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Xaffi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Omg... Please cont soon.. That was amazing..

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choochootrain

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Tis cld happen on e show...i remembered reading tat kushi will lose EVERYTHING...

Ur story is heartbreakg.. got tears in my eyes reading it...possibly damn cvs will do tis or even worse..feel disappointd n cheated wit cvs...

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Sweta...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Omg this is such a goood concept! I can't believe this another contract... And that to to have his child :O like what?? :O but obvsss I reckon she'll do it... Like to see if she stays with him for the 9 months and whether they get back close to each other., awhhh plzzz update fast... Thanks for the pmtoo :)

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Daayan Bai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Wow Fuzzy what an amazing consept by you!This has totally drained me physically and mentally.The pain could be felt with your every word.This has got me feeling so haunted that I can't but help think that what if it does go down this route in the show,another contract for Khushi to abide by with more scaifice and heart ache for Khushi to live with.Knowing Khushi's sacrificing nature she probably will agree to this proposition by Arnav but will love to read your next to see how the drama unfolds so please do continue and keep us updated.👏🤗

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Deepa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

brilliantly written.i could feel everything

thanks for the pm😉

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Ayesha Ahmed

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

She will agree.. Poor thing always gets trapped..nice concept

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Katelyn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Awesome writing!! 👏 It is so heartwrenching. This brought me to tears. Again Arnav is sacraficing his own happiness for his Di and family. I think Khushi will do the same and accept his contract. After all she loves both Arnav and Di!!

You are spot on with this concept and it is highly possible that the CVs may go in this direction! I would love to read more, so please do continue! Thanks for the PM!

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Mariam

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

That was beautifully written...

loved it!!

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Tia.0

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Fuzzy, what I really want Khushi to do is punch Arnav in the face and walk out with her parents. No one has to live life with a man like this who treats you like an object. Basically what he is asking Khushi is to sell her womb for her family. She is better off selling her body to a stranger than this from the man who claimed to love her.

This is shameless and immoral. He expects her to give birth to a child and to give it away to another woman. He is punishing her for an incident that happened when she was 8 and had no control over it and he is punishing her for his Di's broken marriage with the guy who tried to murder him. So no, if Khushi says yes to this, I'm sorry I won't be able to read this story.