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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -chamkilli-

hai re don't read it sucks yaar

na it doe not sucks 😳 😉😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Neha!! Just read the prologue, Chapter 1 and Chapter 2!!! Sounds super interesting!!! You got me hooked!!!😉
Eagerly waiting to know which torture Arnav will go through before having their Suhaag Raat!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: HARSHU246

na it doe not sucks 😳 😉😆


Does not suck! Agreed with Harshi a 100%!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Where is everyone else?

Harshi!?

Neha?

Freezie?

Akele hain
To kya gham hai
Chahe to Hamaare bas mein kya nahin

Bas ik Zara
Saath ho Tera...

Lol!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Well written...
Loved the head-bumping scene.
Hope you have reached safely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh wow awsuuum dear...loved it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
do update soon and dont forget to PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys its me neha sorry for not updating but i have sad news i cant update till two whole weeeks god uni is tough this year pleej understand and plus i just cant think of any thng to write ciao
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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY GUYS I MIGHT DISCONTINUE THIS SS AS I AM EXTREMELY BUSY BUT IF YOU CAN WAIT ONE MONTH FOR THE NEXT UPDATE IT IS UR CHOICE AND MIGHT START ANOTHER SS WHO KNOWS
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Posted: 13 years ago

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NOTE: DEAR READERS THIS WILL JUST BE A LONG FILLER UPDATE NOT MUCH WILL HAPPEN AS I AM LAZY RIGHT NOW AND MY BRAIN AINT FUNCTIONING SO NEXT TIME THE STORY WILL MOVE ON FASTER I PROMISE AND FOR THAT YOU NEED TO GIVE ME MORE LIKES AND COMMENTS SO PLEEJ DON'T HATE ME FOR THIS HUGS AND KISSES AND ENJOY,CIAO

AT LEAST 50 LIKES AND 7 PAGES OF COMMENTS SINCE THIS UPDATE IS 4 PAGES IN WORD AND 1141 WORDS TO BE EXACT SO BE GENEROUS PLEEJ.PLZ IGNORE THE MISTAKES DON'T HAVE TIME TO FIX THEM

Anjali led khushi to where the games were going to be played while Aman had just walked behind the great ASR like always

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In Heaven

Meanwhile back in Heaven Devi Maiyya was munching and sipping away on her jalebis,chips and lassi. As she was finally done w/ her 25 bags of chips, 6 boxes of jalebis and 9 glasses of lassi she took her T.V. remote and shut off the T.V. and ran as fast as she can and hid her remaining boxes of jalebis. As they were scattered all over the place and ready to be eaten. She then came back to where she sat and said

DM-Ab toh asal games choru bhi nahi hui or should I say tom and jerry fights

She said smirking, and we thought Arnav was the king of smirk now didn't we.

DM-just wait and watch the show aur yaad rahe aaj ek laambi raat hain toh sona mat kyonki yeh toh sirf trailer tha picture abhi baaki hain meri dosts.

With that she un-paused her screen and began munching and sipping away

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Raizada mansion

Anjali made khushi sit next to Arnav and everyone else was either sitting on the left side or right. As they wanted to support the one they wanted to win. Khushi was on the right side while Arnav on the left.

Payal-hum toh humari behen cum jethani ki saath hain.

Then sided hugged khushi indicating she is with her. khushi had just smiled back seeing the crazy and energetic side of her sister for the first time.

Akash-enough of sisterly love guys, well like always I am with my bhai

He said as he was air-fiving Arnav

Payal-Akashji ab bahut hogye aap ka bromance abhi ki abhi iss taraf aao pleaaaseee..

She asked with a pleading innocent smile which drove Akash crazy everytime.With that Akash whispered in Arnav's ear

Akash-bye bhai good luck gotta go wifey calling and left his side

Payal-sorry jijaji aur koi option nahi tha hope you can understand ab toh khushi hi jeethi gaye.

Arnav quietly mumbled to himself "if by losing I can go to sleep I will even become khushi's slave if you want"

Anjali had to rest her head on Aman to help her stop giggling, she then lifted her head and left his side, walked over to her darling chote and sat right behind him.

Anjali-sorry khushiji

Slapping her head three times.

Anjali-mera matlab bhabi pleassse forgive me I have to be with chote this time so sooorrryyy!!!!!

She nervously said while pulling her ears and biting her bottom lip.

Khushi-koi baat nahi Di anyways jeetaagye hum na kyon jiji

Elbowing payal

Arnav-confident much huh

Khushi-very!!!!

She replied low and seductively but audible to Arnav only

When she said this hot air blow against Arnav's face. This was not good at all for Arnav for him to try to hold on to his brewing desires for once.

The next minute they were sharing an intense Rabba Ve while everyone was going back and forth amazed how focused they were in the eye lock and not a single blink. It looked as if they were playing a staring contest or something like that.

Just then a light bulb started blinking in Aman's cunning peanut sized head and he just had to execute it, DM knows when will he ever get another opportunity again.

Don't they say soul parents are telepathic well same here in this case. Just like Aman an idea popped in Anjali's mischief head. With that aman went forward by Arshi while Anjali got up with payal.

Aman sat quietly next to Arnav, Arshi's eye lock was still happening forgetting everything and everyone around them.Payal and Anjali sat the opposite side of them. As Arnav and khushi were across each other Anjali and payal went on either sides between them. Then in a swift started to clap. As if they were in a concert or parade freaking the life out of Arnav and khushi but it did bring them back to planet Earth.

God knows where were they if not on the earth.

Arnav rolled his brownish caramel eyes sarcastically thanking DM a million times for sending payal and Anjali here to ruin the moment. What a timing huh. khushi kept trying to hid behind payal who kept moving side to side just to annoy her little sister and let everyone see a clear view of the newly blushing bride.

Aman out of nowhere pops up again and clears his throat at least three times one to get Asr attention second to annoy Asr and lastly did he mention annoy The ASR.

Aman-uuuhhhmmm uuuhhhmmm uhhhmmm'.

Just as Aman was about to clear his throat again Arnav angrily intercepted and said,

Arnav-what the, I heard u the first three times ok what do you want jijaji.

Emphasizing on the term jijaji purposely.

Aman-oh nothing my laadle saale sahib/boss just testing since you are physically here I am not so sure mentally you know.toh kaisa tha lalala arshiland

He said,elbowing with Arnav's to annoy him further

With that aman decided to go overboard and started imitate Arnav.Even DM was curious to see an imitation of Arnav. Aman comfortably sat criss cross Anjali leaning forward only few inches away from her. Staring into her meaningful eyes. After few seconds just like Arnav, Aman started to lose himself and wanting to just drown in those so called eyes. Shaking his head aman came back onto earth before he lost himself completely

And thought "concentrate u fool it not the time to romance with wifey is it"

He gets up takes a bow and sits back down

Aman-and that mera bhai is an eyelock no problem you still time to learn.fiqr not when aman is here

He had said as he was posing as a super hero

Arnav was going to give a comeback to that when naniji finally interrupted and grumpily said,

Nani-enough bachi with the teasing and staring contest lessons let's move I cant stay here all night you all continue after the games

Mami-irrigt sasuma now pleej go on with the gamewa go on

I too need my beauty sleepwa.

Anjali called hp to get a bowl filled with milk and roses petals while op got the ring from nani's room.

Anjali-Hari Prakashji woh kitchen se joh bowl counter pe hain lana

Please.Aur Om Prakash naniji ke kamare se woh extra angooti lao

At last everyone went to proceed the post marriage games. So it was true everything is dragged in Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon?

Precap-Tom and jerry fights continued, loads

Of masti and pranks ;)

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Edited by -chamkilli- - 13 years ago

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