~~ Love Ke Side Effects~~(Part-10*Pg-47) - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
👏 ...wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
......dil kar raha hai bari bari galiyan don.....fan fic shuru ki to bata hi dete..... 😡 😡 ....woht o shukar hai nazar par gayi.....waise greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttt story..lol..bechare rajeev how masum and cute..hehehe......loved angad's and kavya's scenes..great going adil..... 👏 .... 😉 😉 ...continue soon 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42


chalo now my comment hmmmmm sabsey pheley to adi no thx for dedication and luv u too ab comment

hmmm kafi khuch comment karna hai well very nice starting Adi i like ur style of writing it is fantastic just awsome 👏

now about story well it was intresting

i like pandit ji dialouge 😆

then RAJEEV rocks 😳

angad and kavya was cool 😛

par yeah kya tushaar and kashish geeting married 🤢 adi yaar wat this waisey hi tushar hai story main upper se kashish se shaddi 🤢 🤢 🤢 i cant stand this idea par i know u have something intresting in mind

tumehe jodi ko to milwana hi hoga and i know tum milwaogey bhi 😳 magar agar beech main tushar aaya to sochlena

overall fantastic story i really loved it post next part soon

waisey 1 more thing hehe kashish fashion designer that sound intresting 😃 hehe lagta hai khuch jada hi fashion designer frnds ban gaye hai tumahrey 😉 mery ko sabkey naam batana 😃 😃 😃 shayad khuch ko main janti hoon 😆


Edited by shruti_gauri1 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
hey adi wow........mindblowing part..........per ye kia kashish aur tushar...... 😭 ......adi that's not fair........anywayz da part was fab......fantastic......... 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
Adi its a wonderful part loved it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
continue nahi ki?..hehe...jaldhi ao na 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
LOVE KAY SIDE EFFECTS
(Part- 2)



Recap:Gerewals..cum to attend Tusshar's engagement as they r family frndz....engagement takes place....Angad & Kripa...n..Kayva n Anjali...meet......Veena......sees a grl 4 Rajeev...n say..him to meet him..he go meet da grl...

Kashish:Mein tumsay shadi kar bhi nahi rahi MR.RAJEEV GEREWAL...
(Rajeeev....looks...at Kashish....n is shocked to...see her...)
Rajeev:Kashish..tum....
Kashish:haan mein...
Rajeev(shocked):tum aur Tusshar...
Kashish:haan tum meri engagement attend karnay aye ho...
Rajeev(smiles):kismat....kal ki hi baat hai..humnay vada kiya tha..ek dorsay say k ek dorsay..samnay khabhi nahi ayegay...apni zindagion mein wapis laut jaye gay....lekin dekho...ek bar phir hum amnay samnay hai...
Kashish:tum aur Tusshar
Rajeev:family frndz
Kashish:hmmmm
Rajeev:Congrautions..
Kashish:thanks.....
Rajeev:khush hoooo..
Kashish(smiles):bahut...
Rajeev:lagta toh nahi hai..
Kashish:meray dad kitnay khush hai..unhi ki khushi mein meri khushi hai
Rajeev:tumhein mera khyal zara bhi nahi aya..
Kashish:nahi..koi wajah hi nahi thi
Rajeev:Kashish abhi bhi waqt hai..
Kashish:dekho Rajeev...7..din mein duniya nahi badal jati..
Rajeev:mainay toh suna tha ek pal mein duniya badal jati hai..
Kashish:meri toh nahi badali..
Rajeev:ek bar phir soch looo
Kashish:soch liya..
(Just then..Anjali...n Archie cums...)
Anjali:Kashish....uncle tumhein bula rahay hai..
Kashish:haan mein ati hoon..
Rajeev:chalein..
Archie:app...Rajeev...
Kashish:hum saath nahi chal saktay ..(Kashish leaves)
Archie:u r Rajeev..
Rajeev:Yeah Hi...
Archie:woh aunty...
Rajeev:hmmm...Archie...do mind agr hum kal baat karay..i mean...yahan par itni log hai..
Archie(smiles):ohh toh u wanted to meet me alone..
Rajeev:i didn't meant tat..how abt a coffee 2morrow..
Archie:sure...tyme..
Rajeev: i wud tell 2morrow..
Archie:hmmm ok...
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TAT NIGHT
***********
Kashish is taking off..her jewlellary sitting in front...of mirror...n thinking...
Kashish(thinks):kitni muskil say mainay apnay dil ko samjhaya tha...k uski aur meri raaaahein alag hai..hum ek nahi hosaktay...aaj..jab mein apni zindagi ka sab say muskil falsa lenay jaa rahi hoon...kismat nay us insan ko meray samnay laa kar khara kar diya hai..jooo meri kamzori hai.....nahi...kar day sakti mein usk sawaloooo ka jawaab...nahi kar sakti mein uska samna...kyun akhir...kyun...usko....Tusshar ka hi dost...hona tha...Kyun mili mein ussay......Kyun woh dobara meri zindagi mein....aya hai...jab..k...nahi karti mein ussay pyar...kaisay samjhaooo..uskooo..
Kashish(inner soul):nahi karti ussay pyar...toh kyun fariq parhta hai tumhein usk samnay honay say....kyun aaj bhi...jab woh tumhein dekhta hai..tum khubsorat mehsoos karti hooo..kyun...aaj bhi..usko aankeein tumhara ankkeion baaatein karti hai...yeh jhoooth jab tum apnay aap say nahi bol sakti usko kya samjhoooogi...maan looo Kashish tum USSAY PYAR KARTI HOOO
(Song in Background)
Bheegi bheegi si raatein
Bheegi bheegi yaadein
Bheegi bheegi baatein
Annkion mein kaisi nami hai
haaaaaan haaan haaaan
Sapno ka saaya palko par aya
Pal mein hassaya pal mein rulaya
Phir bhi yeh kaisi kami hai
Na janay koi kaisi hai yeh zindagani
Humari Adhoori kahani

Addhi adhi jaagi aadhi adhi soye
Ankkhein toh teri lagta hai royi
Lay kar k naam humara
Rootha Rotha raab chuta chuta sab
Toota toota dil teray bina ab
Kaisay hoo jeena gawara
haaan haaaan haaan
Na janay koi kaisi hai yeh zindagani
Humari Adhoori kahani

Bheegi bheegi si raatein
Bheegi bheegi yaadein
Bheegi bheegi baatein
Annkion mein kaisi nami hai
haaaaaan haaan haaaan
Na janay koi kaisi hai yeh zindagani
HUMARI ADHOORI KAHANI..

Rajeev(thinks):Kashish humari kahani adhoori naa hoti agr tum chati toh aaj hum saaaath hotay..tumharay liye...meri sab kuch chornay ko tayaar tha....par jab..tum hi meray saath nahi...toh....in sab baaton ka kya fyda....lekin..tum kahoooo ya nahi....pyar tum mujsay hi karti hoo...........aur woh sachchi tum khud bhi jhooothla nahi nahi...sakti...aaj bhi tumhara dil meray liye dharkata hai...merin ahaaaton par tum bechein hojati hoo...Kashish ek bar mor kar dekha hota mein abhi bhi wohi khara hoon jahan tum mujay chor kar gayi thi...
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NEXT DAY
Breakfast Table
Veena:Rajeev toh Archie say...mila..
Rajeev:Jee...mumma..
Veena:kaisi hai...
Rajeev:achi hai...
Veena:toh mein baat karooo..
Rajeev:mummaa..shadi hoo leynay day..phir koi baat karay gay..
Veena:theek hai jaisay teri marzi..
Angad:mummaa...ab Kayva k baray mein bhi sochay..
Rajeev(surprsied):Kayva...kya chakar hai....koi larki passand agayi kya...
Kayva:nahi bhaiya Angad toh aisey hi bolta rehta hai..
Veena:mujay meray beeton ki passand par pura bharoosa hai agr koi passand ajaaye toh bata dena....mein khud ussay milooongi...
Kayva:mummaaa koi nahi hai...
Angad:mainay baat karli hai...Kavya..bata day...
Veena:kya chal raha hai..
Kavya:kuch nahi mumaa...Angad...shutup...
Angad:Ok...
Rajeev(lost):mummaaa...
Veena:haan..
Rajeev:mummmaaa agr hum kisi say pyar kartay hai..toh kya usko hasil karna galti baat hai...
Veena(surprsied):nahi....beta...agr woh dorsa insan bhi tumsay pyar karta hai..toh duniya k koi taqeet bhi tum logo ko alag nahi kar sakti.....uskoo hasil karnay k liye joo karna paray karna chaiye...
Angad:everything is fear is love n war bro
Veena:par....tum yeh kyun poach rahay hooo..
Rajeev:kuch nahi mumaaa...mein toh aise hi poach raha tha..
Veena:Rajeev...ek baat yaar rakh..meray teray har faslay mein teray saath hoon...
Rajeev(smiles):thanks...
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RAJEEV ROOM
(Kayva knocks at da door)
Kavya:bhaiya mein andar aaajyooo..
Rajeev:aaa naa...tujay poachnay ki kya zaroorat hai..
Kavya:bro yeh wohi larki toh nahi jissay app...Paris mein milay thay...
Rajeeev:Paris????????????????
Kavya:haan woh...
(Just then Angad enters)
Angad:Kayva...tujay yaad nahi humein jana hai..
Kavya:kahan...
Angad:haila...woh coffee..
Kayva:ohh haan...coffee...ok bhaiya hum chaltay hai...
Rajeev:coffeee...woh toh mujay bhi...i mean..Archie ko invite karna tha...mujay akelay nahi jana tum dono chalo naa..
Kavya:nahi woh...
Rajeev:u going to hav coffee bhi company mil jaye giii..
Angad(murmers):par joo do comapnies aarahi hai unka kya karay gay...
Rajeev:kuch kaha tumnay..
Kayva(disappointed):nahi...
Rajeev:mein bus 5 mins mein aya..tum log car mein wait karoo..
Angad:ok...
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Angad n Kayva are standing by da car....n thinking wat to do..
Angad:teray pass Anjali ka no. hai..
Kayva:yahan usk naam tak nahi poacha toh no. ki baat kar raha hai..
Angad:hmmm par kuch toh karna hoga naa..
Kayva:aisa kartay hai hum nahi jatay..
Angad:phatoo(darphok) kahin kaaa...nahi hum zaroor jaye gay...
Kayva:Angad kuch soch naaa...
Angad:soch raha hoon...toh hilna band kar...
Kavya:mein kahan hil raha hoo..woh toh dar lag raha hai..
Angad:idea...bhaiya....toh Archie say milay hai..hum wahan say thori dayer k liye.. gayab hojaye gay..unko pata bhi nahi chalay gaa....k hum kisi aur say milay....
Kayva:hope it works...
Angad:hmmmmm(Rajeev cums...)
Rajeev:chalein...
Angad:sure...(all 3 sit in car)
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RAJHEA HOUSE
Anjali:un dono ki toh aaj mein akal thaknay laga doongi..
Kripa:dekhooo naa...Kashish
Kashish:Anjali..clam down...
Anjali:kya clam down yaar himmat dekhoo unki..naa jaan naa pechan..
Kripa:itnay achay...toh thay woh...kuch..bhi toh..
Anjali:tum toh chup hi rahoo naa...kal say Angad Angad laga rakhi hai...
Kripa:tats a lie...
Kashish:kal say toh mein bhi uski tareefain sun rahi hooo..Angad..
Kripa(shyly):nahi mainay unka naam kab liya...
Anjali:haila...yeh...UNka...kya matlab...Madam Kripa..cum out dreams...
Kripa:Kashish chalooo naa humaray saath...warna..Anjali pata nahi kya kareay gii..
Kashish:mein waha jaa kar kya karoongi..
Kripa:chaloo naa tum humari frnd hooo..
Anjali:yahan par ek k saath ek free...ki scheme chal rahi hai...k agr Kashish humari frnd hai toh iska chalna bhi zaroori hai.....
Kashish(laughs):waise toh mein bhi dekhna chahti hoon kiski itni himmat k humari Anjali say panga lay...
Kripa:gr8...soo u cummming...
Kashish:hmmmm ok..
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COFFEE HOUSE

Angad:bro app Archie ka wait karooooo...hum yun gay aur yun aye...
Rajeev:par tum log jaa kahan rahay hoo..tum logo koo saaath rehnay k liye laya tha naa..
Kayva:bhaiya....bus...abhi atay hai..
Rajeev:ok....
On da other hand
Kashish:kahan hai woh dono..abhi tak aye nahi...
Kripa:ok...atay hi hogay...
Anjali:dar gay hogay..
Kripa(laughs):kissay...
Anjali:Kripa...ab toh shuroo mat hona ...
Kashish:ok ok...tum dono larooo mat...i am little..thirsty....mein abhi ati hoon...(she leaves)
15 MINS LATER
Anjali:mujay nahi lagta woh dono anay walay hai.
Kripa:yeh Kashish bhi gayab hogayi...
Angad:Hi.....sorrry...woh...
Anjali(interups):itni late...tyme ka kuch andaza hai tum logo koooo....koi itni late ata hai...
Kayva(mischeivously):intezaaar kar rahi thi...
Anjali:jeee nahi...hum janay walay thay...chal Kripa..
Kripa:par kahan abhi toh yeh log aye hai...
Kayva:acha naa traffic block hogayi thi..we r sorry...
Kripa:itz ok
Anjali:itz not ok samjha kya hai mujay
Angad:apni bhabhi...
Kashish is finding da table where she left...Anjali n kripa...is kind off lost.....she is wandering here n there...she just stand by a table...here..Rajeev is all tried...up...waiting 4 Archie...he stands up...n turns arnd to gooo...he hits...a grl...yeah itz none than Kashish ofcourse...

Kashish falls on Rajeev....they both see each other...both r lost....in another world...in same manner they get up..widout..getting off there eyes 4rm each other.....Kashish....chain..is....stuck in Rajeev...collar button...Kashish is trying hard...is get it...free..but...still she is..looking in Rajeev eyes....

(Song on Background)

main hoon woh aasman
main hoon woh aasman
aur tum ho yeh zameen
ho kar bhi hum juda
hote juda nahi

tum ho woh aasman
aur main yeh zameen
ho kar bhi hum juda
hote juda nahi

main hoon woh aasman

premi banna jitna mushkil
pyar nibhana usse bhi mushkil
paas mere tu hona agar tu
kitna tadapta hai mera dil

main hoon teri nazar
mera intazar tu
ho kar bhi hum juda
hote juda nahi

tum ho woh aasman
aur main yeh zameen
ho kar bhi hum juda
hote juda nahi

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Ok Guyz here da part endz
Dedicated to Kinza
Plz do comment
Luv
Adil

Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1


chalo now my comment hmmmmm sabsey pheley to adi no thx for dedication and luv u too ab comment

hmmm kafi khuch comment karna hai well very nice starting Adi i like ur style of writing it is fantastic just awsome 👏

now about story well it was intresting

i like pandit ji dialouge 😆

then RAJEEV rocks 😳

angad and kavya was cool 😛

par yeah kya tushaar and kashish geeting married 🤢 adi yaar wat this waisey hi tushar hai story main upper se kashish se shaddi 🤢 🤢 🤢 i cant stand this idea par i know u have something intresting in mind

tumehe jodi ko to milwana hi hoga and i know tum milwaogey bhi 😳 magar agar beech main tushar aaya to sochlena

overall fantastic story i really loved it post next part soon

waisey 1 more thing hehe kashish fashion designer that sound intresting 😃 hehe lagta hai khuch jada hi fashion designer frnds ban gaye hai tumahrey 😉 mery ko sabkey naam batana 😃 😃 😃 shayad khuch ko main janti hoon 😆


Sur...i alwayz love ur comments...this too was special....gald u liked 1st part...ur comment r most imp....well..jodi ko toh alag nahi kar sakta hooo..Tusshar ka kuch kartay hai....let c....aur...fashion designer..sirf app hai....this character is a bit inspired 4rm u...😉n luv ya 3😆

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Posted: 19 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: sun_423

adi u know what ur the best.... tum jab bhi kuch likhthe ho woh dil ko choo jaathi hain dil pe ek ghehri chaap chd jaathi hain... main tere stories pe completely fida hoon adi..... 👏 👏 👏 the way u potrayed ur characters is so damn awesome yaar.......... 👏 tu ek STAR nahi tu tho ek SUPER STAR hain..... ⭐️
adi tere story ke first part padne mein mujhe bada mazaa aaya... the character sktech of each one was just amazing.. keep up the good work... 👍🏼
par yeh tushaar is chosen for kashish...🤢par no problem jab Rajeev aur Kashish ek dusare se milenge tho unhe unka pyaar aur manzil dono mil jayegi......kyun ???? 😆 adi ab please jaldi se continue karna i'll be waiting......... 😃

Suri...itni...bhi achi story nahi likhta k tum itna apprecaite karti hooo...newayz...no thanks....😳 aur sahi bola yaar...Rajeev aur Kashish saath hogay toh Tusshar becharay ka kya hoga.....😆sooo don't worry...JODI WILL ROCK😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: aswa

hey bro m late in commenting as usual lol]
greattttttttttt concept of the story 👏
naam toh bohat lush rakha haiiiii 😉 😃
write soooooonnnnnnnnnnn

Hey...no sorries n thanks plz..😡 m happy u liked da concept....aur naam toh lush hona tha my kiddo suggested tat...😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: aswa

adi bro greatt storyyyy 👏 👏 continue sooon
thx for the dedication very sweeet of u 😊

oye kiddo....thanks bola naa toh me wud get naraaz.....aur gr8 toh hogi story..u know naa..me adildagr8😆

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