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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

I'm starting to get doubts about your telepathic connection girls :p

*edit*

Whoops! Was Risha meant to res? I'm sooo sorry! :( Stupid me!

*edit again*

The Like button is MIA so let me say I loved them both, dammit! :)

Awww.. Rish your OS is such a lesson to people! Not considering the AK angle for the moment ;)
I mean, yes, money and donations are necessaries especially for charitable organisations but it so much more meaningful when you actually spend time with them! :) Haha! I loved Buaji and her cupid window here.. And my memories of Enid Blytons and Nancy Drews' have been refreshed in the past couple of days. No wonder I feel like setting my big fat CA books on fire now :p

And G.. You have proved today that languages can never be a barrier to "I love you, dammit"s :D lol. I can so picture a lost looking NRI in a colouful Indian Mela! :D The office setting somehow reminded me of Outsourced! Their interaction was so amusing to read, still very real! :)

You know what I found common - You both enjoy writing about Arnav's POV when he first sees Khushi na! And how they affect each other and make an impression without fail in suspiciously windy environs! :p

Edited by Psychedelic - 13 years ago

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Risha

@LivingInPajamas

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

-EDIT-

Ok so my like button is not working and neither can I see any likes -.-

Anyhow Gayu since I have already read it- you know it was AWESOME! :D

Firstly I love the setting of a fair and how they were "as alone as you can be in a fair" .Secondly, Cotton Candies remind me of childhood ..I remember though we used to call them Hawa Mithai :P Because they disappear into the air as soon as you ate them! But ofcourse speaking Gudiya ke baal suits Khushi ji😆

I love the way you have portrayed how language isnt a big deal when it comes to love and when it comes to Khushi and Arnav then for sure it isnt :) For a moment this NRI Arnav reminded me of NK 😛

But Gayu honestly the way you give attention to all the little details takes my breath away ..

After what seemed like an eternity she lowered her eyes thus giving him an opportunity to observe how her eyelashes shaded her eyes when she wanted them to.

^^Honestly.I loved this line.My writing feels so so...juvenile if I may say so after that :P

Hahaha and I loved the She didn't call part ;) Felt like she was giving him time to dream over her and get tortured for a while!

He looked at the book in his hands. The book of glory. The same book that would offer a solution to all his problems.

Hindi -English dictionary.

^^Sarcastically hilarious🤣

And uff!! The ending was ofcourse the best of all :')

Hindi Angrezi ko maaro goli,In NSA Love is the only boli 😆

Ok that was lame.

Gayu.I love you dammit.

PS-And I love DDD too :D

Edited by Risha_ipkknd - 13 years ago

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

res

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Okay first I'm commenting on Ri's OS coz well I have already read it before she posted it :p

First of all you dedicated it to me? Eeps! I didn't see that coming. Thank you so much Ri! 🤗

And I loved it.

Perfect would be the right word.

The song is perfect for the story. And Ranbir kapoor

Arnav doesn't know hindi? What The! NRI? Hmmm. Interesting!

The best part was that though he doesn't live in India still he feels like he is among his own people.

So love at first sight. Wow! I'm loving this.

Khushi's description was perfect. I was actually imagining her while reading it.

And he spoke in english? Did she understand? I don't think so :(

Wow! Khushi works in AR. Too good!

Loved the cheerfull & jovial khushi.

And the cotton candy thing was really cute. Very unique!

Finally! They confessed. Though they didn't understand each others language still they were able to understand each others feelings. Beautiful message. Love breaks all boundaries!

Loved it Ri!

Keep writing! 🤗

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Haha no probs guys! Atleast we are good enough to get such fast ress'es😆

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

res for rish!

Edit:

The like button has disappeared -__-

Loved it Rish! So so so beautiful!

First of all I'm really happy coz My Rish is back, yes the one who used to write long OSs & I loved them.

This was really very beautiful.

The concept was different & touching.

So chatting & being over-excited are khushi's hobbies? What The! 😆

She's a teacher? Wow! A sexy & adorable teacher I must say ;)

The things which wrote about orphans was really touchy & I loved khushi for doing so much for those kids. I can totally imagine khushi doing all this for them because as you once said khushi has a big heart & as her name says, she spreads happiness everywhere.

Awww the kids are so attached to khushi. And loved the way she remembered their needs.

Buaji sounds like a fun person. Adorable!

Risha I know this is an AU but that doesn't mean that you'll turn HP into a driver. That's Na-insaafi! Our poor HP! 🤣

Arnav can never change. He is a businessman & he'll be a businessman forever. But his description was perfect. Hot & sexy Raizada! ;)

So he donates for the orphanage. Interesting and realistic! You write Arnav's character so perfectly. Hats off to you!

Loved their fight!

And buaji playing cupid? Me likey! :p

I knew it! I knew he is attached to the kids too, he doesn't show it but he's a very sweet person by heart.

Loved the ending especially the part where khushi realizes that he's an orphan too.

Keep writing 🤗

P.S.- Look at my comment 😲 Longer than Ri's OS!

Edited by ...Doctor... - 13 years ago

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Im resing outta excitement!

Edit: This is for Risha's OS.

Im sorry for unresing it soo very late!

I know Im bad, but things kept cropping up LOL.

Anyway omg what a beautiful beautiful OS! It's so very heart touching on so many levels.

Firstly it depicted how Khushi was an orphan, but never liked using the word orphan because, well obviously it hurts to be called one. She is so sensible, I must admit!

Love her dedication towards the children and how she took every ounce of effort to keep them happy and never miss out on anyone of them.

Then it showed her distaste towards people who think the world runs on money. And Oh boy she did mistake Arnav for one of those people and he turned out to be something else. Well Khushi my girl, good for you ;)

It showed her immediate realization of mistakes whether her own or other, and her part on making up for it! :)

I loved how she ran behind Arnav when realization bout the book struck her!

Arnav- this man had endured so much pain in his life, but he chooses to camouflage his sadness with his ruthlessness, all the while being a gem of a person. Aww he gave his present to the kids? That was soo amazing!

I loved how you concluded it on a happy note. I really am a sucker for happy endings!

Loved it. Sorry for late comment again! :)

Edited by jessicad - 13 years ago

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Jessica

@jessicad

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

One more res, cos there's another story lol

gayu Im here before the PM.

You have gotta love me baby

EDIT: GAYU'S OS

Ohmyfreakinggosh gayuuu!! Woah man I loved it!

The whole language barrier and how it never got the better of their love! Im so speechless i donnu what to say!

Its this mesmerizing story of first loves and thats why Im so emotional now!

I've always believed in the concept of first love! You know sparks fly the moment you look into one another's eyes and that has to be when you first meet the person. Heart strings may tug or not, but its a start!

Aaand its not a surprise why I love it so much!

Im so happy you made Arnav fall for her in the very first instant and that too the moment HE LOOKED IN HER EYES. Magical moment for me! 😳

And hence went on his mission to make her his! They faced problems of language but heart and love has no language! aww :)

He finally told her he loved her and he learnt the dictionary for her!! omg he loves her soo much! He senses her presence and that made tingles go down in my stomach!

A beautiful beautiful OS Gayu!!

You and Risha seem to be having a heart connection? Both of them had blue dupattas lol 😆

sorry again for unresing this late! I know you love me so you wont mind :)

Edited by jessicad - 13 years ago

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Gayathri <3 call me G3,Gayu,Gags

@-happilyunknown

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: ...Doctor...
res

Edit:

Okay first I'm commenting on Ri's OS coz well I have already read it before she posted it :p
First of all you dedicated it to me? Eeps! I didn't see that coming. Thank you so much Ri! 🤗
And I loved it.
Perfect would be the right word.
The song is perfect for the story. And Ranbir kapoor

Arnav doesn't know hindi? What The! NRI? Hmmm. Interesting!
The best part was that though he doesn't live in India still he feels like he is among his own people.
So love at first sight. Wow! I'm loving this.
Khushi's description was perfect. I was actually imagining her while reading it.
And he spoke in english? Did she understand? I don't think so :(

Wow! Khushi works in AR. Too good!
Loved the cheerfull & jovial khushi.
And the cotton candy thing was really cute. Very unique!

Finally! They confessed. Though they didn't understand each others language still they were able to understand each others feelings. Beautiful message. Love breaks all boundaries!

Loved it Ri!
Keep writing! 🤗

If i had a like button i would sooo like this..-_-

Ahahaha glad you like it! <3 Well you had no choice but to like it! I dedicated it to you dammit!🤗

And yes i am spamming in my own thread..*weird*

Of course i will keep on writing! Any doubtsss?? :D

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Risha 🤗 That piece was just Marvellous!

There were no romantic moments but it made me so happy! It was beautiful. I just loved it Dammit!

The way Khushi questioned him whether he can bring back the children's parents with his money and the reaction of Arnav everything was beautiful! And i loved Buaji in this 😆 I Freaking loved her.

The ending too was cute. Yeah yeah Now I have to imagine that they visit the orphanage everyday and fell in love and Guterwas gutterwa 😆

But simply loved it!

Gayathri...It was like a movie! :) So cute!

And When you said that he is an NRI with a very bad hindi knowledge it was one and only NK that came to my mind 😆 Love this Arnav so much! Love at first sight 😳

Hindi-English dictionary was all he needed! Damn! 😆

Hum bhi aapse I LOVE YOU DAMMIT!

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

wow...superb work...👏

the first one was deeply moving, Arnav readiness to give up his parents gift, i dont know y it made me tear up...sniff...i loved it...its sooo beautifully done...loved it Risha...

another masterpiece...!!!!!🤗

the next one...well waht can i say...it was sooo cute...Arnie puff having trouble wid hindi./...shooo chweeet!!!!!

and first love...gush...dreamy smile...

hah beautiful os's...

i can finally go to sleep pecefully nw that i have gotten undiluted romance into my systemm...yay

Edited by Arshiarnav1741 - 13 years ago