Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 2. Chapter 43 - 54 (B). - Page 27

Originally posted by: sushna

wowww...awesme...

no arshi...

thankx or pm...

Thanks for the review!😃

Originally posted by: chavvi16

okay lets start shall we
sorry for late comment dear
here goes then
update only on maneet as geet so needed to realise that she does love maan and only maan
so he came to her room to again take her clothes out but she was still slleping
have just realised she has already started to do the duty of the bahu even before she is married to maan
looking after his ill dadi and staying up with NT so they can both take care of her cool na
he didnt wanna leave her and go as she looked so cute while sleeping good he didnt or else how would geet have known about it all
yup dude she sure is a pari and she is only yours which is ven better
so now that he has geet he has started to think for himself and his happiness before it was for his family he thought then him
wow this change for so necessary for maan since geet came into his life
yup he was just like a robot not thinking wit his heart but brian and good he has started to listen to his heart man about time
well of course she is there to take care of ya maan after all she is geet she will always look after you being an important part of her as well you know
and so good that she listened to his confession because this has led to her own confession in a way too in the end which was so needed
after all she too needs to know how much he loves her and what will happen to him if she aint in his life any longer
ypu have filled his life with colour and happiness which used to be bleak before
maan dont think you have to confess this again or does he
so even geet has started to think 24X7 of maan only just like maan does as well
i loved how she saw that scene after their mariage her having the sindoor and mangalsutra that maan gave her and being romantic with her
after all the twists and problems finish that scene will so be there for sure dear
wow it was about time geet told him what she feels for him so she wrote in his diary and tell him indirectly
aww bechari bore ho rahi thi thank god khushi came right
bless now even he knows that geet too loves him and that was the best thing that could have happened to them naa
bless that was just beautiful as always and now all four love each other and are sure of their feelings too cool man
next its gonna be our girls fun day out look forward to that
not to forget arnie not being able to meet khushi hence his bad mood
well guess even maan wont be able to see geet right
cheers for pm
hope this small comment sure helped in the delay of it being posted
man am i lokking forward to next bit now

Thanks a lot for your review!

Loved it!

And its ok if you review late as long as you review! I just love reading your review and it really motivates me to write more! Thanks a bunch!

I am happy that you liked the chap! About your comment regarding Geet doing her bahu duties, I never saw it in that angle! Actually I wanted Geet to be sleeping so that Maan could confess without fear and let out his inner feelings which will make Geet realize her feelings for Maan too! But the confession should be spontaneous! So what I had planned was Maan enters the room to choose the clothes but seeing Geet sleep he lets out his feelings! But if you remember generally when Maan comes to choose Geet's clothes, she takes bath at that time! So I was in dilemma on how to make Geet sleep when Maan wanders in! So, the Dadima ill and Geet and NT staying awake scene was decided! But I never thought that this way Geet will be doing DIL duties! Wow! Chalo kuch achcha hi hua! Kuch bura nahi!

When I imagined the Maan confesing to sleeping Geet, I was very sure that you guys would love the scene! Generally I am nervous about writing a strong scene as my writing skills suck! But this scene the moment I wrote I felt it was perfect! Maybe I am improving! What do you think?

About your comment regarding Maan thinking for himself; I always felt that Maan and Arnav are really selfless people as even though they say that they do things their way they do bend when it comes to their family; like Dadima for Maan and Anjali for Arnav! I mean in the show, Maan went against his morals and allowed Dev to came back just because Dadima wanted (I am talking about the starting scenes when Geet's truth was not in front of Maan) and Arnav married Khushi at the start just to keep his Di's marriage safe. That showed their love for their family. Once the twist is over you will see Arnav get selfish. Just wait for that!

Oh by way, I hope you liked my style of their confession; him confessing when she sleeps and she confessing through a diary!! If you are not happy don't worry Maan will have proper confession and proposal in Chapter 48! Hope you will enjoy that!

You loved that mangalsutra-sindoor scene!! Wow! It was a last moment addition. My cousin's getting married and my parents were discussing about the type of mangalsutra my cousin sis wants and I got the idea!

And you are right! Once the twists and problems end there will be the scene in reality!

You know when I wrote this chapter I was like 'finally she falls too' I mean the other three had realizations ages ago! Now onwards to romantic scenes for few chapters and few more key scenes so that the engagement dhamaka and dramatic scenes go smoothly!

I hope you enjoy the next part! It is totally focused on Khushi and Geet and on Payash too!

Thanks once again for such an awesome review!

Originally posted by: spvd

part 46
awesome part dear...

Maan
that was lovely of Maan to confess to Geet...
so beautiful...
and Geet was all the while listening to it...

Geet
Soni darling is seeing Maan or finding Maan so different than usual...
pyaar jo hua hai...
and she reminiscing the beautiful moments were all so lovely...
cute darling has written her feelings in the diary...
hmm how is Maan gonna react...
wow Maan has read the diary...
awesome...
Khushi is here...
cont soon dear...

Thanks for the awesome review! Was waiting to read it!

About the Maan confessing while Geet sleeps scene, you know this was the first time when I wrote an important key scene I felt like it was perfect! Whenever I write a key scene, I always feel somethings missing but this scene seemed so perfect! I am glad that you liked it too! This scene was really important as Maan's confession makes Geet realize her love for Maan too! And I am proud to say I nailed it perfectly!

You know when I was writing this chapter I was like 'finally she falls too' I mean the other three leads had realized ages ago! Only she was left but now even Geet is done! So now we can move on towards some key scenes which will tie up the loose ends making the engagement dhamaka scenes go smooth! And I will add some romantic scenes in between too!

Thanks once again for an awesome review!

Originally posted by: Sodapop313

I got you to start the next chapter?!?! Wohoo!!! That is awesome. I'm glad the emotionally blackmailing worked! 😆
I don't mind the shortness of the chapter at all because well we were presented with another chapter to read and plus Geet acknowledges her love for Maan! Aww!!! That is so amazing and I'm so happy with the way the relationship is progressing between the two of them.
Now all we need is for Arnav and Khushi to be together and things will be PERFECT!
I was really happy with what you wrote in response to my comment it made my day. 😃
Such a sweet chapter and I can't wait to see how things unfold next for these characters. I'm really eager to see how things will play out between Khushi and Arnav when Khushi finds out the truth about him. It's one mystery that keeps plaguing my mind. I'm also eager to see how Arnav and Anjali find out that their Baby is none other than Maan's fianc. I'm sure there will be plenty of things that will clear up for Geet. I hope you update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter. Lovely writing!

Thanks for the review!

And yes, your blackmailing worked perfectly! Keep on reviewing in such fun and sweet manner and you will keep on motivating me to update faster!

I am happy that you loved this chapter. When I wrote it I was like, 'finally she falls too' because the other three had the realizations ages ago. Now I can go towards some important scenes which are to be put in place if I want the engagement scenes to be linked properly! But there will be some romances and some serious scenes too!

Hey, your reviews make my day and my replies make your day!!! Lets keep on making each other's day!! He he he!!

You said you are eager to see how the things unfold! If you know what I have planned you would not have said that! The engagement dhamaka is really scary and I don't think anyone here has guessed what is going to happen yet! While once Lavanya enters few will guess Arhi's twist, but the Maaneet twist is something really out of box! Hope you are ready for that!

You said that you want to see what will happen when Arnav's truth will come in front of Khushi! Actually in the whole story that was just a minor point. Infact, Arnav is so smart that he can easily twist the scene to his satisfaction! We will come to know his plan to deal with his truth when he will tell it to Maan in chapter 53 just before the engagement!

Actually I wanted Arnav and Khushi to interact away from the family! I mean once Khushi would have known Arnav is Payal's BIL she would not have been that bindaas with him and Arnav would not have been flirty with her. And Anjali in my story is really smart and I did not want her to know about this love story as that will not be helpful for my mega twist!! So, I made Arnav hide his identity from Khushi so that they can interact freely!! That was the reason for hidden identity! It will play no major part in the mega twist!!

About Arnav and Anjali finding out that Geet is Baby, that will come out pretty differently than what you expect ( I don't know what you expect but I have been told I am really good at making out of box plots so I hope my scenes remain unpredictable.) But you are invited to predict!!!

Ah well! If you have any doubts or any questions or even guesses for future plots do share! Maybe I find one of your ideas amazing and might put it in the story!!

Thanks once again for such an awesome review!! Totally loved it!!

Originally posted by: fffan123

That was one brilliant update Kalpana. Loved it.
The way Geet confessed to Maan about her love was very sweet, Waiting to see Maan's reaction.

Also missed ARHI a lot in this update. Please let us have a lot of ARHI in next update.

Thanks for the review!!😃

Originally posted by: sstylishdoll

Wow loved it

Thanks!😃

Originally posted by: Jeba.Rahman

superb update.
at last geet confessed.
loved it so much.

Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Brilliant part dear :D
So beautifully written.
Wow maan's speach to sleeping geet was heart warming. :D
Awww loved how geet realized her love. Especially when she visualized herself married to maan in the mirror. Too good.
Loved what she wrote in Maan's mom diary and maan's reaction to it was priceless :)

Cant wait for more :D

Thanks for the review!!
I am really happy that you liked that update!!!

Originally posted by: dreamymishti88

Fabulous update

Loved it dear

Continue soon

Waiting for more

Thanks for the review!!😃

Originally posted by: ayl123

Nice update

Thanks!!!!😃