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fffan123

@fffan123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Hi Risha and Gayathri, Bothe teh OS were so lovely. Absolutely loved them.

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@AdorableTrouble

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Risha, Gayathri. You guys are amazing !!
Superb wonderful awesomely sweet OSs !
Sorry, can't give a proper comment as I'm on phone and lack time, but fantastic work girls !

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MagicalKash

@MagicalKash

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

The like button is not working again :|
and now coming to the OS's...wow!! Risha and Gayatri both the OS's were so beautiful. So touching. The beauty and the beast OS was love in it's most uncomplicated and beautiful form. And Gayatri's os had such an adorable arnav..I just love both of yours writings. Keep writing alwyas. :)

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arushi05

@arushi05

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

what a great surprise!!!😃

both the os were awesome.

in risha's os arnav i loved the last part so much. the way she brought out the title of the story so well.👏

and in the os broken english the love confession was se magical. i loved it dammit😃

thanks for the pm

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

I loved them both, dammit! ❤️
Rish, Gayatri..u two r superstars..loved d first one for d subtle bt imp lesson it teaches..
n d second one was a smile-bringer..a joy to read!
Absolutely adored both of them!

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#166

wow..both the stories are amazing😊👏i wish u continue that beauty n the beast..its such a pleasure reading ur stories😊

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What's in a name? :P

@debby_11

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Risha...i am really very impressed...the One shot was seriously super awesome just loved it...their emotions as well as the narration of their emotions...a beautiful piece of work..Superb... keep it up :)

Really loved it. :)

Gayathri...you surprised me by your piece of work..it was the best piece of work by you that i have ever read...the simplicity ,the beauty ,the cuteness ,the emotions all were so beautifully expressed ...I seriously loved it :) Fantastic I must say :)...Well Done :)

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Both the OS Touched my heart ...Love you Both God bless you :)

@ Both the writers i m telling u try and join some production house they seriously need such brilliant writers(TMLS-SP)...They are wasting their money on other story writers as they hardly impress me by their work...they are not strong enough..BUT you two our seriously powerful...they dont even fall in the same standard as you people do...Your standard is seriously very high...and yes My expectations are high from now onwards so keep entertaining us with such excellent works ..:)

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prerna salian

@prerna31s

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Risha's Os : Wow dat was lovely !! Beauty n the beast indeed !! :)

Gayatri's Os : cute !! Liked how he tries to learn hindi for her n she makes pasta for him :)

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Sona

@mistyrains

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#169

[Beauty & The Beast]

I think, I cried a bit there. It was so beautiful, brimming with a sadness that somehow was toatlly overshadowed by the concept of the OS. Just brilliant Risha <3

[Broken English]

I think I was dancing in sheer delight while reading this one. The anticipation of first love, and that too, love at the first sight. Mesmerizing work :D

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

two beautiful stories!

Risha, loved yours about the importance of sharing love and one's time with those you can help rather than just money... as I too love reading, I could really relate to your story: reading has always opened up a world of adventure to me... it was and is an escape from my mundane life! buaji was so adorable as was the scene of khushi putting arnav in his place and then, when she realised her mistake, trying to apologise for hurting him! that they came to understand each other was good

Gayathri, had fun reading of arnav's struggles to communicate with khushi and being consumed with constant thoughts of khushi... the English-Hindi dictionary was a nice touch. the voice of the heart needs no language! trust arnav to take advantage of the situation to whisper sweet nothings in her ear!