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Posted: 13 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: lucykaede


chand i met you at cgm forum and you from then kept reading my ff when some people abandoned it.you have a special place in my heart.love you.😳


Aww...thank you so much!! 🤗
I've always wanted to write long comments for your ff's , but time has never permitted me to do so 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: chand1234


Aww...thank you so much!! 🤗
I've always wanted to write long comments for your ff's , but time has never permitted me to do so 😭


don't worry honey your presence is enough for me.all cgm people have special place in my heart.the love i got there was unbelievable.i still don't feel that closeness in other forums.😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aah...finisht reading all the chapters :)
Nice updates.! This pureblood reminded me of vampire dreams...your ff on the cgm forum...;)
Update soon :)
Edited by chand1234 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand1234

Aah...finisht reading all the chapters :)
Nice updates.! This pureblood reminded me of vampire dreams...your ff on the cgm forum...;)
Update soon :)


vampire dreams,yes i remember,i took the pureblood concept from vampire knight so this is the original one,vampire dreams had two parts,second arc i ended abruptly because of time.i am still sad on that part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: aru_86

chanakya and durdhara bi..cool


thank you,yes chanakya aur durdhara bhe aa gaye lekin unka characters bahut he ...ahm ahm..😆
jo readers story jaante hain unhe pata hain ke sara kitne mahan ladki hain.😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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chapter-5-betrayed trust but love remains the same.
priya went outside ranbeer's room and bowed her head.she waited for i hour for ranbeer to respond.
from inside the room,ranbeer-if i don't respond are you gonna wait all day?come inside.
priya came,ranbeer was laying on his couch.
priya came to him and give him his books that were on floor.
ranbeer-thank you.
priya came to him-my lord,the great prince,for so many years i wanted to ask you this but couldn't get enough courage.
ranbeer-what is it?
priya-my lord,will you accompany me to the ball?
ranbeer first silent and then smiled-i wish i could my ally but i am really sry,i decided to go with someone else.
priya-but every year you escape this event so with whom you are going this week?i am sry if i sounded rude.
ranbeer-no its okay,i don't want to make you guys think i am a commanding prince though its our,the sehgal's pride.i wanna follow my father's footsteps who was the most compassionate person i ever saw.
priya smiled-i can understand,you gave me this much time is an honour for me.thank you.
ranbeer smiled,priya though disappointed was happy to be alone with ranbeer for sometime.outside shyam was standing.
priya hugged shyam to his surprise.priya started crying.
shyam-what happened priya?
priya-i don't understand why he can't accept my feelings.😭
shyam-maybe because your blood is not enough for him and remember that a pureblood lives for eternity but vampires like us are not immortal.we have a certain time limit.
priya sad.😭
in night...
piya and rohit in night were standing on roof of sun dorm.piya could clearly see ranbeer from there in his class standing and reading a book.
piya remembers-i don't know when this barrier came between us.
piya thinks-the day you betrayed my trust ranbeer.
flashback...when piya was 14 years old.
rohit and pia just started their friendship.they were roaming around.
rohit-pia this is night dorm,you idiotic hero is gonna attend it as well.
pia-yeah he told me,i should visit him.
rohit-no...he held pia's hand.there are vampires,i can't let you go there.
pia-don't worry they are not gonna hurt me,you know how much ranbeer and i are close.don't worry.pia left.rohit just saw her going away from him.
pia entered the door as it was open.
shashanka saw her.
shanky-oh hello pia.
pia shocked.
shanky-ranbeer is not here.
pia-when he is gonna come?
shanky-i don't know but you should go now.
pia-no i will wait for him.
shanky-okay as you wish,come sit here.
pia sat on a sofa.
suddenly two kids(same age as pia)came there running.
priya-vivan give back my book.
vivan-no way,first you apologize to me.
priya-there is no way i am gonna apologize to you.
pia-whats going on?
priya-hey what are you doing here at night dorm?
vivan-oh girls girls girls,he sat besides pia and placed his hand around her shoulder.
pia-hey😡
vivan-you came to share your blood with me right
pia-www.what??bbb.blood?
vivan-oh ho,don't be so shy,i know you just can't resist me but don't worry i am not gonna disappoint you.in her ears-i am actually very good kisser.
pia gets up-hhh..vivan please,don't irritate me.
priya-yes vivan,she is not of our status.we are aristocrats,she is a miserable human thats it.
pia-you are really beautiful miss priya.i really like you.
priya shocked.😲pia kindly smiled at her.
priya-huh...and she left.
vivan-so where were we?
pia-ah i am here to meet ranbeer.
vivan stared at her in anger.😡
pia-what?😕
vivan-nothing🤢 and he left.
pia-strange...she waited almost 3 hrs for ranbeer but he didn't came so she felt asleep there.
this one is not in flashback of pia as she was sleeping while it happened.
ranbeer came...as he entered the room he saw his angel sleeping on the couch.
ranbeer-pia...he ran towards her.he was about to wake her up when suddenly the bloodlust went upon him,he wanted her blood really bad,as he was about to bite her,someone catched him from behind.
priya hugged him from behind-no...do you really wanna drink her blood as it is against the rules my lord.if you are that hungry you can drink my blood if it tames your thirst.
ranbeer-there is no one in the world except pia who can tame my thirst still for her safety i will drink your blood.
ranbeer took priya to his room,shyam saw this and got highly jealous still he couldn't do anything about it.ranbeer saw shyam and told him to stand outside his door so that no one can come.
back to flashback of pia.
pia gets up...
pia-huh...someone covered me,ranbeer must be back,i should go and meet him in his room but where is his room???she wondered,she went upstairs and saw shyam standing outside a room.
pia-mr.shyam..
shyam-hmm...
pia-is ranbeer back?
shyam-yes he is inside but you can't go there.
pia-no i should go.
ranbeer telepathically told him to let her enter.
shyam-okay you go.
as pia was about to open to door she heard...
priya-ah...
pia-huh...miss priya...
as she opened the door she saw the most cruel thing ranbeer could do to her.
she saw ranbeer's eyes red as he was drinking blood from priya.
he rudely pushed piya to the floor.
pia so scared that she screamed.
pia started crying and ran from there.
outside flashback
ranbeer in his mind-run away pia,run away from a cruel monster like me,live in your sunny dream as I WILL SHOW YOU A SWEET DREAM NEXT TIME.
present time...
pia came out of her thoughts.he tiny drop of tear fell from her eyes.
pia thinks-you have done very cruel things but even if you betray me my trust and love for you will never change.i love you.
rohit-stop staring at ranbeer your hero.
pia-hey i am not staring at him.😡
rohit-oh yeah...😡 i think i know it very well,whenever he comes you just start doing weird things like shy and stuff.
pia-oof...by the way the things look normal tonight,nothing much is going right now.hey rohit are you going to ball this week?
rohit-we have to,we are on duty.
pia-no not this time,dad told me that only you are on duty.😛
rohit-what??why??
pia-dad told me there is a surprise for me.
rohit-hmmm...ah ah.
pia-rohit...what happened?
rohit-go back,go away pia.
pia-rohit,she touched him.
rohit-don't touch me.ah...he screamed...
in night class.
yuvi-huh,whats this noise?
ranbeer chuckled...
shanky-sounds like rohit is screaming.
mukta-but why??
vivan-i think the curse is finally pushing him into darkness.
ranbeer-you are right vivan,darkness is our thing,we can't escape it,night is made for us.
priya-but still you allowed him to live.whats the reason?
ranbeer-enjoy this.😈

yume fans will get their doze soon,patience give more sweet fruits right.😳

Edited by lucykaede - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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your welcome honey,i hope you enjoyed it.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: lucykaede


he is a funny character in the story.your username makes me wonder that you are pkyek fan.hmm..you must be missing your show.right??story's pace is gonna change and so is characters.😉

Yeah..i'm missing them😭ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucykaede


your welcome honey,i hope you enjoyed it.😳

yeah😊

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