KahaniYehPyarKi -my ff ~ Last Part pg 28! - Page 19

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: soaps_01

Hey ruby!
Great part! What the little girl said is true 😳
But I was wondering how u know all those things!
Plz cont soon

Thanks for the comment. that baby girl's words were making me emotional when i proof read my own fanfic😳.. LoL how do i know what? well the hospital used to be near my house BEFORE where i used to live n ive been to that hospital. so i know about the hosp and the park. The BRCA gene code... i know from my bio class.and the school Russell D barber ahahh my baby sister went to taht school for kindergarden 😆. aur kuch ?😳 aur haan continue coming in half n hour im SLOWLY typing it right now😆

hope u raed it soon eheheh 😳

tc.

Ruby

Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Recap
A must read on pg 21

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Today's
Part 16

Well now came the hardest part of Kripa's life. She had to tell something to angad which he would have never accepted. Something he would never want to hear.

Angad saw kripa so lost but couldn't do anything. He walked away and went to the living room. Somesh was sitting there. He had tears in his eyes.

A - SOMESH! when did you come?
S - Just a while ago

They both Hug each other. Angad felt the same pain in somesh as he saw in kripa. Somesh felt confussion and uncertanty and pain and anger but still LOVE in angad's eyes.

S - Angad, did you talk to Kripa yet?
A - huh?
S - yeah her birthday... its in two weeks
A - yeah i knoww! im so excited I have a surprise planed for her. But we still have to give her a party.
S - No angad, make it private. Just her, Just you. Only the two of u.

Angad was still confussed but agreed to Somesh.

2 Days before Kripa's birthday ( a week before month ends)
At night Angad went in the room only to see Kripa sitting in the window, looking out at the full moon and tearful eyes

K - this might be my last time 😭
Then she went up to the bed, to the right side where angad always slept. SHe bent down, her hand went over his pillow... silently cried 😭

Angad couldn't take it anymore. He walked right into the room with tears in his eyes, pain in his heart. the words of kripa "this might be my last time" rang like wedding bells ( they r loud 😆).

Angad went right to the bed and sat on the floor.

A - your hiding something
K - yeah...
A - from me
K - never
A - Tell me
K - dinner? 😭

Sorry for interuption i have to go I'll come back and Continue soon 😳 tomorrow Morning I'll continue FROM the dinner and watch out u will like the part it might be a little sad though
take care,
sorry again
Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
ah ruby u have made me so sad!!!!!cont soon!! i dont like the ff's ending you better do sumthing~!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
yea rubina i agree with muqu!!!neways roking prt!!!cant wait till tommorrow!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
Nice part! Thanks for the info above. And I am agreeing with muqu and hawoo!
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: muqualp

ah ruby u have made me so sad!!!!!cont soon!! i dont like the ff's ending you better do sumthing~!!!!



hayeee allah muqu i do have a better ending ok.. theek hai? not this one and there is more to the end that u cant guess

Originally posted by: hawoo

yea rubina i agree with muqu!!!neways roking prt!!!cant wait till tommorrow!!!



thanks for the comment ok I'll do sumthing else for ending, khush?? yup update tomororw and not the end yet

-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: soaps_01

Nice part! Thanks for the info above. And I am agreeing with muqu and hawoo!
Plz cont soon

thanks for the comment. eheh once again so its 3 ppl ok i'll do sumthing better for ending, khush?😆

continue tomorrow after summer school

-Ruby

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice to noe itz 3 against one so ppl come on lets outstand this vote against rubina to make dis ff a haapy one and not sad!!!! 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
lol even though i lubb angad, i cant stand him livin without his kripa ...now hawa that was a real scarafice 😛 ...wut say rubina 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

UFF since Hawa is after to get me, so is Muqu and soaps. Here is a question for my readers 😳 chose one or the other option and please if possible say why 😆

a) Go on with what i have planed(its not so bad and pretty realiztic😳)

b) Make the ending abit different, its too messed right now ( HOW?)

c) Ending is good but could be better, change it aorund a bit and have it a little happier

yourz to choose from what ever votes i have in morning when im about to continue I will go from the dicision of this pool

luv
Ruby

Edited by ruby89 - 19 years ago

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