Originally posted by: kweetrockstar
Heyooo Zeee
Hello ! :DD
Read the chapter yesterday itself..
Bas comment karne mein thoda late ho gayi...
Agar comment itna lamba hoga, then i dont mind 😆
Anyways, regarding ur reply to mine...
I'm a sweetheart becoz u trigger that outta me, lol ;)
I guess i didn't want to miss reading any chapter, that's why i was making no stone left unturned for the pm ;) (Desperate i know, bt u don't get to read such good work everyday)
Don't place me or my work that high, but such words coming from an amazing writer like yourself do make me feel overwhelmed :)
Like it??? Dude Zee i totally am so much in love...
Trust me, about the title, i can understand how it came so naturally...
Thank You :DD I am all smiles 😳
The 'HE' definitely had a big time effect, and there's no doubting it, none at all...
Even in this chapter, if the mysterious man and the 'HE' are indeed the same people, and even if they aren't, i loved his entry..
The way he whooshes away into thin air, is purely commendable...
Somehow, i already like this guy, even if he's the totally bad one ;)
Haha! You won't believe how happy these lines have made me! You Like the guy already! Wait till you find out who it is 😆 He was lucky the girls had shut their eyes, don't forget :D
Coming to your favourite San and Em - i call both of them your favourite becoz it shows in the way you lovingly wrote abt them, kind of like ur babies :)
You read characters so well! It leaves me stunned, I love them yes but i have left a few hints too, i think you must have noticed but didnt mention, will be mentioningbefore posting the next chap :)
Both Em and San are classy, i already love their sisterly bond...
San is visibly an educated and modern version of our Khushi Kumari Gupta, bubbly, chirpy, innocence covered in naughtiness..
Em is the typical elder sister, the way you describe them, makes me fall badly...
Mr Irani also makes such a fatherly appearance...
Thanks for letting me know i am doing fine with introducing the characters, coz that's just how i mean them to appear to readers 🤗
I'm too eager to read more abt the 'too proud to live with them' family friends...
I feel they have a lot more to them than they show...
When i say you have an eye for details, just believe me ;)
Between this, i am not forgetting to guess who are the slaves, and who is the 'HE'...
Try to not keeping me guessing for long time :p
Which means update super soon...
Keep them in mind, Yup you will know soon ;)
Thanks a zillion for the pm..
Luv ya
pooja
Thanks for reading and commenting ! Made my day 🤗
Ps - a special mention to ur lingo.. Mate i'm in love with ur words.. The descriptions are sooo very beautiful, that i've honestly read ur ch 1 five times already since yesterday...
The words, the sentences, the way u've put them up... I'm so in love with you <3
Stop I am blushing now rlli 😆 Luv you too Pooja 🤗
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