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Posted: 12 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago
#32

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A PARALLEL LIFE







PART 1


Maan'.. MAAN SINGH KHURANA '.. the successful and a heartthrob'..that's what all call him'.. a charm that no one can possess'.. an aura around him that can make you faint''. His every step towards his success itself marks the story of his undying hardworking skills'' a man with pure heart '.clever and cunning bit not evil'.. he can do anything for his benefit but not at the cost of ayone's loss'.. a hard and an indeed different personality''. But some charm a kind of spell he has that can make you automatically fall for him'' a Casanova'.. in relationship with many gorgeous girls'.. but they are just for fun '.to relax'.. if he's not a saint then he's also not a demon'' never crossed that thin line of sanity with any of the girls''

A threat to his business rivals'.not in the sense of life but through the disturbance that he creates when things doesn't go according to him''

Two days ago he has been declared the world's richest billionaire and is counted now in the top ten richest gems of world''.. the tag of billionaire itself has created his rivals'.jealous and envious of his position'wealth and looks''.the young and dashing maan was returning from the trip '.. he always preferred to drive himself and this was not at all new '' talking to his head accountant and keeping updates about the progress of the works undergoing under him'..he was driving suddenly heard gunshots'' the first shot was fired in air just to made him aware of the unwanted presence of the goons''..suddenly within a split of seconds two cars started chasing him at a high speed''

Two cars were following him' firing at earnest at him'he was driving at an earnest in order to save himself from the people shooting at him'' it was his luck that today he had his bullet proof Mercedes' the young and dashing man tried to dupe the goons by changing the road'. Making a quick call he arranged his gaurds instructed them the way and how to come''.

He was driving at the fastest and roaring speed trying to find out and comprehend about his enemies'..for him he doesn't have any foe'.. but the sudden attack proved him wrong'..no wonder he was the most desirable and handsome and richest guy in the world'.girls literally die for his one glimpse the teenagers are just crazy for his one look '..one article '.any information about him'..he is non other than MAAN SINGH KHURANA'.. one of the successful business person and hunk'' he has been a successful icon for the people around the world'.. for some an inspiration to be like him'..but no one can be like him'. An evil but not a dark person'..he is indeed hard'' that what he proved to all his business rivals being at the biggest fashion event as the model two months back making the event utmost successful itself making a history'''.

He changed his direction it was a silent road'.. no life'.even being close to city so deserted''maan was going when suddenly his car got balanced''. He tried to restore but all in vain '. There was a bridge across the road'.. his car was disbalanced and fell from the bridge'.. the bridge was indeed high'no creature can survive if fallen from that height''

The goons saw him falling down the bridge'they called their boss'..

Goon: sir the work is done '.he is no more''

Boss: good ''make sure there should not be any trace left''you will get your money''

Goon: ok sir'..

The goon cut off the call '' and destroyed all the traces 'of his survival''. Nothing was left'. But they failed to find any trace of his car 'him '.. they thought he would have been burnt into ashes'..but couldn't find so''

Goon 1 to goon 2: I don't think he is alive'.. let us leave before anyone catches us''.

FEW MINUTES BEFORE

Maan was tensed and worried seeming like his end is very near to him'' he was sure that he will be departed to heavenly abode now'' he looked forward to meet a courageous death'' somewhere happy to meet his parents'.. the sole reason of his existence on this earth'' but they were taken away by the cruel hands of destiny and god at a young age with his angel'his love whom he lost along with them.. '.the time he was supposed to enjoy with his friends 'he lost himself in the deep prospect of making his father's dream come true'. To establish the small scale business to a fully flourished business empire'. making him lose himself in this deep process'..

PRESENT

The moment his car fell from the bridge he knew that he is surely gonna die'.. no one can save him but a mere thought of his granny came across his mind'.. his daadima who at such an extreme age always acted as a piller of strength'.. in order to save himself'. He opened the door from his side and jumped '.

Maan jumped from the car ''. After the split of seconds he landed on the land and his head banged on the bridge wall making his forehead bleed slightly'' he gathered himself and saw himself at the same place from where his car lost balance he looked around and found an eerie of silence'.. a deadly and strange feeling '' he looked down the bridge to look at any signs of his car ashes but only found a pure and dark greenery allover the place''.

Maan: how come there is so much vegetation'trees 'I clearly remember when I fall down from the bridge it was all dead place with nothing living around'.how is it possible that''

Maan was looking at the place and started walking'..it was indeed the same place he had been travelling for so long and now knows its ins and outs''.but although all the things are same but then also nothing is alike a huge difference in all things yet nothing''.

He took out his cell from his pocket to call help but what occurred his cell's screen was blank nothing was coming'.he many times tried to start it but his efforts were all futile''

Walking along the long path'.brought him to a familiar place a place where he belongs but what made him shocked was the atmosphere change '.no cars'vehicles in fact he can see carriages running'. People wearing traditional clothes men ( kurta and dhoti) mainly'..and talking in pure hindi'.

(shudh hindi me vartalap''hehehehe)

Maan was walking around he was in a full sleeve shirt with half sleeves folded and a jeans'. Looking at the old buildings '.. that he never saw at the place it was for sure the path leading him to his mansion'.but mansion cannot be seen anywhere '.. or he cannot be able to recognize it''.

People were gossiping about him'taking his name'..

Maan : how does they know my name'.

And to his utter shock he saw 'he saw a women nicely dressed in a beautiful saree and heavy jewellery '.coming towards him with tears in her eyes'..he was shocked to see her'how can see be here '..his mom'his mother whom he had lost at the young age of six'..she is coming towards him'..and crying'.maan was freezed'.. everything around him just stopped he just looked at her way while noticed the distance between them getting decrease with every passing second''

Maan st: where am i'..ma'.i can see ma'.how can it be'..then it dawned on him'' AM I DEAD ?????that's why I can see my mother''.

He was shocked as well as happy after all these years of yearning for his mother's love he will finally be able to be with her''no death can part them''.

His mother came near him'..and touched his face slighty to make sure he is here'' and looked at his bleeding head and called someone''.and asked him''

{ guys I am using hindi dialogues here to make the feel real}

Smriti: aap kahan the maan'..jaante hai aap kitne pareshaan the sab'' and gently touched his wound'.dekhiye kitni lagi hai aapko'.aise koi gussa hota hai'.chaliye hamare saath'..

She took his hands like a small kid whose mom hold his hands in order to save him from getting lost'..and they entered the huge mansion'.yes MANSION''.the same mansion whom he didn't recognize and was shocked to see his granny sitting there in a saree with a shade of red on her forehead'..

Maan was shoched to see dadima as a married woman'he never saw her like that'

Maan: daadima'.how come she is here''I am only dead'but daadima''

He was confused and went towards her and bent down to take her blessings and when maan touched her feet his little world slipped from his hands''

Maan: daadima'..aap''. aap yahan'' and he fainted'the mental pressure caused him to fall down'.

The things that with him occurred is in part with destiny'' he travelled to her world'' her place a serene beautiful place where her fragrance sweet smell could be noticed''.. a familiar place''. That he knows from in and out but still needs to know the actual game plan'about the place he Is lost ''



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Edited by suhaaana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Yaar samjh aa gayi real world wali bhi and bit the old time story.But yeh ho kya raha hai.What is happening such a suspense.I think its much better to leave this on u.If we r not able to find reason it means u hav passed ur exams to make us fool 😆..oops to make us think.I ll wait .Loving this


Maine socha tha MK ki memory loss hone wali hai.


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Edited by Jass.KN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start and continue soon .

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