The Unnatural: Rise of the Army Against the Si-ah - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Awsome And Cute Update...Loved it...
Thanks...
Sanjeevani...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Wow, this is very much interesting.. Loved chapter 1..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
awesome part thanx for the pm
may i know your name dear?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: TheWandmaker


Oh my!😲waise Nahin pehchana😳 had to go to ur profile 🤣 🤣
Robsessed wat happened to u?😆Oh I know Supernatural happened! 🤣

Prev all i could see was Rob everywhere, and now it's jensen all over, well Dean is my fav too! and Sheldon is my fav from BBT :D
Glad you are reading, you liked Supernatural, i hope you like this series too *fingers crossed*
Thanks a bunch for being here, means much 🤗
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its me sonu 🤣 yup had 2 change my freaking username due to SPN 🤔 and i luv sam winchester 😍 and obsessed with Dean ☺️ and his baby impala 67 🤣 hehe . M dne wid all 7 seasns. Wbu
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Loving it till here :D

Sanaya and madhura and their love for cadburys were very well described <3
And i loved the way you described the boy. Why did he consider himself lucky that he was not seen? And since he was afraid of being seen i am sure he is not a ghost :D Can some peculiar kinda ghosts be seen?

OK now this is just a writers imagination running wild here :D LOL

Anyway i think he has something to do with the old Mansion..Hmm..lets see...

Cannot wait for the next update esp as it has Sobti in it ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb start yaar!!!!!! hope sanaya is paired opposite mohit and not barun! had enuf of sarun! plz recreate monaya magic!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
This seems like an interesting FF!!
The two sisters and their interaction was sweet.
And that boy on whom their car almost ran over...the way he hid himself from their sight... is strange and interesting.
Looking forward to the intro of the two guys...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
man still confused as to whats going on maybe you can explain it to me in detail later
san and em are very odd sisters
and what the hell happened with almost hitting that dude
what was he who was he and why was he standing in the middle of the road
really san a ghost seriously
cheers for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome loved it thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Heyooo Zeee

Read the chapter yesterday itself..
Bas comment karne mein thoda late ho gayi...

Anyways, regarding ur reply to mine...
I'm a sweetheart becoz u trigger that outta me, lol ;)
I guess i didn't want to miss reading any chapter, that's why i was making no stone left unturned for the pm ;) (Desperate i know, bt u don't get to read such good work everyday)

Like it??? Dude Zee i totally am so much in love...
Trust me, about the title, i can understand how it came so naturally...

The 'HE' definitely had a big time effect, and there's no doubting it, none at all...
Even in this chapter, if the mysterious man and the 'HE' are indeed the same people, and even if they aren't, i loved his entry..
The way he whooshes away into thin air, is purely commendable...
Somehow, i already like this guy, even if he's the totally bad one ;)

Coming to your favourite San and Em - i call both of them your favourite becoz it shows in the way you lovingly wrote abt them, kind of like ur babies :)

Both Em and San are classy, i already love their sisterly bond...
San is visibly an educated and modern version of our Khushi Kumari Gupta, bubbly, chirpy, innocence covered in naughtiness..
Em is the typical elder sister, the way you describe them, makes me fall badly...
Mr Irani also makes such a fatherly appearance...

I'm too eager to read more abt the 'too proud to live with them' family friends...
I feel they have a lot more to them than they show...
Between this, i am not forgetting to guess who are the slaves, and who is the 'HE'...
Try to not keeping me guessing for long time :p
Which means update super soon...

Thanks a zillion for the pm..
Luv ya
pooja

Ps - a special mention to ur lingo.. Mate i'm in love with ur words.. The descriptions are sooo very beautiful, that i've honestly read ur ch 1 five times already since yesterday...
The words, the sentences, the way u've put them up... I'm so in love with you <3

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