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Posted: 13 years ago
Purple is really lucky for /arnav 😆 he met her, knew her name, get a chance with her, glimpse of her character, and a shake hand...Like it very much.Riya and Roshan not a bad idea with them Arshi's date.It will be fun.Thanks for PM.I read three parts in a go didn't its seems boring nor a long update.But really interesting.Looking for long updates a s fast as possible.Thanks for PM
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: afnariaz

Purple is really lucky for /arnav 😆 he met her, knew her name, get a chance with her, glimpse of her character, and a shake hand...Like it very much.Riya and Roshan not a bad idea with them Arshi's date.It will be fun.Thanks for PM.I read three parts in a go didn't its seems boring nor a long update.But really interesting.Looking for long updates a s fast as possible.Thanks for PM

But it turned a lil unlucky too😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome...
love arnav-khushi nok-jhok...
continue soon n long update plz
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Posted: 13 years ago
really loved it.
nice track, love to see arnav teasing kushi more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
love this story.
Rohan is too funny loved him.
all the charecters are fabulous.
continue soon and pm please. i really really want to read more.

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Posted: 13 years ago
these two are funny
why does she not like arnav apart from being silly he seems okay
so ab kya honne waala hai ji
this seems to funny to be true dear
sorry for commenting so late hope you dont mind
how are these two gonna get together if riya falls in love with arnie
too much confusion about
i love both short and long updates if you cant decide between the two you can always go for the middle option medium sized updates
cheers for pm
their fighting is always so cute as it usually leads them to fall inlove with each other
cheers for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww.. I loved this it was nice..
Especially their convo...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi...it was great to read your work..😊..interesting than the serial these days...i must say...this is d first time that im reading your stories...and felt good after reading it..keep up d good work...i hope you update this soon
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Posted: 13 years ago


Chapter 4


"Hey Arnav!" Rohan climbed beside Arnav on the bed. "Let me sleep yaar". He pushed Rohan away. "Okay if you don't wanna come then I'll go and tell Khushi that you are not coming" He waited for Arnav to realize what he just said and when Arnav's mouth formed a perfect "O" , he got up from the bed and started to walk away. Arnav jumped out of the bed and caught his hand. "What? Did you say Khushi?"

"Yes I did" Rohan smiled.

"And?"

"And she is here to give your wallet!"

"My wallet? How did she?"

"Exactly! How did she?" Rohan raised his eyebrow.

"How do I know? I might have left it there".

"Purposely" Rohan chuckled.

"Shut up! Now lets go!"

"What? You will go like this? Go and freshen up idiot!"

Arnav rushed to the bathroom that instant.

Rohan went to the living room where Khushi was waiting. "You can sit if you want" Rohan said hesitantly. Khushi looked at him and sat on the sofa. She examined the house. Where is everyone? She thought.

"Any problem?" Rohan asked.

"Umm.. Where is everyone?"

"Uncle and chachu has gone to office and aunty and chachi to mandir" He smiled. " And Dadi?" Khushi asked. "Umm she is not feeling well today so she is resting in her room". Khushi felt sad for dadi. "Umm could you take me to her room?" She asked. "Oh yes! Follow me!"


"Here!" He said pointing to Dadi's room. Khushi looked at him. "Aren't you coming?" She asked. "Umm no I'm not in the mood of being eaten up". He gave a wide smile and left. "What did he just say?" Khushi chuckled. She entered Dadi's room slowly.

"Okay I'm ready! Where is Khushi?" Arnav asked Rohan. "She is in Dadi's room". He told taking a bite from the apple he was holding. "Say it again!" Arnav came and snatched the apple he was eating. "She is in Dadi's room. Now give me the apple!". Arnav threw the apple straight into the dustbin. Rohan glared at him angrily. "What was that?"

"Why did you? Arrr you know na her behavior! She might say anything to Khushi! Anything!"

Rohan kept staring at him without saying a word.

"What?" Arnav asked.

"What the hell yaar! She asked me to take her to Dadi's room so I did. If I didn't then you'll say that why didn't you took her to Dadi's room and blah blah!" Rohan made a sad face.

"Change that expression! You look more weird!"

Rohan hit him on the shoulder. "Not more than Khushi" He didn't wait for a second to run from there chuckling. "Idiot!" Arnav muttered.

"Dadi". Khushi said getting a little bit closer to her. "Yes?" Dadi said opening her eyes slowly. "I'm Khushi.. Riya's friend' How are you feeling Dadi? Rohan told me about your health" She asked. "Much better now" She smiled at her. Dadi liked Khushi. Her talks, her sweet nature has impressed dadi from the first day itself.


"Khushii" Both dadi and Khushi looked at Arnav who was half puffing. Arnav tried to calm his breath. He came and sat beside dadi. "Dadi how are you now?" He asked. Dadi smiled. "I'm much better now. What took you here Khushi bitiya?" She asked looking back at Khushi. "Bitiya?" Arnav said to himself. "Dadi likes her!" He thought.


"Dadi.. Actually Arnav.. Arnav ji left his wallet in our house so aunty asked me to bring it". She was smiling while talking. Arnav was just admiring her.


"Okay that's fine. You should start calling him jeeju as Riya is like your sister na?" Arnav choked. "What happened Arnav?" Dadi asked. "Nothing.. Umm I think Arnav is better. You know na Dadi I don't like these names anyway". He said.


"Okay" Dadi chuckled. "Khushi .. lets go.. Dadi needs rest" Arnav and Khushi got up from the bed and left the room.

"So you couldn't stop yourself from coming here". Arnav said when they reached his room. "Excuse me?"


"Here is your wallet!" Khushi handed the wallet to him. And turned to go but Arnav caught her hand and stopped her. When she turned to him he released her hand. "Umm.. sorry! I shouldn't have agreed to Riya. But I did that because she really wanted it. And I like helping my friends. But I have no wrong intentions. Trust me" He said hoping she would understand him.


"I do" Her answer caused tingling feelings inside his heart. "She trust me" He said to himself. "So friends?" He asked. "You are hell bent on making me your friend! Why is that?" She asked. He smiled. "Its because I love to make friends! Simple".


"But I don't! I have just one friend and that is Riya. I don't let people come close to me because in the end they will just give pain. And I don't have the strength to bear anymore.." Khushi stopped as she realized what she was going to say. "Wait.. What?" He asked, noticing the sudden change in her expressions.


Khushi looked at him and smiled trying to hide the pain in her eyes. "Something have got in my eyes." She said pretending to rub her eyes. He caught her hands and made her look at him. "Khushi.." He said. "Arnav please.. Let me go". Arnav saw the pain in her eyes. The pain that she hides with the smile in her face. But today she broke in front of him.


Arnav knew she didn't wanted to cry in front of him. He let go off her hands and watched her hurry towards the door. "What was she talking about? I have to find out!"

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Okay that was it. And one more thing. The length of the updates will depend on what the chapter is about. Do let me know your views.

And thanks for your patience. I know I updated very lately. But it was because of my busy schedule😊

Special note: Thank ..Blush.. aka Zoya for helping me with the update😊 Thanks Zoya for helping me🤗

Edited by BarunliciousGal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Unres😎

Whoaaa mishu awesome update!(chngd ur nickname to mishu as here every1 calls u millie:P)
i just gave the idea n u hav written it very well😊

LOL you never forget to add comedy in ur writings! u r mad! totally mad 😆

Love youuu muahhh😊
Edited by ..Blush.. - 13 years ago

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