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Posted: 19 years ago
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adi apni story continue karna intezaar nahi ho raha hain........ 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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adii bro this is totallly not fair
where is the storyy????? 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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adil bro u said u will write the first part in a day or two but i dont think u willl 😭




plz write the forst part i wannna read it 😭




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Posted: 19 years ago
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hehe adi dekho kitni story ki demand hai isliye main tumehe Mr popular kheti hoon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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nice part adii

i luved the intro as well as the promos

cant wait for the next part

do contunue soon!

Pooja 😊
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LOVE Ke SIDE EFFECTS
(Part-1)


LONDON
We see a huge living room.....wid...very beautiful decoration n all...we see...a lady...sitting..there...n..talking to Pandit jee...

Pandit:Maa...Jee...yeh wali...larki dekhay...sundar hai...achay khandan say..hai..aur...
Veena:hmmmm....Pandit jee..koi ddekhaye asi...larki..dekhaye....jisko...dekh kar...dil khaye haan..yehi hai...woh..joo meray betay ko khush rakh sakti hai...
Pandit:Yeh wali dekhay...(showing her a pic)
(Just..then...we see..two handsome hunks......entering....)
Veena:Angad..aur...Kayva..idhar ayooo....
Angad:yea...mumma...
Veena:yeh pics...dekh.....(handing over da pics..)
Kayva:mummaa...kis liye...
Veena:beta...shadi...k liye....
Kayva:hmmmm...toh mujay..(going thru da pics) in mein say koi bhi passand nahi hai..
Veena:mein...Rajeev k liye..larki passand karnay ko..keha rahi hoo..
Angad:bro k liye....wow...ek min ruko...(he takes out a pic....) yeh wali kaisa rahay gi...
(A dashing....handsome....guy...enters...da living room...)
Kayva:Bhaiya say hi poach...looo...k unkoo kaisi larki chaiye..
Veena:acha howa tum bhi agay..chaloo yeh pic...dekhooo...aur bataooo..
Angad:bro mujay toh yeh wali passand hai dekho...(showing him da pic)
Rajeev:mumma...apko mainay kitni bar kaha hai...k mujay shadi nahi karni...
Kayva:hmmmm....hum mumma..ki baat manay aur app..
Veena:Rajeev..shadi nahi karay gaa..toh zindagi akelay kaisay guzaray giii...
Rajeev:waise hi jaisay.....guzarta araha hoon...wasie bhi..yeh dono hai naa..inki shadi karwayoo..pura din..awara gardi kartay rehtay hai...
Angad:bro..tats not fair....
Rajeev:everything is fair fair kiddo..
Kayva:Angad...humari dafa sab fair hota hai..
Rajeev:ok....theek hai....hum sab ko mumma ki baat mani hai..soo..done..mumma ap koi bhi larki passand karloo...mein shadi k liye tayyar hoon...
Angad:wow...gr8....
Kayva:mom jaldi say larki dhoondoo kahin bhaiya ka mood change naa hojaye.....
Veena:bus..ab tu maan gaya hai...mein bahi khush hoon..
Rajeev:mumma..mainay ticket confirm karwadi hai....next weeek
Angad:WHAT...itni jaldi....bro...par...hum jaa kyun rahay hai..
Veena :well...meri ek frnd k betay ki shadi hai.....
Rajeev:hmmmm Mr.Tusshar Shergil
Veena:Mein Cg say baat karleti hoon...(Cg..cums down 4rm da stairs)
Cg:mein nahi araha saaath..mein Paris jaa raha hoon meeting...attend karni hai..
Rajeev:mummma app sab packing karlay..time nahi hai..
(Rajeev glares at him n..say...)
Rajeev:khabhi toh beghair koi scence create kiye..mumma k baat man liya karein..
Cg:Veena meri bhi packing kardena..
Veena(smiles):jee..par woh meeting...
Rajeev:woh meetin mein attend karloonga ...u shud...go wid mumma..
Veena:tu humaray saath nahi arha...
Rajeev:mumma...i wud b there in aweek
Veena:par...next week toh engagement hai...
Rajeev:mummma sirf ek week ki toh baat hai...engagment mein poach jayoonga....
Kayva:waise bhi hum jaa rahay hai naa...ek week..bhaiya k beghair..tu raha hi sakti hoo...
Veena:hmmm par...
Angad:come on mumma...we wud rock....
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INDIA

We c a beautiful grl getting ready...in front of mirror...she wear her bangles...earings....she...turns arnd listening to a voice....
Vasu:Kashishhhhhhhh....
Kashish:jee mummma...
Vasu:kitna time lagati hooo...tayyar honay mein...kab say Tusshar intezaar kar raha hai..
Kashish:bus mumma woh mein..
Vasu:chaloo ab jaldi...
(She goes down...sees...Tusshar who is all suited booted)
Kashish(thinks):hum shopping par jaa rahay hai...par is ko dekh kar asa lagta hai..kisi business meeting par...mana..he is business freak but still...forget it...
Tusshar(thinks):she is looking goood....shadi kar k fyda hi hai...ek toh she is good...n oper say pura Rajhea empire...
Vasu:sorry beta...yeh toh bahut time lagati hai tayaar honay mein...
Tusshar:itz ok aunty...
Kashish(thinks):ab HI bolo mujay....yeh bhi batana paray ga...
Tusshar:Hi..Kashish..
Kashish:Hi...Tusshar..shall we leave...
Tusshar:yeah sure...
(Tusshar n Kashish go ot n see Anjali n Kripa standing along da car...)
Tusshar(surprised):tum yahan akeli kya kar rahi ......
Kripa:nahi...jeej...mein bhi hoon naa..
(Kashish is smiling n enjoying da expression)
Tusshar:Kashish yeh...
Anjali:hum nay socha app akleay bore hojayoogay..hum apko company denay aye....
Tusshar:oohh thanks...
Kashish:woh inko bhi shopping karni thi..so i called them up...hope u don't hav any probs..
Tusshar(disappointed):no not at all..
Kripa:dekha...inko bura nahi laga...Anjali aisay hi keha rahi thi...
Tusshar:hmmm chalein...
Tusshar opens da door 4 Kashish..she.. is abt to sit in car b4 Kashish cud sit on da front seat...Anjali sits..
Anjali:aaj jeeju k saaath mein behtooo gii...hope itz f9...
Tusshar:par Kashish..
Kripa:Kashish tumhein koi prob hai..
Kashish:nahi itz ok..tum bethooo..tumharay jeeju hai..
Tusshar:par....
Anjali:jeeju sharama kyun rahay hooo...i don't believe on saali adhai ghar wali(They 3 laugh....whole day...they...shop alot....n tease Tusshar...)
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One WEEK Later
ENGAGEMENT DAY
Da...cermony is on it full swing....all elders r busy talking...
Veena:Kashish..bahut...achi..larki....hai mujay bhi apnay Rajeev k liye asi hi larki chaiye thi...
Reva:hmmmm achay khandan say hai...khubsoorat hai..fashion desinger hai...chaye toh...she can...open a botique par humein kisi baat ki kami thori hai...k humari bahu kaam karay...
Veena:nahi...asa bhi nahi..hai..agr..usko kaam karnay ka shook hai toh rukna nahi chaiye...
Reva:arey..choro...ghar bhi toh ussay hi sambhalna hai...tum yeh bataoo..Rajeev ko kaisi larki passand hai..
Veena:usnay toh aaj tak socha bhi nahi hoga is baray mein...usko kaam say fursat kahan hai...usnay toh keha rakha hai mumma joo apko passand hooo...
Reva:hmmmm meri nazar meine k larki hai...
Veena:acha..kon...
Reva:Tusshar ki bua ki beti hai..Archie..aaj hi America say ayi hai......yehi kahin hogi abhi milwa deti hoon...
(Angad n Kyva r looking...very....handsome...in there sherwanis...)
Angad:bro toh aaj phas gay...
Kayva:haan.....becharay...lekin woh hai kahan abhi tak nahi aye..
Angad:arahay hooo gay...he said toh woh zaroor ayegay..
Kavya:hmmmm
Angad:waise...India is not tat bad...nice..atmosphere..
Kayva:i know watz nice....4 u....grlz...aur atmosphere...
Angad:dono achay hai...
Kavya:bore horaha hoo yaar...
Angad:same here....kya kareiin...
Kavya:Bhabhi jee say toh milay nahi...unsay hi mil letay hai....kahan hai room unka...
Angad:nice idea....(they call a kid....n ask....)
Kayva:Dulhan ka kamra konsa hai..
Kid:woh oper wala...
Angad:hmmm chal...
(They both..go up.....n..knock at da door...once...twice...thrice...)
Kavya:yahan koi nahi hai...
Angad:dekh yaar..bhabhi nahi toh..unki frnd hoongi unsay hi mil letay hai...(they...knock again n this time da door opens)
Anjali:Excuse me....app yahan kya kar rahay hai...
Angad:abhi tak toh kharay(standing) hai...aagay dekhtay hai kya karna hai...
Anjali:ohhhh plz....i mean y r knocking...
Angad:woh humaein..Kashish..say...milna tha..
Anjali:kyun....jab neechay ayi gii tab mil leyna naa...
Angad:matlab kyun...bhabhi...
Anjali:Kon bhabhi...Tusshar ka toh koi bhai nahi hai..
Angad:Kashish...
Kayva:yeh bhi teri bhabhi hi hai Angad
(Kayva is all stunnned by Anjali's beauty......)
Angad is surprised...at wat Kayva said...
Anjali:inka kehnay ka kya matlab tha..
Angad:apko samjh nahi aya..
Anjali:jeee
Angad:nothing...woh Tusshar is like our brother so his wud b wife....is like our bhabhi...
Anjali:oh.....ok...
Kayva:hmmm toh...
Anjali:toh kya...
Angad:soo can we plz meet her...
Anjali:nahi...
Just then Kripa cums...
Kripa:Kashish bula rahi hai...
Anjali:bus mein arahi hoon...(she shuts da door)
(They both...goo down..back to function)
Kripa:yeh dono kon thay hai...
Anjali:do bandar....
Kripa:bandar...itna handsome toh tha (thinking abt Angad)
Anjali:come bac to reality....Kripa...
Kripa:hmmmm
(They take..Kashish downstairs...the ring ceremony takes palce....Tusshar is very happy...but..Kashish is lost sumwhere...on da other hand..Kavya is constantly staring...Anjali n she geeting irriated..Angad noticed this...)
Angad:r u interested
Kayva:hmmmmm
Angad:serious....
Kayva:very serious itz love at first sight
Angag:hahahahaha
Kayva:tujay hasi arahi hai
Angad:nahi....chal..baat kartay hai..usay..
Kayva:nahi mein nahi arha...yahan bolnay ki halat nahi hai kya baat karoonga..
Angad:ok mein baat karta hoon..
Kayva:hmmmm theek hai...
(They go where...Kripa n Anjali r standing...)
Angad:Hi i am Angad..(to Kripa)
Kripa:Hi....i am...(unable to utter her name)
Angad:naam nahi bataye giiii..
Anjali:Kripa....naam nahi bataooogi..
Kripa:Kripa...Sharma..
Angad:nice name...
Kayva:aap apna nahi bataye giiii...
Anjali:kyun kya karooogay jaan kar...
Angad: hosakta hai khabhi missing k list mein dena parh jaye...
Anjali(furious):tumhein mein...
Angad:mujay nahi...meray bhai ko........pyar hogaya hai...apsay do u believe in love at first sight...
Anjali is unable to react..
Angad(continued):nahi naa....sooo apko bar bar milna chaiye..how abt a coffe...2morrow....5 PM..
Kripa:hmmmm theek hai..
Angad:goood grlz...sooo c u there...(saying this he left...pulling Kayva wid him who is still lost in staring Anjali)
Anjali:tumhein kisnay kaha tha....coffee k liye haan karnay kooo...
Kripa:woh..mein toh...
Anjali:how dare he say...all this...love at fight what rubbish...
Kripa:par hosakta hai woh sach keha raha hooo...
Anjali:woh mujay jaanta tak nahi hai..how can he love me...
Kripa:kal chaltay hai naa coffee par...dekh lay....k kaisay larkay hai...
Anjali:noway
Kripa:ek bar milnay mein kya jata hai...
Anjali:hmmm dekhtay hai...
On the other hand...
Kayva:tu pagal hai....kya bola ussay....love at first sight..
Angad:haan tumnay bhi toh yehi bola naa...
Kayva:mein tujay bataya tha yeh toh nahi kaha tha ussay jaa kar bata doo...
Angad:acha naa joo hogaya soo hogaya..
Kayva:kya soch rahi hogi woh humary baray mein..
Angad:chaloo is sab k baad atleast woh sochay gi toh...
Kayva:Angad..tu baaz nahi ayegaa...(Veena cums 2wardz them)
Angad:mumma ko bataooo..
Kayva:chup chap kharay rahooo...kuch nahi kahoo gay tum
Veena:kya howa..kisko chup rehnay ko...bol rahay hoo..
Kavya:kisi ko nahi mumma..app bataoo..enoying this indain wedding...
Veena:haan par..abhi tak Rajeev nahi aya..phone lagaoo usko...
Angad:ok abhi karta hoon...(dials da number)
Rajeev:Heylo
Angad:bro kahan hooo..
Rajeev:rite at enterance...
(Angad turns back n sees....Rajeev in a black..armani suit..looking...dashing....)
Rajeev:sorry i am late...
Veena:koi baat nahi toh aya ..
Angad:bro how was ur trip...
Rajeev:acha tha...
Veena:tum logo apni baatein baad mein kar leyna..mujay...Rajeev say kuch baat karni..
Kayva:sure mumma...chal Angad..ab humari toh kisi ki parwa hi nahi hai..
Rajeev:tum dono bhi naa sudharooogay nahi...toh kyaa baat hai mumma..
Veena:well...mein nay teray liya ek larki passand ki hai...tum bhi mil looo ussay..
Rajeev:mumma apnay dekh li toh achi hi hogi...
Veena:nahi ek bar toh milooo...
Rajeev(puppy face):mummaa...
Veena:Rajeev.....jayooo..woh terrace par tumhar intezaar kar rahi hai..
Rajeev(disappointed):Ok
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TERRACE
Tusshar:sooo aaj tum meri hogayi...aaaj say saaath din baaad...humari shadi hojayegi...
Kashish:hmmmm toh...
Tusshar:well....just wanted to...know..k...r u happy...
Kashish:tumhein fariq parhta hai...
Tusshar:zyda nahi..aur agr khush nahi hoo..aur..shadi k baad khush rahoogayi...kisi cheez ki kami nahi honay doonga tumehin...
Kashish:CHEEZ...haan wohi toh hai joo tumharay liye imp rakhti hai..
Tusshar:Kashish...tum
Kashish:leave it...yehi kehnay k liye bulaya tha...mujay....terrace par...
Tusshar:nahi woh....yeh bhi kehna tha..i am going out...4 a project 4 next 7 dayz....i wud b bac a night b4 wedding..
Kashish:ok...no prob..sooo do mind agr mein terrace par kuch waqt akeli...rahoon...
Tussahr:no not at all..
Kashish:hmmm good..
(Tusshar leaves 4rm there)
Kashish(to herself):yeh hai...woh insan jisk saaath mein apni puri zindagi guzarnay wali hoon..na hum...ek dorsay say pyar kartay hai...naa hi...koi dosti....humaray dermayiam kuch bhi nahi hai....siwae...is...badhan k...engagment sagai..Tusshar k liye mein ek cheez hoon....joo cheezain ki tarah..ghar saja di jayoongi..naa koi wajoood..naa..koi....atama...bus..(she she cud complete she hears a voice)
Rajeev:Excuse mee....
Kashish:hmmm..(turn arnd)
Rajeev has his eyes on da grnd widout looking up...he says...
Rajeev:woh mumma nay kaha...k ap say mil loon..woh...chahati hai k humari shadiii..hojaye...toh...agr..apko lagta hai..k u can b happy wid me...soo mujay koi prob nahi hai..par...mujay nahi lagta i am ready marraige now..soo..agr tum inkaaaaaaaar kardooo...toh..
Kashish:Mein tumsay shadi kar bhi nahi rahi MR.RAJEEV GEREWAL...
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This whole story is dedicated to 2 of my closest frndz...ASWA N SUR..love u both....
OK Guyz wud continue later...
Hope u liked it...
PLZ DO COMMENT
Luv
ADIL



Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Sorry...all of..u...to kept u waiting....i tried my best to continue soon..but..cudn't newayz..hope u like it....thanks...all 4 ur lovely comments... 😳
Edited by Adildagr8 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
adi bro greatt storyyyy 👏 👏 continue sooon
thx for the dedication very sweeet of u 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
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uff.........haila.........!!

........!!

koi pakro........mujhe bachao......kahin main behosh na hojaooon!!

😆😆😆

m surprised..........dat aDi ....u can rite so well!!!

awsum.......its mindblowing yaar!!

especially da character of anjali n angad makes it more koool.......!!!👏...!!

seriously.......no wurds 2 describe!😳

hats off......!👏👏

aur tumne choda bi bohat set time per hai........dat me.........kinza😆...is w8ing for its next part....lol😆😆😆

tou jaldi karo MR.ADIL..........aur apna aur kamaal dikhao.....n continue soon!👏

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow that was such a great part! really awesome cont soon!

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