms n said...i didnt break their marriage...he has misunderstood it all...Why did dadi said I broke his parents marriage...


Darkness had fallen over RH... the baby was lost...Wedding was stopped...Nanji was very upset... Arnav was aloof and he had distanced himself from everyone... He was missing her so much...but no...he must be strong...shes no good for me or my family...

Dadi was all the time saying..call damaad ji ...call damaad ji... Anjali needs him now...only he can look after her n condole her...its cause hes not here all this has happened...

Arnav was admand... Dadi shyam will never enter RH or my Di's life...


5 Days later:
The doc checked Anjali and saw how depressed she was...Went out and took Arnav to one side and said...You need to keep her happy and take care of her... IM sorry to tell you this but that fall has damaged your sisters ovaries and now she can never have a baby... and the best thing for her will be to adopt a baby...this will help her to heal n for her to come out of her depression...

Arnav: A baby...u mean if my Di has a baby to look after she will be fine...i mean any baby??

Doc: yes ...if you can adopt a baby for her...it will be great for her...

Arnav...i dont need to adopt it...ill... Thanks doc...

Arnav thanked the doc and walked out and reached GH...He saw Buaji and Garima caring bags and keeping them out... They both stopped when they saw him... Arnav...i want to talk to Khushi... Buaji was about to speak but he walked in and went straight in her room...

Everything in the room was packed... the walls cleared of all her posters...all bare...no signs of happiness or life... She was standing folding her clothes...

He had missed her so much...the past 5 days of not looking or touching her had been torture for him... He wanted to just take her in his arms and hug her tight and forget everything...

She turned..sensing his presence.. and took a step back... What?? Why are you here... Dont worry we are leaving ur house... I wont allow the likes of u to throw us out...We will leave before that...

A: What? Why are you leaving??? this is your house...in ur name...

K:Angry now...No...its not my house... you paid for it... I never wanted it..and I dont want anyones charity '. We will be leaving soon...

Arnav moved forward and grabbed her arm...and turned her to face him...Look at me when im talking to you... you are not going anywhere...And where will u go with ur sick father... Let them stay here... and you work for it... I have a proposition for u ' Ill let you stay here and for that I want something from you...

Khushi looking at him in awe...what?? A deal...another contract?? Are you serious...i rather die...

A: If you die who will look after ur family? He is well aware of her weakness...

You agree to my conditions and your family wont have to move from here and if you dont...ill make ur life hell and theirs too..

Khushi with tears in her eyes...Why are you doing this? Why?? I wish I had never met you...
A: wishing wont get you anything... I want to save my Di..and for that I will go to any length...

Hearing Dis name Khushi asked... how is she? is she alright...

Arvan saw/heard the concern in her eyes n voice for his di n said... She can never have another baby now... and I want a baby for her...and I want you to have a baby for her... my baby...

Khushi is shocked beyond belief...what the??? What will be khushis reply...Will she agree to this??What would u want her to do??? When she has the baby will they kick her out?? Reminds me of the Pakistani drama im watching these days...Kaash main tari beti na hoti...(Wish I was not ur daughter)


Im crying as I write..dammit cvs...dammit for making me fall in love with the Arshi's and then doing this to us...Dont comment if u dont want to...thanks...
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RsRIK-02qU[/YOUTUBE]

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8RsRIK-02qUMy Treasure

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Edited by Fazila~ - 11 years ago


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lazylad8-FauZi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😉 OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! Another contract!!!!!!!!

The thing is...Khushi loves Arnav, there is no way she can deny it. She loves Di too. She has always blamed herself for everything that happens to everyone else. Including the fact that Di lost her baby.

She will agree to the contract!!!!!!!
Edited by lazylad8 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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As I read your SS Fuzzy, I could feel your pain with each paragraph, your tears pouring over each word, each emotions. You have bonded with how many of us feel on this sad day for IPKKND.
Do you know what your SS did to me? It terrified me and scared me half to death. Why? Because as you outlined the story and the direction it kept ringing in my ears, OMG, this could really happen. This is something that Gul and Co. might accomplish completely. Why?
Isn't that what CV always do in IPKKND?? Punish the innocent as they have done time and time again with Khushi. And reward evil, as they have done time and time again. No matter how evil and disgusting Shyam actions have been he still walks around and never paid for his action to any degree.
Your point with ASR is right on the money also. This is actually what ASR would do. He cannot live without her so tie her to him so he has control over her again. Rip her heart out one more time. I never believed that ASR married Khushi for any other reason the first time but that he love/hate her. He would again do this to her.
What else is IPPKND good at doing? Frostering MU!! They are absolutely perfect at starting MU within MU and dragging them out for months. Yes, that would work also.
You did a beautiful job on your SS Fuzzy.👏👏 But it scares me because every word could be a shadow of the future of IPKKND. I am also writing in black b/c it fits my mood.
Edited by Punkin22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you Fuzzy for your wonderful writing. It is sad now. but it could happen...another way of soch I guess. Loved it.❤️

As for my opinion, Khushi should not say yes so quickly, instead she could turn around and take total control of the situation. I think. Fuzzy, please take it from here and continue please. 😊
Edited by tamannausa - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg this is beautiful .

please please continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept
khushi loves them both, so she prob will do it
Cant believe arnav made another deal
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great story
please continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fuzzy please dont be so depressed. we all love our show and just be patient; all will be well
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Poor khushi
Please let her not ruin her life
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great story
continue soon
thanks for the pm

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