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Posted: 19 years ago
Ok im sorry i got lazy before then busy with Kitchen work Dad was so mad at me for leaving kitchen at this state 😆 Continue now in a bit. Mind I tell you It's a sad part yet so cute specially that Terry 8 yrs old girl part it touched my heart so much as i wrote it. anyways you'll kno what i mean when i continue 😳

Thanks for all wonderful comments
luv,
Ruby 😳
Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
Loook out for the BOLD and colored writing.

Recap
pg 19

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Today's
Part 15

Kripa walked out of the hospital room only to see Somesh, standing there with tears in his eyes.

S - kripa... was that really 😭
K - *instantly hugged him* and 😭 her pain out
S - kripa bolo warna let me go talk to the doctor
K - I'll tell you can we go outside?? 😭

They walk out of Sunny Brook Hospital (acctual hospital in toronto for cancer research) and start going to the hospital park (also real). They sat down on the grounds as kripa's tears wouldn't stop rolling, her heart beating to its max and brain stuck on what to do

K - Bhai..😭 what are you doing here?
S - I came to hospital for sum donation i was giving but tell me what just happened inside
K - After my first opperation it was all good Then i was married, was the luckiest person on earth when i got kashish. Lekin 2 years ago i went for my check up and dosctors said that there was something wrong. I told them my whole history and tehy did tests again. Aur phir they said that i had the gene BRCA 2(also a real thing) a gene for cancer ...2 being an extreme stage. aur woh 😭 2 has a 2nd attack, it cant be cured. So here i stand today 😭 fighting with my destiny, bhai why me😭

She gets up and starts walking

Somesh is left there 😭 and thinkng
" mere jaan why you?! why not me.. look you have everything now all the joys finally over with dadi's death and mama papa's loss but now.. I will make this better for you.. I will do something for you 😭 "

You see Kripa walking when she sees a little girl on a wheelchair. She immediately walks over to her
K - Hi sweety
G - Hi
K - how are you?
G - im PERFECT!with great enthusiasm, u?
K - broken
G - how come?
K - i have to leave everything
G - so Does everyone..
K - huh?
G - well everyone leaves the world rt? why not leave with a smile on your face? if you know you have little time why not do something to change this so others' don't have to go through the same thing. Im told i cant be more then 10 years old, im only 8 right now. So i will do something i will start a donation for people for kids who die younger then me 😭

Kripa couldn't help but quickly bent down and hug her. That little girl made Kripa realize how much more in life she got got then she ever dreamt of, and how kids like this angel here have so much courage.

Somesh is shown standing beside the wheelchair, listening with tears in his eyes.

Kripa let go
K - sweety anything i can do to help i will do it and if you ever need an older sister or a friend me and daughter will always be with you *kisses her cheek*
G - Im Terry. Can I meet your daughter? 😳
Kripa took out a picture from her wallet of kashish
K - this is my daughter. But what school do you go to hunny?
T - Russell D Barber(real school LOL 😳 )..
K - oh my daughter also goes there and I teach there so when you need a hug come to my class ok? 😊
T - Thank you

Somebody came up to Terry's wheelchair
TM(terry's mom) - Hi im Terry's mother , I hope she didn't bug you much ( kripa could sense fear and pain ih that lady's eyes)
K - not at all and she is in my school Im Mrs.K, kindergarden teacher at Russell so feel free to drop in anytime. I should go now
TM - Thank you so much
*shakes hands with TM then hugs terry*
K - Bye!

Kripa quickly half running but still walking with ters starting up in her eyes went to her car. She didn't care where anyone was at the moment all she cared about was to know where how what kashish was doing

An 8 years old girl taught Kripa a lesson of her life. Something that made Kripa's heart so light yet broken. Kripa went straight home and ran to Kashish's room ignoring anyone or anything that was in the way ( which included the toys all over the place and Angad trying to see what was wrong)

Kripa went right into Kashish's room and Hugged her little angel, as she slept.

K - I won't let anything happen to you my jaan *KISSES HER CHEEK* nothing at all *KISS FOREHEAD*

*Flashback*

Dr - we did the testing on your daughter and she is fine. She does not have the BRCA1 meaning there is no possibility of her getting cancer because of you. There is always chances of cancer from other products but it wont be a natural
K - THANK YOU SO MUCH! * her eyes sparkled*

*end of flashback*

Angad stood at the door looking at a sick, hurt, pained Kripa he had never seen since the senior year of highschool

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What is Somesh thinking to do? What will happen to Kripa? The lesson that Terry taugh Kripa, how will it help kripa? How is Angad going to react as he stands to see a falshback to times to the kripa to the state she was in before the times he never wanted to think about?


FANFIC COMING TO END SOON! BUT BEFORE I WILL MAKE SOME GOOD PARTS TOO😳

hope you liked the part. I know its sad, don't worry I'll somehow make it up for it😳 Do comment

Luv,
Rubina😳
Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 😭 😭 that was soo cutee and sadd 😭 😭 😭 ;l;oved itt awww ur ff endingg 😭 😭 😭 am gonnaa miss it and u better start a new ff and make that ff happy 😭 😭 😭 awww ur part almost made mee cryy 😭 😭 😭
continue sooon
ur sweetheart
kashis
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Posted: 19 years ago
😭 😭 that was sooo sad 😭 , but seriously wut that 8 yr old said was true, plz dont kill somesh he is a sweet heart brother , u noe dont make him donate sumtin 2 kripa cuz i want to go to angad wen kripa dies 😉 ...lol 😆 ...cpnt soon!!! 😃

xoxoxo-Hawa 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: kyph05

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww 😭 😭 😭 that was soo cutee and sadd 😭 😭 😭 ;l;oved itt awww ur ff endingg 😭 😭 😭 am gonnaa miss it and u better start a new ff and make that ff happy 😭 😭 😭 awww ur part almost made mee cryy 😭 😭 😭
continue sooon
ur sweetheart
kashis

lol kashish you knew wht i was gonig to do but still aww mere jaan don't be sad 🤗.. had no intentions to make you cry (K) yaar let this fanfic end first then I'll start the 2nd one ok 😆

second last part tomorrow and belive me its going to be LONG!😆

luv ya sweetheart,

Ruby

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

😭 😭 that was sooo sad 😭 , but seriously wut that 8 yr old said was true, plz dont kill somesh he is a sweet heart brother , u noe dont make him donate sumtin 2 kripa cuz i want to go to angad wen kripa dies 😉 ...lol 😆 ...cpnt soon!!! 😃

xoxoxo-Hawa 😛

hahah hawa yaar wht do u have against kripa and trying to kill her😆

continue will be tomorrow

SECOND LAST PART ( i think not sure😆) but i know its gna b a LONG ONE

thanks agin,

Ruby

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

hahah hawa yaar wht do u have against kripa and trying to kill her😆

continue will be tomorrow

SECOND LAST PART ( i think not sure😆) but i know its gna b a LONG ONE

thanks agin,

Ruby

lol, nothing rly, i just want angad for myself😳😳😆, so ur gonna finish this ff??? cant wait till tommorrow!!!!😃

xoxoxo-Hawa <3

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: hawoo

lol, nothing rly, i just want angad for myself😳😳😆, so ur gonna finish this ff??? cant wait till tommorrow!!!!😃

xoxoxo-Hawa <3

lol yaar ab mein likhoun bhi toh kya likhoun? kis barey mein likhoun 😆.. theek hai Hawa u can have angad.. SOMEHOW! 😆

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

awesome plz cont soon. 👏

thankss. continue will be tomorrow😊

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

Ok im sorry i got lazy before then busy with Kitchen work Dad was so mad at me for leaving kitchen at this state 😆 Continue now in a bit. Mind I tell you It's a sad part yet so cute specially that Terry 8 yrs old girl part it touched my heart so much as i wrote it. anyways you'll kno what i mean when i continue 😳

Thanks for all wonderful comments
luv,
Ruby 😳

ruby........jhooot bolna 2 koi tumsay sikhay!!!😛anyways that was an amazing part

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