Pyaar Kismat Mein Nahiye2 NOTE PG 130 - Page 83

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Posted: 18 years ago
hahahahaaaa my pooooor sisi shazuuuu!!!!laiba tell ur angu darling 2 hav sum mannners 😆 😆 😉 ...jk....anyway it was awsome as always!!!!!


Iqra 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks for ur wonderful comments,heres the next part

Special episode (last part)

Kripa and shaz were out while angad and josh were sitting with the kids.they were speaking in baby language with them rahul and khushi came down insisted on doing face painting on angadand josh which they got there way in,in the end angad had a donkey face and josh had a pig face,rahul and khushi went back home with there mom and dad,angad and josh finally got there babies to sleep,they put on the tv and were watching football whe angad smelt sumthing

Angad-ewww wats that

Josh-that is ur son he needs nappy changing

Angad-shit pls josh mere madat kart u nappy change karle pls

Josh-tum sab ne mughe kya samaj rakha hai ke tum bas kahoge aur mein karoonga

Angad-erm ha

Josh-what

Angad-I mena na yaar dekho tum prateek ko bhi apna bacha mante ho hai na

Josh-ha lekin tum ko tumhari zimadariya puri karni hogi

Angad-kya josh,tike hailekin tum bhi ao mere saat

Josh-kisliye

Angad-support

Josh-oh ok chal

Anagd changed the nappy and asked josh to get a new one but there were none left so in da end angad wrapped a towel round prateek forming it like a nappy,the kids woke up wen the football team England scored a goal against Portugal,angad and josh yelled in joy caring the kids,they quitened down the kids but the kids didn't so angad changed te channel and saw tweenies was on,the kids started smiling,angad and josh not willinly had to watch the kiddy program that's when they heard the answer phone

Answer phone-hey shaz and kripa,its me dino im sorry I cudnt make it yesterday but ill be there in abit u gus might've already set off but im on my way and were gonna have a blast I promise and yeah shaz I got those chocalates u wanted ad kripa I got those photos of us

Angad na djosh angrily looked at each other

Angad-that dino

Josh-vo vahi hai hai na fireman

Angad-ha lekin vo hamare biwi ke sat kya karrahai

Josh-ha

Angad-I no hes probably trying to snatch them off us

Josh-ok anagd shut up

Angad-hey I know always used to be afta married woman

Josh-ab kya kare

Angad-lets go

Josh-club lekin bache

Angad-we bought carseats right

Josh-ha

Angad-then cum

In the car they put there kids on the carseats when they smell it again

Angad-its pia

Josh-stop here theres a nappy store

Angad-isnt it shut

Josh-10 mins left

Angad goes in the store to get the nappy he takes a pack and cums bak he takes the towel off prateek and throws it away,he gets a napy out and gives one to josh and takes one himself

Josh-angad theyre oo big theyre 4 toddlers

Angad-well I didt know

Josh-wait ill go

Josh goes and cus bak with the nappies

Angad-josh theyre to small

Josh-well I tried

Angad-ab kya

Josh-il go again

Thyere were bout to go when the lady closes the shop

Angad-erm I have two towels here

Josh-fine

They use the new towels once again,they then head to the club,remeba theyre stil got painted faces,they get out the car angad holds pia and josh holds prateek,theyre goinside and find shaz and kripa on the stage dancing madly,theyre were singing:

alright, play, play the music DJ
he's got the skill the way
i love to do show me
Show me the money

Everyone my love, sure enough tumhe mil jaayega...
Every pay my bill mera ye dil tera ho jaayega
Money show me the money, ha ah
Everyone romance, nahi koi chance
Oh lets do wanna spend...
Emotion's out Money is in, yehi hai latest trend
Money show me the money

Ae aa ooh, dil chaahe paisa
ae aa ooh life mein kuch to ho aisa

(Paisa, kaisa kaisa, paisa
Saradushi paisa, saara jahaan chaahe ye paisa haan haan ye paisa) - 2

everyone's have fun, listen humdum
yehi ek rasta hai
jo naa aaye, to pachtaaye
ki sauda sasta hai
Money show me the money

everyone want my pyaar, mera dildaar
show me your credit card
Money show me the money
gimme lots of checks, suno sexy
gimme ur party card
Money show me the money

Ae aa ooh, dil chaahe paisa
ae aa ooh life mein kuch to ho aisa

(Paisa, kaisa kaisa, paisa
Saradushi paisa, saara jahaan chaahe ye paisa haan haan ye paisa) - 2

Show me the money

no no, no no no, i don't play
towards towards money
you'll be now move'n ur body, roki'n ur body
catch them, no no , move them, no no stop them
baby now move'n ur body, roki'n ur body

Pyaar ki na mohabbat ki,
na khushi mujhko chaahat ki
Chaah mujhko hai daulat ki

everyone my heart, you gonna start
ah normal fancy thing
i want to look caz always gud
i want a diamond ring

Money show me the money

Ae aa ooh, dil chaahe paisa
ae aa ooh life mein kuch to ho aisa

(Paisa, kaisa kaisa, paisa
Saradushi paisa, saara jahaan chaahe ye paisa haan haan ye paisa) - 2

Afta this angad and josh went to there wife and told the dg to stop da music

Dg-why u the boss

Angad-hello im angad khannah

Dg-angad khannah doesn't lok lyke a donkey

Angad then remebas he has paint face on

They go up to the girls

Angad-chal kripa

Josh-come shaz

Shaz-who r u

Kripa-and what do u want

Angad-hey its us

Shaz-us who

Jsoh and angad drags the girls with the babies out.

Kripa-yeh kya batemeezi hai,u know who my husband is hes angad khannah hel kill u

Angad-oi its e kripa

Kripa-liar

Angad-then whose the kid

Josh-shaz prateek

Kripa/shaz-(laughing)hahhh

Kripa-ur faces

Josh-its that rahul and khushi stop laughing and lets go Home

They al go home

2 years l8er

The kids r now two yrs old and arevery mischeviouspia is already in to make up her bday was a few days ago with prateek,prateek had a guitar cake which kripa didn't lyke and pia had a lipgloss cake which josh didn't lyke.dino had become a general visitor angad and josh still hated him.taht night the girls were in the salon and the kids were in the bed sleeping angad and josh had coffee in the kitchen

Angad-josh do u think kripa wud

Josh-agree 4 anotha kid

Angad-how did u know

Josh-I wanted to ask shaz the same thing

Angad-lets ask them now

Josh-ok good luck

Angad-same to u brother

They go to there bedrooms and wait for there wifes,shaz cums with kripa thye go to there bedrooms,josh sit shaz on da bed and looks at her

Josh-shaz

Shaz-kya hua

Josh-vo vo

Shaz-vovo kya

Josh-I want

Shaz-u want wat

Josh-can we

Shaz-josh shut up wat u chattin bout I cant understand

Josh-(realy fast)can we try for anotha kid

Shaz-kid(smiling)did u say kid

Josh-ya

Shaz-fine

Josh-fine(grinning)

Shaz-fine u monkey u dog u tramp dun u remeba wat I said to u no kids if u anta kid then get one by urself I cant beleiv u even had the nerve to ask me

She throws the pillows at him

Meanwhile in kripa and Angads room

Angad-kripa kya hum

Kripa-kya angad

Angad- vo kya hai na

Kripa-angad mei jaanti ho tum kya kehna chateho lekin mughe yakeen nahi horaha hai key eh sach hai

Angad-sach hai kripa

Kripa-matlab u did cheat on me u ass**** I h8 u u tramp

Angad-I didn't cheat on u

Kripa-yes u did tumhe koi bh sharam nahin humara beta hai I h8 u angad

Angad-kripa I wanted to say if we could try for anotha kid I cant believe u thought I as cheating on u I love u too much I wouldn't even look at anoha woman

Kripa-(kisses him)I luv u too sorry

Angad-iska matlab ke tum meri bat manogee

Kripa-bacha chahiye

Angad-ha

Kripa-chalo mere sat

Kripa and shaz grab there husband from there ears and take them to the front door and chuck them out

Angad-arrey kripa

Josh-shaz

To l8 the door shuts on there face

They learnt one good lesson thatnight that they woud never ask for a bacha again.

Bak to present

Like that there life went on and they lived happily together,they had the tiffs and josh hated dnos nephew being round his daughter but shaz encouraged piya while angad was turning prateek in to a playboy like he used to be while kripa tried her best to show sanskar to him but they stilled lived happily.time went on and they stayed together unless josh and angad were kicked out the house which happened maybe twice in da week.

And with this last paragraph this is the last pat but like we promised the sequel will be bak based on a janam later,it should be on if next summer so hopefully that gives u sumthin to wait for and we hope we still have all u wonderful readers there I mean it I want to see all the same people or ill track u down I know where u live lol anyways we wanna thank u for reading its been a long journey b this is just the beginning of an end but there is anotha beginning awaiting 4 u.

preview-1 janam later

summer 2007

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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part! <3 it! cant wait for SUMMER 2007! 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
oooo.. something to look forward to for the summer!!
guyz one think to say:
AMAZING FANFIC!! i loved itt!!!!!!!
i cant get over this.. this is the top 5 fanfcs ive read so far and so happy that its not over.. but on hold!!!
good luck for the whole school yr and hpe u dont forget. dunt worry if u do ill pm u.lolz
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Posted: 18 years ago
Amazing part guys!!! poor angad and Josh...........becharon ki to life hi palat gayi bachon ke ane se....... but i guess for them it was worth it..... except for the part whenthey get kicked out of the house!!! 😆 😆 Awesome and I just can't wait for the next Janam (sounds funny to say that) 😆 anyways looking forward to the next one...... Good Luck!!!
take care
Divjot 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
wonderful endin 😆 😆 poor josh n angad they want another kid but dey r not allowed 2 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
Tat was a great ending....poor guyz, they wanted another kid.....lol what IF guyz could hav had kids. hmmm tat would b funny, then they would know what a woman goes through and respect her.

ne wayz overall the story was really interesting.. Keep up da good work and looking forward to the next janam.
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing
hot
wonderful
part meme!! u rocked! my poor joshi! he got kicked out !haha! anywes cant wait for the next janam! hope the day will come soon when u'll write this ff again 😃 luv u

Mrs Laiba Laksh 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 lol angad and josh got kicked out 😆 😆 overall i must say that ur fanfic was amazing and im definitly looking forward to the next sequel of this fanfic.. continue writing fanfics, it'll bring more smiles to our faces 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
I'm gonna have to wait for summer 😭 😭

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