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Posted: 13 years ago
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thank you so so much.😊 and yes i will pm you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand1234

Awesome!! :D

I really liked the idea :)


chand i met you at cgm forum and you from then kept reading my ff when some people abandoned it.you have a special place in my heart.love you.😳
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chapter-1-my earliest memories,i held a tainted hand.
it was a cold evening.a small girl was roaming in the snowy field.she turned back.she saw a beautiful mansion though she could hardly understood what it was.suddenly a voice came to her ears.
voice-i am scared...
girl got shocked,she saw here and there but there was no one.it was a girl's voice though.she sat on the snow.she was hardly five years old covered in snow.it was really cold evening.she saw here and there but there was no one.she didn't know where to go,whom to meet,what to say.she was very scared.suddenly a person came from behind.
she turned...he was a very young man.
man-are you lost little angel?
girl couldn't understood...
girl-ah...suddenly she screamed.she screamed because she saw his eyes colours changing.it turned from coal black to hot blood red.
man-i hope you are lost because i am gonna eat you...and he showed her his fangs.girl got so scared that she fell on the snow.
girl-ah...she closed her eyes.
suddenly she heard some words.
boy-you are disgrace to all vampires.
the girl opened her eyes.she saW a beautiful boy torn apart that man into pieces.
boy turned back.his eyes was red just like the man and he too had fangs.that boy smiled at her.
girl was not scared at all,she was surprised to see him.
boy was like 15 years old or something.
he came to her and gave her his hand.
boy-come...
girl without any fear gave him her hand.she felt that his hand was very cold.the boy's face was very sad.so sad that even that girl could feel his emotions.that boy hugged her tightly and said some magical words.
boy-no one can harm you as long as i am alive.
alarm rings...ring ring******ring ring***
pia opens her eyes.
pia-ah...(scared)
misha gets up-hey pia,theek to ho,kya hua koi nightmare dekha?
pia-nahin bas kuch purani yaadein.she saw the time.shit are baap re muzhe jaana hoga,muzhe duty deni hain,night class bas nikal he rahe hoge,agar mein wahan nahin pahunchi to bas aaj ye day class ke girls night class boys ko chodenge nahin.
misha-just hold on pia,kya baat hain?tum aur rohit pure night guardians ke duty karte ho aur phir itne subah subah,chakkar kya hain.
pia thinks-ab tumhe kya bataun misha...
pia-oh no...please misha baad mein abhe jaana hoga.shit and pia rushed to wear her uniform.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Uurrgghhh 😡 too short !! 😭 but lovely 😳
Do continue ! 😡 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: piya_anshian

Uurrgghhh 😡 too short !! 😭 but lovely 😳
Do continue ! 😡 😆


i promise next one will be long and in next chapter whole night class will be introduced.he he...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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rajeev sehgal-dead father of ranbeer sehgal.was a very compassionate and kind vampire.he was also king of all vampires.died very mysteriously.no vampire knows of his death.(haruka kuran in original story)
prerna sehgal-dead mother of ranbeer.was very chirpy,she was like a light in darkness.died very mysteriously(juuri kuran in actual story)
those who know the story please don't spoil it for others.
shashanka gupta-best friend of ranbeer and knows his many secrets.also belongs to highest noble race of vampire and grandson of director of vampire council that suppresses monarchy.(takuma ichijo in original story).ho ho ho...(i think those who read the manga know this ho ho ho...waiting for sara??😆)
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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way mahadev and sati yahan bhi??mere parvati kahan hai??
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aru_86

way mahadev and sati yahan bhi??mere parvati kahan hai??


he he he ...😆 well...dekho...😳.mohit and mouni are perfect for the roles of haruka and juuri.😳
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter-2-a rule that puts a barrier
pia reached the night dorm gate.
pia-pia tu to aaj gaye.she saw thousands of day class girls and boys were screaming.they were just like fans of big celebrities.they were fans of night class.they were absolutely crazy about them.
one girl-ranbeer,ranbeer i love you...
pia not pleased at this.
second girl-shyam...you are so hot.
one boy-priya,priya will you go on a date with me?
one girl-aaa...ii...i love you...
pia-oh no,mere aane se pehle he aur ye rohit kahan reh gaya,zarur kumbhkaran kharaate maar ke so raha hoga.i have to handle them otherwise night class will get angry.unke class bas khatam he hone waale hain.
pia whistled loudly.every stopped.
pia-okay...she shouted-its the curfew for day class students.you are not allowed to roam around night class dorms.
one girl-shut up disciplinary committee...
next girl-ah yuvraj...
pia-shut up aur line mein lag jaon.just spread yourself.
she started pushing them but those girls were just too hard to handle.
pia-ah...just stay back.of ho rohit where are you?it was a very chaotic situation.she thinks-oh no if night class president sees this he is gonna be so mad and i just can't see that.i can't see him in any problems.
suddenly she heard the sound of opening of the gate.she turned back and saw the gate was about to open.then she turned and saw every student of day class lined themselves in both sides so to make a good impression on them.
pia stunned face,she thinks-wow...achanak itna discipline.
the gate got opened.the night class students were there.
pia still stunned face got away from their way saying-be my guest...
😆
the whole night class even after waking up all night was looking so fresh and beautiful.all the night class students were drop dread gorgeous.
first vivan came out.
vivan-good morning girls,did you dream about me last night?(he actually thought himself as a celebrity)
girls screamed-yes...
vivan-well okay then,i will give a detour tonight in pia's dreams.your it.
pia-hain???...😕
every girl got highly jealous of her.😡
pia got angry.😡 as well as 😕 and (vivan always did these idiotic things to make pia angry as he got pleasure in these mischieves)
pia got sided,night class students came out and started going back to their dorms.
while they were walking every one was shouting their name.
vivan was shouting as well-i love you,yes yes i will call you,oh my ladies.
shyam from behind-vivan,don't you get irritated by all this screaming??
vivan-nah,after all they are my fangirls.
shyam-fangirls,be realistic...
vivan-you are just jealous my brother.
one girl-ranbeer...date me.
priya grinned her teeth.
pia saw priya coming towards her.pia always admired priya's beauty.pia waved at her but priya neglected her totally.pia got sad but its okay for her.
one girl got so so intimidated that she pushed down pia to the ground.
pia-ah...and ran to hug shyam.
shyam-ah...hey what are you doing?
vivan got jealous of it.
girl-please please just one hug.
shyam-okay and he hugged her to get rid of her and she fainted.
pia-oh no...
pia to other girl-hey you girl just go..suddenly someone came from behind and touched her shoulder.she turned back,it was the person whom pia admired the most in this world,her saviour,her hero.she always admired him but couldn't tell him that.
ranbeer-are you okay pia?
pia stunned to see him,every time he came in front of her her heart started beating really fast.
pia's flashback
boy-come...and she reminded giving her hand to him.
pia stared at his eyes suddenly she realized all the girls and boys were staring at them.
pia got up quickly on her own.
pia-yes mr.ranbeer,a day class guardian should be strong.
ranbeer got up and came towards her.
ranbeer-i don't understand why you avoid me like this?i can't remember when this barrier came between us.
pia-no its not ranbeer,actually you are my saviour and also night class president.i don't wanna show myself weak and stupid in front of you.you are the one who saved me at that snowy evening.
ranbeer smiled-you still think of that,he touched her face very lovingly...hmm..it was so long time ago.suddenly someone came and removed his hands from her face very rudely.
pia-rohit...😡
rohit-you should go back to your dorm sehgal.😡
ranbeer chuckled-you are so scary mr.disciplinary committee.see you around pia
priya was grinning at this whole situation and every night class student was shocked at the rude behaviour of rohit because no one dared to talk ranbeer like that.
as ranbeer walked away piya saw him with her sad eyes.
rohit suddenly shouted-you everyone just go back to your dorms(to day class students),those students quickly ran away as they were very scared of rohit.
rohit-roz roz ye screaming aur kya kya mere sar mein dard kar dete hain suddenly pia started poking him...
piya-why are you acting so cocky you jerk,its our job to control them,why were you not on time??😡
rohit-oh yeah,well i can say the same thing about you,ah...you are so predictable thats disgusting.
piya-what?😕
rohit-i know you like ranbeer and thats not my buisness but remember the rules,night class and day class can't meet together,can't even talk together.just remember the rules,this is a forbidden thing.
pia-shut up..i know what are you talking about and i know what they are??they are different from us.
as ranbeer was walking suddenly he stopped near a tree.
ranbeer chuckled-i am sry i kept you waiting rajni.
rajni quickly jumped down-at your orders my lord(she bowed)
ranbeer and rajni together went to their dorms.(these dorms are like hostels,there are two dorms of night class and day class,these dorms are called sun dorms and night dorms)

okay those who have already read the story i know that i am copying too much but its just for beginning,i will not copy and try to make it in my own imagination.thank you.
Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks honey,if possible then please give long comments.😳

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