Kr-ss-BAATCUTTER Tumne Esa Socha Bhi Kaise(part8) - Page 7

awesome update
oh no kriya is leaving for nk soo soon
wow taani is gonna help the gang
update soon

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nice update..

Wow... Luved al ur updates its osm ... Plsss update the next part soon ...!!!

Part-6


Rey : (in mind) mujhe taani se baat karni hogi ...

Sharon : toh hum kya plan kare ...???

Vishaka : dude hume kisi bhi tarah ... Kriya ko college lana hoga ...

Rey : uski phikar mat karo mene shivam se keh diya hai kriya koh kisi bhi tarah college le aane ko ... Voh le aayega ...

Neha: sure rey is ...???

Rey: haan neha mai sure hoon ...

Swayum : abb plan kya hai ...???

Sharon : haan hume jaldi plan banani hai ...

Rey :(in mind) par mujhe ab taani se baat karni hai ...

Rey : guys mai ... Dus minute mai aaya .. Mujhe kuch kaam yaad aagaya hai...

Gang: haan teek hai...

Swayum :( in mind) rey kahan ja raha hai ...?

Rey in fire exit ... He texts taani ..

Rey(msg) taani meet me in fire exit in five ...

Beep beep ..

Taani : hey krishna ji ... Ab kisne msg beja ...???

She checks her phone ...

Taani : rey mujh se milna chahte hain ... Ab unhe mujhse baat kya karni hai ...

She reaches fire exit aur andhar jati hai...

Rey: hi...

Taani : hi rey.. Aapne mujhe kyun bhulaya...??

Rey: taani voh ... Vohhh ...

Taani : kya baat hai rey ..???

Rey : taani ... Mai voh ...

Taani : ji boliye ...

Rey : TAANI MAI KRIYA SE PYAR KARTHA HOON ... ( he said tat in one go )

Taani was shocked ... Tears started to form in her eyes

Rey now turns his back towards taani

Rey : mai us se bahut pyar kartha hoon ... Par voh yeh samaj nahi pa rahi hai ... Voh samaj thi hai ki mai tumse pyar kartha hoon ...

Taani :( controlling herself) rey yeh aap kya keh rahe ho ...??

Rey : taani voh actully ... Baat yeh hai ki ... He narrates the whole story ...

Taani was shocked ...

Taani : kk..ya... Kriya ne aapko... aur ...mujhe paas lane... ke liye... shivam ...koh beja ...

Rey : ( now turns towards her ) haan taani...

Rey then notices her eyes ... In which the tears were ready to flow ...

Rey: taani mujhe maaf kardo ... Mai sach mai nahi jantha ki mai kya kar rahan hoon ... Mujhe kya ho gaya tha Kuch din pehle ... Mai tumhare aankon se tears dekh nahi saktha hoon ... Mujhe patha hai ki mai ne kriya koh buladiya tha aur tum...tumhare bare mai sochtha tha ... Mai yeh sochta tha ki usne mujhe ditch kiya aur isiliye mujhe use bhulana hoga... par mai galat tha...jabse mujhe yeh patha chala ki kriya ne meri vajah se yeh sab kiya hai ... Toh mai us se phir se pyar karne laga ... Is baar us se bahut pyaar karne laga hoon ... Mai aapne aap ko doshi mantha hoon yeh sab ke liye ... Par taani mujhe sach mai maaf kardo ... Mai tumse pyar nahi kartha aur nahi kar paaonga ... Mai sirf aur sirf kriya se pyar kartha hoon ...

by now tears had flowed down taani's cheeks

Taani: ( controlling her tears nd rubbing it ) aap apne aap ko doshi mat maniye ... Yeh sab mera kasur hai ... Mai hi hamesha sab problem ki root cause hoti hoon ... Naki aap ... Aap phikar maat kijiye mai aapne aap ko sambal paaongi ... Yeh pehli baar toh nahi hai ... Jahan aapne mujhe tuk raya hai...

Rey remembers the flashback were taani had worn kriya's dress nd he had scolded her...

Rey cupped taani's face

Rey: taani esi baat nahi hai ...(but was cut by taani)

Taani : (pulled back) snif * nahi rey... Pls ... Mai apne aap ko ... Sambal paongi ... Vese ethna mushkil nahi hai ... Aap ne nahi mujhe kabhi kaha ki aap mujhse pyar karthe the ... Toh mujhe shant hone mai zyada waqt nahi lage ga ...

Rey : taani mujhe maaf kardo ... Tum mere vajah se hamesha roti ho :..

Taani : nahi rey ... Nahi ...(rubbing her tears and showing a fake smile)
Aap bahut ache ho ... Kriya bhi bahut achi hai ... Aap dono hamesha se ek doosre ke liye bane the aur rahoge ...

Rey :( happy to see her smile ) thanks taani par voh toh ese nahi samaj thi ...

Taani : matlab ..????

Rey: voh samaj thi hai ki mai tumse pyar kartha hoon aur isiliye toh voh aapne pyar ko kabul nahi kar rahi hai

Taani : kya...!!!!

Just then rey's phone rings ... Rey sees the caller id ...

Rey: swayum ...he picks up the call

Rey : haan swayum bol ...

Swayum : tu kahan hai yaar ... Jaldi aa na ...!!!! Plan bana na hai ki nahi ...??

Rey : haan haan abhi do minute mai aatha hoon ... Bye

Swayum : teek hai jaldi aa bye ..

Rey cuts the call..

Rey: taani abhi mujhe jana hai ... Bye ...

Taani : ji rey ...

Rey dashes out of the fire exit ... Rite after rey left ... Taani bursts out crying ...

Taani:(selftalk) kyun krishna ji kyun ... Hamesha mere saat hi kyun hota hai ...*snif* *snif*... Nahi taani nahi ... Tum nahi rooge ... Tum ab unki help karoge ... Haan haan ...

Taani:(rubbing off her tears ) chal ab tum rey ko unka pyar aur louins ko unka dost wapas lane mai help karogi...

She picks up her bag nd leaves to the girls washroom to freshen up ...

On the other side ,

Swayum : nahi guys yeh teek nahi hoga ...

Gang : (shouting) are kyun nahi teek hoga ...

Sharon: guys swayum teek keh raha hai ... Yeh plan teek nahi hai...

Gang : yes

Swaron : nahi

Gang : haan

Swaron: nahi

Gang : yes nd yes

Swaron : no nd no

Rey stands next to the rehersal hall door nd watches dis silly fight goin on nd smiles ...

Nilesh : guys guys ... Aap logon ne yeh baat notice ki kya ... Pehli bar sharon swayum ki baat maan rahi hai ...

Gang : haan ... Ohhh ohhh

Swayum notices sharon who looks down blushing ...

Bharat : abe tu sahi keh raha hai aaj kal yeh dono kam jagad rahen hain

Neha : bharat sahi keh raha hai... Aaj kal yeh dono kuch alag hi behave kar rahein hai ...

Swayum : are... Guys esa kuch nahi hai ... Bas hum yeh plan se ... I mean ...

Sharon : haan ... Haan ... Voh ...

Gang : *kuch toh hua hai .. Tss tss
Kuch ho gaya hai ...
Do char din se ... Lagata hai jaise...

Swaron here are blushing to the core ...

Swayum : are guys ...

he then sees rey standing next to the door smirkingHe glares at him ... Nd rey stops smiling nd bites his lower lip to control his laughter ... Swayum then shows eye signal to rey to help him ...

Rey : guys guys guys ... Ho kya raha hai ... Yahan hume plan bana ni hai naki tease karni hai ... Jaldi se plan banana hai ... Voh kisi bhi waqt aa sakthi hai ...

Swayum : haan rey teek keh raha hai...

Sharon : haan guys ...

Vicky: dude baat yeh hai ki humne na plan bana li hai ...

Rey: huh ..???

Nilesh : haan dude ... Plan yeh hai ki .. Kriya ke athe hi hum na us par phool pheken ge aur uske samne aakar mafi mangen ge ... Kaisa hai plan ...??

Rey hits nilesh 's head ... ( not very hard he just taps his head)

Rey: bakwass plan hai ... Yeh kiya toh BAATCUTTER kabhi nahi manegi ...

Gang: BAA... wattt...????

he then realises wat he said nd bites his tongue..

Nilesh:(teasing) baatcutter nd all huh...???

Vicky: (teasing) bhai ... Mujhe nahi patha tha ki tune uska naam baatcutter raka hai ...

Rey : (blushing) are... Guys.. Are...

Simmi: (teasing) hmmm... Rey ne kriya koh pyar se... BAAT..CUTTER bulatha hai ... Haye...!!!

Rey:...(blushing) Umm esa kuch nahi hai guys...

Rinni: (confused) yeh baatcutter kya hota hai... Ek minute ... Baat means talk aur cutter means cut karna ... Are... Talk cut karna .. Yeh kaisa pet name hai ...

Every1 hits there head...

Vishaka: are rinni .. Humara GS apni EX AGS ko pyar se koi naam diya hai tumhe us se kya ...(teasing)

Rey: guyss ...(blushing)

Rey looks at swayum who is standing nd laughing... Now rey glares at him ...

Now rey nd swayum 's eye talks ( it means they r doing isharas with there eyes )

Swayum : (eye talk) heh .. Heh ... Ab phas gaya na ... Mujh pe has raha tha na ab ... Mai tuj pe hasoonga...

Rey: (eyetalk) are plsss plsss swayum sorry yaar pls help karna yaar plsss

Swayum :( eyetalk) hehe .. Hehe,... Nahi ...karoonga...!!!

Rey:(eyetalk) are pls na yaar tumhari help ki na maine .. Ab pls na yaar ...

Swayum :(eyetalk) acha teek hai ...

Eye talks are finished...

Swayum : guys guys guys (shouts) hum kya ab doosri plan banaye ... Yeh sab baad mai hota rahega...

Gang: haan teek hai..

Sharon : ab hum kya plan banaye ... Kuch socho guys ...

Swayum goes nd stands next to rey ..

Swayum :( whispers) chalo bakt tumhe baksh diya ...

Rey :( whispers ) chup kar ...

Neha: neha not getting any other plan ...

Vicky : haan kagu mujhe bhi koi plan nahi patha ...

Nilesh : are aap dono ke dimag mai kuch hoga toh plan banega na ... Hamesha kagu aur babu ...

Vicky : chup kar nil ...

Rey : guys plan ...!!!!

Sharon : haan guys hume kuch badiya plan bana na padega jisse ... Kriya is college mai vapas aa sakthi hai ...

Swayum : par kya ...

: mai aapki help karoongi... mere pass ek idea hai ...

Every1 turned to see who it was ...

Gang: taani ...

Taani: haan mai ... Mujhe sab patha hai mai aapki help karna chahti hoon ...

Vishaka: back off dude ... Nahi hume tumhari help ki zaroorat hai nahi tumhara so called plan ...

Swayum : are vishaka ... Ek baar toh uska plan sun lethe hain ...

Simmi : haan yaar.. Humare dimag mai toh koi plan nahi hai ... Atleast iski sun toh lete hai ...

Rey: vishaka pls aaj nahi ... Pls hum sab ko kriya vapas is college mei chahiye ..

Vishaka : ok watever...

Rey: taani bolo tumhara plan kya hai...

Taani : dekh yeh ... Agar shivam unhe is college mai jo bhi hota ta voh bataya hoga toh yeh bhi bataya hoga ki sixth dancer abhi tak nahi mila hai aur footloose teen din mai hai ... Toh agar hum jab kriya college mai aye tab ek natak kare toh ...

Swayum : taani tum kehna kya chahti ho ...

Taani : bhai plan yeh hai ki ...….…...,.,..,,,...….……

Sharon : hmmm yeh plan zaroor work karega ...

Swayum : haan acha plan hai ...

Rey: is se toh kriya atleast college toh aayegi ...

Taani : toh plan ko start karein ...???

Every1 except for vishaka : haan lets start ...

Every1 luk at vishaka ...

Vishaka : wattt

Neha : nice plan it is na vishaka ...

Vish: watever ..

Rey side hugs vishaka nd tells ... Haan ya na ...!??

Vishaka : ok fn its a gud plan ... Ab kaam par lag jaye ...???

Vicky : vese hai kahan yeh shivam aur kriya ...

Nil : kahin kriya ne aane se mana toh na kardi ...

DOBRIYAL's mansion

Shivam knocking on kriya's door ...

Shivam : kriya ...

Kriya opens the door ...

Kriya : kya chahiye

Shivam : voh kya tum mere saat bahar jana chahti ho ...???

Kriya: huh ...???

Shivam : voh bas ghumne ...

Kriya thinking ...

Kriya : ...


Precap - toh kya hoga kriya ka jawab ... Kya voh jayegi shivam ke saat bahar ... Kya karne wale hai louins...Kya taani ka plan successful hoga ... Yeh sab dekhyega next update mai ...

Heh... Felt like writing a precap like this so wrote ... Suspense wali precap ... Heh ...!!!

Yaar pls like button press karo aur comment bhi karo na plsss...

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rocking update

Amazing update
loved it
i hope taani's plan works
update soon

Wow all the update was very nice sorry for late commenting my exam are going so i'm busy now day today my area under power cut so i got a time to read ur ss it was very nice kriya shivam sister rey know the truth of kriya the moment was damm nice and hot thanx for the pm udate next fast

Awsome update . ..!
Loved it ...!
Update d next part soon ..!