I have been waiting for your pm. I knew you would work out Friday's episode through your writing and you have done a exceptional job. Dynamic emotions are filtered through each paragraph. You have crawled inside Arnav and Khushi's head and read their thoughts and feelings perfectly.
This would make the best 2 episodes IPKKND has had in 7 months. It is a window into the past when Arnav and Khushi could not stand to be together or apart. And when they came together raw emotions were released. Stunning read.
I believe Fuzzy, this is the mode that will happen now in IPKKND. ASR is back with a bang and he has a deal. Doesn't he always but Khushi is smart now, she has learned to deal too!! That was a smart direction dear.
With the fighting separation of Khushi and Arnav this could bring the most intense passionate emotions between these two as you have shown brilliantly. We don't have just attraction now we have love and personal knowledge of what it feels like to have each others hands on their body. This could be magic.
The unconditional love is shown perfectly in your writing. Hate/love cannot be revealed any better that your post. I pray that Gul & Co. will go this route, it could be a masterpiece Fuzzy.
This is as far as I am concerned your very best work. Excellent my friend.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 Stars
Edited by Punkin22 - 13 years ago
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