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Edited by rajkumaripari - 13 years ago
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😉😊😛hey hi frnds n how r u all n there i go next update bt plz thanks n sorry that i cant reply to every one as i m busy with my school work till then u enjoy this update n really thanks 4 ur appreciation n plz tell me ki whether u r likking this story ornot plz n plz do comment k ,,,,,,,,,,n guys as i dont know the full name of vp i m writting as vp only bt after i know i will edit it k so enjoy guys,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

chapter:3(durshya navpatigram ke mandir mein)

(sare log pichese awaz ane par palat te hai aur chock jate hai tab taani kehti hai)

Taani: kushise maa aap yaha? Aap to puru kaka ke sath grow ke bahar gai thi na maa:ha,par hum vapas agaye itne pavan avsar par aap nitya kar rahi ho aur hum narahe aisa thodi ho sakta hai? Taani:isaka matlabh aapne hamara nitya dekha kaisa laga aapko acha tha na?

maa:are shant putrid aapka nitya ek dum adbhut tha ek dum man mohak..

Kriya:maa,yaha hum bhi hai sirf taani di nai….

maa:kriya hum kabhi aapko bhul sakte hai ki kesi hai aap?

Kriya:hum to thik hai parantu aap hamare liye kya layi hai ye batiye?

Simmi:kriya aap nirmala kaki se sare prashn yahi puch lengi ki ya ghar ke liye kuch baki rakehngi…

Taani:ha kriya aap,baa,neha aur vicky ke sath ghar jayeye aur hum mandir ka sara safai karke simmi,nilesh,vishaka ke sath ate hai

maa:thik hai hum jate hai parantu aap bhi sigraha ajayega…

(phir sare log gaaw(village) chale jate hai aur taani,nilesh,simmi,vishaka mandir ka karya samampt kar ghar jane ke liye prasatan karte hai tabhi taani dekhti hai ki ek stree{women} unki taraf doodti hui aarahi hai )

Stree:hame bachalijiye (kehke behosh hojati hai tabhi nilesh dekhta hai ki ghodo par bharuch ke sainik arahe hai )

Simmi:taani di waha dekhiye baruch ke sainik…

Nilesh:lagta hai ye log is stree ko khoj rahe hai aur inhone hi inki ayesi halat banai hai…inhe hum abhi batate hai ki stree ke sath kaisa bartav kiyajata hai.

Taani:rukiye nilesh is waqt hamara inke samne ana thik nai hoga aur hame abhi yinki jaan bachani hogi.

Simmi:aap thik kehrahi hai taani di nilesh chaliye hum log us ped ke piche chip jate hai jaise hi bharuch ke sainik yaha se jayenge ham log gaaw chalenge

Nilesh:thik hain………..

{aur sare log ped ke piche chip jate hainaur bharuch ke sainik bharuch ke sainik jane ke baad wo log gaaw chalejate hain………………………

Agle din subah}

Simmi:{taani ke ghar pe aati hain aur keheti hain}Wo hame raat ko jo kaki mili thi wo thik to hain?????????????????????????

Taani:ha Simmi wo thik hain aur abh apni putrid{beti} ke gram ja rahi hain

Simmi:chaliye acha hain parantu bharuch ke sainik unhe kyun dhund rahe the

Taani:yahanahi simmi chaliye mirchi kuthte hui batate hain

{wo log mirchi kuthne ke sthan{place} par pahuch jate hain}

Simmi:abh bataiye taani di

Taani:wo bharuj ke sainik us abala stree ka picha kar rahe the kyunki unhone bharuch ke krur,nirday naresh "VP" ko lagan nahi diya tha

Simmi:parantu itni chotti baat ke liye itni badi saja?

Taani:simmi……..chahe chotti baat ho ya badi VP jaise vyakti ke liye kuch bhi maine nahi rakhta…….

{Drushya bharuch mehel }{ek sainik}

Sainik:shama maharaj shama…..ham phir se aisi galti kabhi nahi karenge..

Maharaj:jao tumhe baksh diya……jao………jao Sainik:dhanyawaadmaharaj…… {tabhi wo sainik bhagne ke liye uthta hain aur VP apni talwaar nikal kar us sainik ko mar deta hain……..tabhi waha ek stree aati hain aur VP ke much par khun ke chite dekh keheti hain…..}

Stree:Bhanu bhai………Bhanu bhai………..[krodh mein]

VP:khushboo aap???????????wobhi yaha?????

Khushboo:pehele tum yebatao ki tum kab tak yuhi logo ko bina vajay marte rahoge????????????????

VP: khushboo aap na bahut chinta karti ho…jab tak hamara bhay praja mein rahega tab tak ham bharuj ka shasan chala payenge

Khushboo:parantu tum jo kar rahe ho wo thik nahi hain…itni choti bato ke liye itni badi saja

VP:are jab aisi chote karyo pe saja denge tabhi bade bade karya aasani se purn hajayenge

khushboo:tumhara matlab kya hain

VP: khushboo hame bahut karya karne hain….sabse pratham bharuch vasiyo se lagan vasul kar use "'''GHAZNAVI'''" ko buhejna hain aur use khush karke hame Devpatan ke samrat se pura shasan chin na hain……..

Khushboo:"SAMRAT VALLABH DEV se parantu…

(tabhi ek dasi ake khushboo se vkehti hai ki unse unki shaheli milne ayi hai aur wow aha se chali jati hai….)

VP:bhahat ache khushboo aap apni duniya mein rahiye aur hum apne putra ke sath milke sare savrastra pe shashan karenge….

(kehke zor zor se hasne lagta hai….)

VP:hahahaha…………. hey frnds this was the update how do u like it n plz do comment n linke n plz do reply if u all r liking the episode i mean my updates n this ff n theres the precap guys,,,,,,,,,

PRECAP:KRIYA N TAANI DANCING FOR THERE RAJKUMAR PRINCE CHARMING,,,,,,, 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow... u included vp and khushboo also... nice
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😉hi n thank you guys 4 the liking it n thank u so so so much for commenting ,,,,,as i m little in school so cant thanks individual so thank u taareins for liking it plz do read aage comming episodes r osam n i hope u all will like it thanks n
taarey n taareyins forever,,,,,,,,,,,😊
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hi taareins n plz i m updating next part so plz do read n enjoy n plz do comment it thank u love taarey n taareins...😉
chapter:4

{simmi taani se puchti hain}

Simmi:parantu taani di aap VP ke bare mein itna sab kuch kaise janti hain????????????

Taani:jijhkte huain]hum wow o,,,,,kal raat wali kaki ne bataya,parantu ye sab chodijiye aur kaam par dhyaan dijiye…..warna Hansa ben ayengi to bahut krodhit hongi….{tabhi waha Kriya,vishaka aur neha aate hain}

Kriya:Hansa ben hogi so hogi parantu use pratham ham krodhit hoge….

Taani:Kriya aap krodhit wobhi apni ben se

Kriya:nai to kya?kal hamne aapse kaha than a ki hame aapko,vishaka, neha aur simmi ko kahi lejana hain…..aur aap ne kaha tha ki aap hamare saath avashya ayengi parantu aap to kariya karne mein vyast ho gayi………………………….

Taani:HEY KRISHNAJI!!!!!!!!apni taani di ko shama kar dijiye kriya……chaliye kaha jana hain

{tabhi vicky aur nilesh waha aate hain}

Taani:vicky,nilesh aap log yaha ka kariya purn kijiye hum abhi aate hain

Vicky:thik hain taani di…………

{aur sari kanyaye Kriya ke saath chale jate hain}

Neha:Kriya aur kitna chalna hain……hum to thak gaye,abh ham aur nahi chal sakte……………

Kriya:neha aap ko ab zyada nahi chalna hain…ham lagbhag aayigaye hain

Vishaka:yaha o charo aur van hi van hai kriya aap hame yaha kyu

leke ayi hohai..?

Kriya:taani di aap ko yaad hai humne bachpan mein yaha se ek phool

Toda tha tab aapne hume phoolo ki kitmat batiye thi aur tab hamne aapse

wada kiya thana ki us ek phool ke badale ek din ek sundarsa udhyan

banake denge to hamne apna vada nibhane ka chotasa prayas kiya hain.

Taani:kriya sarva pratham aapko ye sari bate yad hai yahi hamare

liye bahut hai aur dusri bat chote bado ko nai bade choto ko kuch dete

hai.

Kriya:ha ben, hum jante hai parantu choto ko aapna farz bhi nibhana

chaiye na..somnath bagwan ne hame itni achi ben di hai aur unke liye

hum kuch karpaye to ye hamara sobhagya hoga.

Neha:kriya aur taani di aap ye sari bate badmein karlijiye ga

Is wakqt hame bas wo batiye jiske liye aap hame yaha lake aayi hai sigra

sigra hamara man utsaha ke sath uchalraha hai.

Kriya:are..,are..,apne man ko itna mat uchal ne do aur aap sabh waha

Dekhiye……….

Taani:HEY KRISHNAJI…..kitna sundar udhyan hai ye..ye aapne banaya

hai kriya..?

Kriya:ha di sirf aapke liye….

Taani:aap kitni pyaari ben hai hamare liye aapne itna sabh…krishnaji

kare aap hame ben ke rup mein har janam mein mile….

Vishaka:are aaplog sirf apne bare mein kaise bat karsakte hai hum sabh ko

aap jaise mitra harjanam mein milne chaiye.

Kriya:ha,ha,ha ye sabh chodiye aur chaliye (kehke sare logo ko udhayan

ke bich sabko bitha deti hai aur sare log udhan mein phoolo ke bich let

jate hai)taani di aap janti hai hum jabhi bhi yaha ate hai to hame kaisa

lagta hai …jaise ki hame apne sapno ke rajkumar ki pratiksha hai …

Taani:Rajkumar(kehke taani kahi kho jati hai)

Kriya:taani di hum aapko aapne sapno ke rajkumar ke bare mein bata

rahe hai aur aap hai ki kahi khoi hui hai….

Taani:ha….wo…kuch nai chaliye abh hum chalet hai kafi der hogai.

Neha:taani di bhetiye nay aha tak aye hai to kriya ke sapno ke

rajkujmar ke baremein jante hai na kya pata hame aapne sapno ke

raj kumar dekhjaye…

Vishaka,Simmi:ha,ha ..taani di rukjaye na kuch der…

Taani:thik hai parantu kuch hi der…

Neha:kriya abh aap batiye aap apne sapno ke rajkumar se kya

Kehti hai…?

Kriya:aap sabh suna chate hai to suniye…then kriya start singing a song which

describes her rajkumar{prince charming}……

Kriya:sar sar sar sar chunari sarke…dhak dhak dhak dhak dil mera

dhad ke, khan khan khan chudi khanke,chan chan chan chan payal

chance,bole bar bar………….MERE SAPNO KE RAJKUMAR…

mere sapno ke rajkumar mujhe hai tera intezar…

mere sapno ke rajkumar mujhe hai tera intezar…

aja sanam abh aja,sajan abh aja,piya tu aja…

aja,aja,mere sapno ke rajkumar mujhe hai tera intezar..

mere sapno ke rajkumar mujhe hai tera intezar….

Tere bin mere sajan mera dil abh manena,mere din kaise kate pardesi tu janena,jagi soi rehtihu,ishq mein khoi rehti hu…Bikhri hai laatee,bhehki chal hai..ake dekhle mera kya haal hai…udhi hai ninde ninde chain kahi abh aye na sajan abh aja,sanm abh aja balam abh aja piya tu aja,,,aja,aja mere sapno ke rajkumar,mujhe hai tera intezar ….

(abh kriya jake neha,taani,simmi,vishaka ko nitya karne ke liye leke aati hai aur aur taani bhi nitya karne lagti hai..)

Taani:{aa,aa,aa,aa,aaa}(phoolo ke pas jake)jado ki khushboo mein,dhundu tujhko kaliyo mein(phir kriya,abha,neha ke pas jake)logo ki nazro mein,dhundu tujhko galliyo mein….ye pyasi pyasi rahe,dekhrahi teri rahe,na jane kabh ayega,mere khawab sajayega…lehranelagi…jara aa tham le,tadpata hai kyu…aja samne…… basalu man mein,ha man mein,tanha rahana abh jayena sanam abh aja,sanm abh aja,balam abh aj,dewane aja…..(abh sare milke nitya karte hai….)

aja,aja mere sapno ke rajkumar,mujhe hai tera intezar…aja sanam abh aja,sajan abh aja,piya tu aja

(taani $ kriya ek sath gate hai..)

Taani:aja,aja,mere sapno ke rajkumar,mere sapno ke rajkumar

Kriya:aja sanam abh aja,sajan abh aja…

Taani:mere sapno ke rajkumar,mere sapno ke rajkumar..

Kriya:piya tu aja …..

(drushya ek yuvak talwar se apne sathi per var pe var kija raha hai)

{Talwar ki tez awaz }Tad,Tad,Tad,Tad….ek anjan awaz kehti hai…

Anjan awaz..:abh bachiye rajkumar subhro….

(phir talwar ki awaz)Tad,Tad,Tad,Tad…..(aur phir achanak rajkumar subhro us yuvak ki talwar pe var kar ke talwar niche gira dete hai…)

Rajkumar subhro:abh aap bachiye……..(aur subhro us yuvak pe var karne jata hai to wo yuvak upar ki taraf khud te hai phir talwar ki var se

Us bachne ke liye daye jhuk the hai phir baye jukh te hai phir niche juke upar ki taraf khud ke subhro ke piche ake unki talwar se subhro ki gardhen {neck}pe talwar rakh dete hai aur kehte hai …

jai somnnath jai krishnaji...


part completed taareins r u liking this ff plz do comment if any suggestions plz do know me thanks ...taarey n taareins forever,,,,,,,,,,👏⭐️

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pari its rly vry vy lovely update... gr888 job... keep it up yaar... luvd it 🤗 👏 😳
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res

vl edit it soon..

edited my previous res :)
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Wat u mean by lyk ing it I am loving it 😃 First I just luv the concept waiting to know the next then second of all actually I am not sooo good with pure Hindi I struggle in reading so if u can make it more today hindi just if u can but other wise amazing concept 😃
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nice dr😃 cont soon

love you taarey

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