Destiny, Fate & Love Thread 2. Chapter 43 - 54 (B).

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#931

Originally posted by: spvd
part 54 B
awesome dear...
very nice...
though i was so frustrated with this hide and seek, twas very nice...
the starting of misunderstanding and confusions and fear is this...

Thank you!😊

Arnav Khushi
very good this is the lesson for the arrogant Arnav...
and Khushi shes being the idiot here...
she should voice it all out...
damn it...
the proposal was so sweet and i certainly didnt expect Arnav to do it that flawlessly...
but bechara Khushi ne paani pher di on his hardwork...
stupid girl dont keep it to urself...

But think from Khushi's point of view too! If she said yes, Arnav would have dragged her to his Di and family to announce. And think how would her family feel when they come to know that there daughter is engaged when they did not even know she was seeing somebody. And about Khushi not explaining to Arnav, she does not how Arnav would take her explanation. Khushi has only seen Arnav's romantic side and arrogant side but not his devotion to his family side. So she thinks he is bit selfish! Thats why she did not tell him. I think I should post a note at the end of next update explaning Khushi's reaction!

well Arnav idiot is chasing Khushi and is gonna make her say yes...
sigh why do i feel its not gonna work according to his plans this time...
oh all his choti choti plans have worked and working but the major one is gonna be a big flop...
and seriously i feel like yelling at Khushi...
why this silence?
cant she take him somewhere and tell him her wishes and dilemma?
grrr...

She was not sure whether Arnav will understand or not. But after seeing dance with her and dedicate a song for her and persue her she must have realised that she had to tell him just to stop him from following her. But till then, Arnav went towards his next plan and made her jealous and ignored her. Idiot! Now he lost his chance. I told you in the start of DFL, there is not negativity in teh show, just circumstances creating problems and thats what happened here.

Arnav stupid fool what are u doing?
flirting with Lavanya that too when both the families are here and ur sister always finding a moka to get u married...
seriously who made this idiot a Business man?
but that scene was funny only thing is Naniji and Anjali have noticed this...
Aranv is gonna land himself in a very serious problem...
whom is Anjali hinting at?
hope its only Khushi...
Khushi hope she doesnt do any kinda sacrifice for Lavanya or make this more complicated...
Arnav idiot ask the name u dumbo...

You guessed my plot right!😉

others
grrr Naniji too saw Geet but didnt go to her...
damn it...
they have time for all the outsiders but not to Geet?
common yaar they are getting the doubts and no one person is clearing it?
how come this is happening to everyone and only with Geet?
Geet is more important than any other outsider hai na?
but no, Anjali, Nani, Mamiji all are in the same boat...

The reason no one had time for Geet but all time for outsiders is because they are totally sure that Geet cannot be here. If she was to come here, she would informed them, simple!

Maan Geet
awesome...
so lovely i wanted the dance sequence and was hoping against hope that they will notice Geet at least now but once again flop...
Maan had to dance in the dimlight-ed dark place...
grrr...

villain
oh no who is this damned person?
and why is he after Geet?
poor Geet...
she nor Maan or anyone in this case has any idea whats approaching them...
Maan wont be able to tolerate or bear anything happening to his Soni...
all the security he has crossed?
Maan and Arnav what kinda security u idiots have arranged?
seriously i doubt these 2 guys...
so Almighty but making such mistakes...

The person behind Geet is Brij! And about the security, not all security can be good. If you remember few years back, terrorists entered the parliament even with tight security. Parliament!!!!! To Shantivan kya cheez hai!

its so scary dear...
dunno what kinda plot u have in ur mind but separation is something i hate...
scared for Geet coz hers is so horrible and coz of Arnav's stupidity some thing is gonna happen...
sigh...
i wan this to be a stress free one dear...
cont soon...

Yes, there will be separation. But then, what is love story without separation? But dont worry, this separation would not be teary eyes and sorrow filled. The heriones will not be always crying while heroes drowning themselves in daaru. NO! Separation will be dhamakedaar. You will enjoy it! THats for sure!

hmmm name?
have to think a lot...
wow this idea is nice dear...
am always there to read this version...
count me in...
OMG take care of urself dear...
we will wait...
dont strain urself...

I am glad that I have your support for story with Geet not loosing her memory. The story would be lot lighter than DFL. And it will have lots of humorous scenes too. And best part, no separation!😃

So pray that DFL ends sooner and you get to read an awesome rom-com story! See ya!

Edited by Analeez11 - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Heeeyyy girl!! I loved the update.
Arnav proposal to khushi was just beautiful, if it was me I'll be like marry me right now. The way he describes why he calls her afreen was just beautiful. Now I understand what khushi was worrying about. BecUse of her parents and her sister and that what they will go through if they heard from someone else about the engagement and all. And I totally understand, she should talk to her parents before doing anything else.

Thanks for the review! Yes, if it was us, we would have said yes. But this Khushi who lives for her family. So she would think how her family would react and then reply! And I am glad you understand her situation. You and another reader are the only ones who understood why Khushi reacted this way!

Awe poor arnav he was so sad when she told him time chahiye but angry as well, if I was in arnav place I would be too. The girl he loves just told him she needs time to reply to his proposal. It was just superb. I actually never thought it would cause problem if arnav and khushi do get engaged now. But after reading about khushis thoughts I understood. And arnav should try to understand that too.

If Khushi would have explained Arnav would have understood! But you forgot one important thing. Khushi has seen Arnav's Rakshas side and romantic side only. She did not see how he is with his family. So in her point of view Arnav is a bit selfish (remember the Sunday harassments) so she is not sure whether Arnav will agree to her or understand her point of view. If Khushi had seen how Anrav is with his Naani, Di, Maami or Aakash, she would have known that Arnav would understand her. But unfortunately due to Arnav's hidden identity she did not know. See I told you, Arnav will regret the day he hid his identity. 😃

Maan and geet dance was amazing and wonderful. The way the song expressed their feelings about how they only need eachother and no one else and that the could go to limits for eachother. Loved the song by the way, it's one of my favourite movie if John Abraham everytime I watch it, it gives me chills because it kinda if scares me for some reason.

Even I dont know why but whenever I watch the movie or hear its songs I get goosebumps. The movie is one of my favorites!

Arnav and khushi dance was amazing and the song you chose was superb. It expressed Arnav's feeling to khushi to feel what he is feeling and to talk to him. Loved it and i wish khushi will tell him her reason sooner, but by seeing arnav disappearing and flirting it might take time. Hahaha I loved how la laughed when arnav introduced khushi to la in sure she must be thinking " dude that's my sister and I already know her" though jeleous khushi was nice to even though it was only for few seconds.

Let me tell you a secret. Because of Arnav's stupid plan of making Khushi jealous and also ignoring her, he lost a chance to listen to her explanation. And this was his last chance for few chapters. If the idiot had listened, many problems would have stopped from happening. But idiot did it and now they will face the consequences. (The writer gives an evil laugh) See I told you, Arnav's arrogance and proud attitude will take him down one day!

OMG Anjali please please don't mess it up! Please let it be khushi who she was talking about but I know it's not khushi and that it's lavanaya who she was talking about. Arnav you should've asked the name of girl. This is just so Much. Fingers crossed that it's khushi.

Why do you think I put La there?😉Dont worry NK haina!

Omg no brij is here and he will get geet some way. I can't believe the stuff he's going to put geet through after he gets her. Oh god this is getting more and more intense. My heart is pounding.
All the security is dead and it'll be hard for maan and them. Because brij has his man every where in the house.

Dont worry! Brij wont be able to take Geet away. Maan and Arnav is there na! But if Geet will be fine or not after the next chapter I cant tell you!

About writing an ff about where geet doesn't loose her memory sounds like a really nice idea and I would for sure love to read it.
A lot of drama is about to happen next chapter and I'll be waiting eagerly for it (:

Thanks so much for the pm and continue soon!!! Love you
-Rafia

I am really happy that you like my idea of Geet with memory! It will be lighter than DFL and wont have any separation track. I will make that story more hilarious too.

Thanks so much for your awesome review!

Take care

Kalpana

Edited by Analeez11 - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#933

Originally posted by: chavvi16
hmmm do we get new thread
i hope so its time for new thread yaar
yeh arnie bhi naa
dekh li aap ki mohabbat and junoon
well all thanx to his mahanta he just got his rishta fixed with wrong sis
but yeh to hona hi tha
and he so deserves it naa
abbb bhugatna apni iss bhool ko arnie

Sachchi Arnav bewakoof hai! Woh kehte haina - apne pair par khud khuraadi maarna! I did say he will regret the day he hid his identity! And I also said that Arnav's arrongace will be brought down!😉

Edited by Analeez11 - 11 years ago