SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60.

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Madhura

@Madhura..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#381

Res again..will edit till weekend max.U ended it...great man and see me.

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#382

I am so happy that you finally commented! 🤗

I was waiting for a long time and today i got surprise when i saw my PM dabba with your PM! Love ya..

Sorry i dunno if the comment will be long or not coz i am studying at the moment! 😛

This update was super duper, classy awesome! Like wait was worth it.. i had actually forgotten how amazingly you write and today after reading this your reminded me through your amazing writing style!

I totally am a fan or your sense of fun like from first update till this last one you kept that little healthy and funny point in your chapters and that was utter cute! I loved that point a lot.

Sharon bani Siren and Swayam sahab total majnu is my favorite genre to read on SwaRon and hence this SS goes to the top 10 list of my favorites SS! Believe me.. i loved it.

This chapter had everything.. not dance but perfect essence of romance and a pinch of friendship ka tarka which made it super se bhi upar! 😆

Loved that small naughty comments of Sharon and Swayam while on bed.. God, Swayam was so shameless! He said Sharon is wearing he shirt to his mother.. Holy crap! He could be dead meat but Sharon didn't beat him thanks to God warna jawani main widhwa ka roop dharan karna parhta! 🤣

The best part of this chapter was that... that i can't explain! Because i think the whole chapter was somewhat best with each and every second of scene in it!

Thanks, for writing such an amazing piece of story on SwaRon! It wasn't big but definitely the one i can read when i will miss SwaRon after D3 will end! 😳

PS : LoVe you! You are an amazing writer.. please write more yaar! And yes also continue cupboards!

-Marium

Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago

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prateek

@prateek.007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#383

UN_RESERVED

Thats great, u start as a one shot and then converted into SS.So moving on to concept.I like the loving characters of SwaRon as a Married..And complete scenario was wonderfull..First update was amazing.Sharon really a treat for me.Thats note part was really funny..And specially note's words is 😆.I enjoyed...Poor swayam have to tried best now..

Now,next update was awesome,Sharon still angry and Swayam trying hard to manaofying sharon...To convince her..And the songs was just hillarious...I am roufling like a mad...Loved the way they reminisce their college days with a pehla nasha song...Just loved that...Moving on...

Next update was really amazing i say...The way u played certain emotions of SwaRon with the story is just great yar...SwaRon feelings was beautifully written...Loved the bond of swayam with sharon mother...Then whole swayam sharon and kriya's conversation was awesome...Just Loved it...Moving on..

Now its amusing update,i enjoyed to the fullest...All the gang parts and shareyam convo was really funny...Rey and kriya shares an amazing chemistry.Loved the dialouges specially in this update...Moving on..

Nice update...Loved the romance of SwaRon...Finally sharon did believe in swayam and poor swayam has to go with 3 tasks..Enjoyed it..Moving on..

Funny update..Loved the way u shown kriya and swayam bond.Loved the romance bit of SwaRon...Then lipstick part was dam funny.😆.I just loved it..Moving on..

Nice update.Swayam's outburst was understandable..Finally sharon got to know about Nicky bro act..And now she is in hell anger.."Nicky Bro bachne wale nahi"..loved that part...Moving on..

Funny update,or i can say laughter dose update..Song selection was just perfect...I felt bad for nicky bro,But they deserved that..SwaRon romance and closeness was too too hillarious..I enjoyed..Moving on..

Amazing update with beautifull ending..Finally SwaRon got to spend their time alone...Again loved the song..Flashback part was really great to reminise a relation of friendship...Loved the dialouges of SwaRon.and the convo with sharon mom is just funny.😆..Finally SwaRon together..And that was sweet end...with special lines at the end..I like that..

At last,i enjoyed a romantic,funny and amazing read.I was new to u'r works,But now after reading this SS,i just say,u are awesome writer and so talented..Song selection in each update is just amazing and perfect...U'r updates are so so funny..Keep it up AND Keep writing.👍🏼
And yea, thanx for PM

Cheers,
Prateek

Edited by prateekdave7 - 12 years ago

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#384

wow nic story...

but plz start ur cupbord..plzz

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pooja123456

@pooja123456

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#385

Hehe...
Funniest part was swayam sayin his shirt belongs to sharon now!

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Deepika

@_Deepika_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#386

OMG OMG OMG...wat was that baby...i so so so loved this...

I started following this SS as a newbie...its one of my fav works on Swaron...

U both are just AMAZING...AMAZING WORK

Will send u my comment tonight😳

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#387

loved it

amazing

the end was so well written

and the songs were hilarious..

i am still in shock that from where did you bring those songs..

now then end was nice

specially the flash back...

and the kiss ☺️ 😳

the tie thing B/W swayam and mom was hilarious

i was trying to imagine sharon's face.. 😆😆

thank you for the pm

gonna miss this SS

do write new works soon

and o pm me

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#388

lovely ending 😊

Swaron longing to spend time with each other

Flashback was amazing

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#389

Finally, SwaRon got their alone time and it was cute ending !!

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#390

Finally u update ..I love this SS 😊

Last was amazing ..swaron were cute 😳

Looking forward for more works from ur side 😊

Great job !!

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