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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 3

Khushi opened her eyes... the knock came again...

Khushi ... Payaliya has been calling u for a long time now... Wake up... Khushi sat up and was about to jump from the bed and her hand felt the tug and she turned to see... It was still held by Arnav... He was wide awake .. She motioned him with her head... N he shaking his head refused to led go...

Buaji... Sanka Devi... Why is ur door locked ...
Hearing buajis voice Arnav also set up and let go of her hand...
Khushi ran to the door and opened a bit and took her cell from her...
Buaji.. Call payliya...
Khushi shut the door and looked straight at Arnav n said .. Please leave... So I can tell my jiji that u have already left...

Arnav stood looking at her for a few mins and turned n was walking away when she added...tears in her eyes...I won't be keeping my window open tonight '

Arnav turned and said... We'll see... And was about to leave when his cell rang and he answered ... He turned and said I'll tell her that... He hanged up and said ... That was ur jiji... Naniji wants u home...Ill come from the front to get u...and he disappeared from the window...

Khushi got ready and went out...and the door bell rang...She ran to ans...found Arnav there...He greeted her and said..Naniji wants you home...

Garima moved forward and came in between Khuhis and Arnav and said... why? I will not let my daughter be used by others anymore...What more does my daughter needs to hear?? Dont think I dont know whats happening in RH...I have been blamed...my daughters wedding being called off...why should she come with u? Shes not related to u or any of the Raizada's anymore...Shes not ur wife anymore...

Arnav looked at khushi...not my wife...FB...Morning:waking up beside her...both cuddled in each others arms...never have they woken up like this...Its better Aunty doesnt know he was here since last night...He saw khushis nose turning red...Yes shes thinking the same thing...

He turned and said...Naniji wants her...thats why I have come to get her...

Garima...Will you protect her? shes not going with u...Buaji will also go with you..

Buaji was sitting on the sofa with her hand on her head...i have a terrible headache...

Arnavs cell rang again...He answered..It was Naniji..and this time he handed the phone to Garima...

Naniji convinced her that Khushi will be fine and she had some imp work with her...Garima was hesitant but she couldnt say no to naniji...

Arnav and Khushi were in the car...when the cell rang again...Arnav answered and it was Naniji...she spoke n hanged up...Khushi looked at him and asked with her eyes...what? He shaking his head...nothing...And he reached for her hand and drove to RH...

Both reached the RH and found dadi fuming ... pacing the floor ...Waiting for them...The min they got inside she blasted at Khuhsi...ur just like ur aunt...She ruined my son's life...got them killed...ur just like ur Aunty...living with a man without marrying him...Arnav jumped in to protect her...

Dadi dont talk to her like this...

Dadi...U are protecting her...her aunt is responsible for the death of ur mother...This information froze Arnav...

A: you are lying...you are not happy with our relationship...thats y u are saying all this...

Dadi...No, im not lying garima was the woman who cause ur mom to suicide...go and ask her...

Khushi also froze at the spot...

Arnav...Dadi...why are you doing this...

Dadi..this is the truth...ASk your wife..will she take her husbands side or her Aunts...

Khuhis was quietly listening to all of them blaming her Amma...spoke up...My Amma is not like that...and shes not my aunt...shes my Amma..and you cant blame her for anything...shes not here right now to defend herself from all the acquisitions...So stop it all of u...

Dadi...See Arnav...she will not take ur side..she will take her mothers side...

Arnav fuming now...Dadi stop it and stop making this worst...

Dadi...ask her...ask ur beloved wife...if what I say is true...whos side will she take...urs or her Ammas...

Arnav...of course she will take my side...he turned and looked at her... Khushi...ans me...whos side will u take...mine right???

Khuhis is in a dilemma...whos side will she take...her Ammas or Arnavs???

SS: IPK: A Baby for my Di...Part 4

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

I have been waiting for your pm. I knew you would work out Friday's episode through your writing and you have done a exceptional job. Dynamic emotions are filtered through each paragraph. You have crawled inside Arnav and Khushi's head and read their thoughts and feelings perfectly.

This would make the best 2 episodes IPKKND has had in 7 months. It is a window into the past when Arnav and Khushi could not stand to be together or apart. And when they came together raw emotions were released. Stunning read.

I believe Fuzzy, this is the mode that will happen now in IPKKND. ASR is back with a bang and he has a deal. Doesn't he always but Khushi is smart now, she has learned to deal too!! That was a smart direction dear.

With the fighting separation of Khushi and Arnav this could bring the most intense passionate emotions between these two as you have shown brilliantly. We don't have just attraction now we have love and personal knowledge of what it feels like to have each others hands on their body. This could be magic.

The unconditional love is shown perfectly in your writing. Hate/love cannot be revealed any better that your post. I pray that Gul & Co. will go this route, it could be a masterpiece Fuzzy.

This is as far as I am concerned your very best work. Excellent my friend.

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 Stars

Edited by Punkin22 - 12 years ago