SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60. - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: beeny

d first thing dat koi banda apne shadi k pehle rat ko ese so jata he was like🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
& now abb sharon change d song & it's "tum to thehreperdesi"
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
kya baat,
kya baat, kya baat 👍🏼
are plz sharon abb maan jaye



Hahaha i am glad that you liked the song! 😃
thank you so much for commenting! 😊
and m really sorry for such a delay bt i vil update today!


Originally posted by: Satluvsd3

surbhi!!! 🤗
well i actually didnt read your SS!!!!!at first...
so got your pm and finally i am freee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉
so i thought why not start reading 4m today!!!!!!!!!!!
lovely SS!!!!!!!!!!

the 1st part was awesome... poor swayam couldnt make his sharon smile!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
and 2nd part OMG!!!!our shekhawat mastermind has got a list of ideas to bring a "smile-to die-for" on his SHARON's face
from not-so-meeting of the two palms to
playing phela nasha...😳😳
n the way you presented their thoughts!!
amazing job!! ⭐️ 👏

loved the whole thought convo 😳😆
and finally sharon changing the song to "tum toh tehere pardesi"
lmaooo!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣 couldnt stop laughing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
awww poor swayam!!! 😆
update soon surbhi !!!!!!!
cant wait for the next part!! 😉



Sattt!! 🤗
Thank youu soo much girl for such a big and lovely comment! 😃
i am so happy that you liked it! 😳
sry for taking so much tym in updating..now i am updating! 😊

Originally posted by: sreya19roy

OMG 🤣

U R IMPOSSIBLE...this is undoubtedly one of the most HILARIOUS update I've ever read 🤣 🤣 🤣


Thank you so very much sreya! 😃
and this is a huge compliment for me! 😳
thanx a lot! 😊

Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon

Surbhi thnx for turning this into an SS 😊


Swayam Shekhawat how could you sleep on your wedding night and defi he is going to face the consequences. Sharon' reaction when she heard Pehla Nasha and started gawking at him was so cute... mentally cursing herself for staring at him.

OMG she chose nothing else but "Tum toh there pardesi" 🤣 🤣

Awesome update surbhi...update soon and thank you for PM



Thank you amu di for such an adorable comment! 😃
i am contented that you liked it! 😊

Originally posted by: tashu20

thanx for continue it as ss...😊

awesome update...loved it...!!!
poor swayam trying his level best for manofying her but smart sharon😎
& tum toh tehre pardesi😆😆
thanx for pm


Thank you for your lovely comment! 😃

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

A big hug from my side for converting this os into a ss🤗

love u for this .
Awesome update surbhi !!
very nicely written 😃
loved how bechara swayam was trying his level best to manophy his wife.
sharon ka bhi jawab nahi , she smartly dismisses all of swayams attempts😆.
sharons answer to swayams pehla nasha was amazingly funny 🤣 🤣
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm.



Awww...tanuka
🤗

Thank you soo much for this!!! 😃
really means loads to me! 😊
your comments are always sweet! 😳

Originally posted by: swayamsharon

thanks 4 converting os into ss!!
lovely update!!!
loved swayam played pehla nasha & blushed, & sharon says his husband will never change!!!
did diva sharon know this type of song, i think swayam ka hi asar hai, but song was truly hilarious🤣...
thanks 4 pm & update nexta soon..

Thank you so much for your nice comment shree!! 😃
thank you so very much! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

surbhi and sonal i loved both the updates 😃 it was awesome

sharon is not gona be an easy wife... 😆 and swayam is also not gona give up that soon 😉
the last song 🤣 🤣
thnx 4 da pm and plz continue soon



Thank you so much priya for the lovely comment! 😃

Originally posted by: mrash

Amezing SS...

And choise of song is tooo 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣



Thank you so much for liking! 😃
i am glad that you liked it! 😊


Originally posted by: ABBY92

LOL !! Trust Sharon to give it back to Swayam properly by playing such a song !! Hilarious man !! Can't wait for the next update !!



Thank you so much abi for liking and commenting! 😃


Originally posted by: Swaron79

Haha.. 🤣🤣

Damn Hilarious update !!
Waiting for the next part eagerly Surbhi !!



Thank you so much friend for the comment! 😃

Originally posted by: troublemagnet

U crack me up 🤣🤣


The song "tum toh thehre pardesi" has become one of my fav songs now..😆

Great OS 😆



Thank you soo much for your comment! 😃
i am glad that ppl are liking that song now! 😳


Originally posted by: swaron_d3

congrats for turning your OS into a SS..
poor swayam! well,looks like he would have to pay hard for his mistake..and the song scenario it was the best.. firstly *pehla nasha* and then * Tum toh thehre pardesiii'* ROFL ROFL 🤣
would like to get a bit desi here..MAST UPADTE!
please update soon..



Thank you so much ananya for a Mast reply!! 😃
i am glad that you liked it! a great writer itself! 😊
thanks again! 😳


Originally posted by: frankyfio

hahahhahahaha

loved it



Thank you for commenting and liking! 😃

Originally posted by: Nehal92

whoa!! that was just too gud...

poor swayam MRS SHARON RAI PRAKASH SEHKHAWAT IS A TUFF NUT!!



Thanx for the comment nehal! 😃
and yess..she is a tough nut!! 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Oye madam kab update karenge???????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: meevee

That was a wonderful update with romance and hilarity...nice approach I thought...definitely excited to read the next part...update soon Surbhi



Thank you for your comment meera! 😃
means a lot!! 😊


Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Read the 2 parts bck to bck...amazing update...luved ur song selection...sorry for commenting late.



Thank you so much and its okayy! 😊



Thank you for the comment! 😃


Originally posted by: pooja123456

hey...
pm me wen u update next!!!!
nyc post



Thanks for the comment and i vil surely pm you! 😊



Thanks for the comment! 😊

Originally posted by: doll_sg

wow plzzz continue soon



Thank you lalitha for commenting! 😃


Originally posted by: d3lover90

Hey awsm...
Naughty swaron r always fun to read..
That pardesi song is too funny...
Pls update son...
Nd pm me if you can..



Thank you so much for liking and commenting! 😃
and i vil surely pm you! 😊




yes i am updating finally..sorry for the delay!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
@himani @suku--yes guys i am updating in 5 mins!
doing the final touch up to the update! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
yippieee...
finally...m so excited to read...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

Recap--
but he decided to keep his thoughts to himself and forcefully increased the speed of his car!

He just wanted to reach the venue as faster as he could!!
-End-

They reached the venue…the place was decorated with lily's and orchids..! the ambience was very appealing and the whiff travelling around the whole place was a perfect add to the whole thing!
Swayam stopped the car in front of the way in..they both were greeted by the attendant he took the car keys and went to park it in the backyard! Swayam turned around and saw Sharon going alone inside…he smartily walked fast to keep her pace..as they were the reason behind this celebration..everybody's retina were fixed on the beautiful couple..who were now seeming to be on a One on One with each other..! swayam and Sharon knew that they won't let their fight be public..so they smiled..
nah not towards each other! Towards the guests and relatives..!


Sharon My smile... am I acting over the top? Or is it balanced?
Swayam Your smile luks so perfect! But it looks beautiful when it comes from the heart! I know you are faking it!
Sharon He is so perfect at doing all this acting! I soo hate him at this moment! He is not even bothered about my fury and rage and annoyance and wildness and temptation and…and…ahh!!
Ughgh Sharon what the hell are you are thinking…Stop it!!
Swayam She is super angry at me…swayam you are gone! But if I am not wrong..for just few seconds she stared at me..and that too in a pretty weird way..umm..dunno! maybe she is…she is missing me!!!
oh yeah baby..you are bloody missing me!!


They exchanged hello's..received greetings on the way inside the actual happening of the event…
Hall decoration was most exquisite of all..the creamish colour painted on the walls was delightful..their was a huge round table stand on which there were plentiful open bottles of champagne..positioned in such a way that white smoke along with the drink was emerging out of them..which automatically got poured into many glasses residing beneath them on the table…it was a champagne shower stand to be precise.
Sharon's mom and dad welcomed them on the entrance..
Swayam and Sharon touched their feet..to seek their blessings..
their hands felt each other..they stealed a slight glance..but Sharon quickly seized her hand..
he too stood fast!


Sharon His touch is heaven..his fingers were shouting at my hand..and they badly proposed them in a split second…but I feel sorry for them!
Swayam Her hands are heaven! But they got snatched away as soon my hands ran over them!

Sharon saw her mom..though it had been just a day..they were living in the same city..
but as everyone says…the feeling of separation can never be anticipated especially when it comes to living away from your family…and she has realized it now!
She was gloomy the whole day and had kept a forged smile on her face because of some obvious reasons..
But as soon as she saw her mom..tears progressed…her heart was yelling to just let it out but she pushed away the chaos and preferred the fake thing…so she just smiled with all the love in her retina!

Her mom hugged her and tears have started to form in her eyes...just then swayam got in the way and said—"mom you forgot the promise…remember you promised me that you will cry while only hugging me! Not her!"
Her mom started to laugh but the tears kept on falling down her face..
her mom quickly wiped her tears and came in front of him—sorry beta..i forgot! And smiled!
she cupped his face and gave a peck on his forehead!
he in turn hugged her..and whispered—"mom remember…I am your son! And will remain always!"
Sharon was seeing all this happening..she always knew swayam was very emotional about her mom..he really cared for her..and she was happy seeing that!

The greetings continued…
out of the blue a voice came..and it was pretty loud!

"Watsuppp!!!"
It was a girl's voice…

Sharon and swayam—Kria!!

All Heads turned!

There was she standing in a red satin gown..!
But now she was hastily advancing towards them..
and within no time she grabbed their neck and hugged them tightly!
Then they broke apart!

Sharon—"I missed you so much!!"
Kria—"No…I missed you more!!
you both are looking so stunning!!"
Sharon—"you too my baby!!"
Swayam—"See I told you this would suit you more..compared to that pinkish one!"
Kria *pulled his cheeks*--"awww…you will and remain my best friend forever!!
And thanks for that dudee! Otherwise I would have seriously got lost in my wardrobe!!"
Swayam smiled and said—"pagal!"
Kria smiled—"tu zyada pagal!"
Sharon was giving adorable looks to them Touchwood!!

But to kria's fear her mom out of no where appeared and said—"Is this a way to talk to him? He is your sister's husband now! Show some manners beta!"
Kria—"owh..owhhh!! sorry mom! You are right!"
Her mom glared her and smiled at swayam..and left
Kria *turned to face swayam*
Swayam was smiling and smirking at her..
Kria--"jijaaji..kaise hai aap? Kya lenge aap? Thanda ya garam?
Swayam giggled and said—"I am not convinced yet..continue continue!"
Kria –"achaa jijaaji..jaisa aap bole"
she raised her voice so that people around her could listen what she was about to say..
kria—"jijaaji aap itne thake hue lag rhe hai!! Aisa kyun? Kiss type ki thakaan hai yeh?? Jo… "
swayam cuts her in between—"shush Okay!!!
Stop!
Kria—"side hat..meri behan se baat krni hai mjhe!"

Swayam cursed her…

Then he adjusted himself..so now kria was standing between them..facing Sharon..
both the sisters share a bond like the true soul sisters share… they both were of the same carefree nature!
but too emotional when it comes to each other!
Sharon adored her sister and called her baby!
and kria as always gave her respect!

Kria *in a gloomy tone*—I really missed you my sister!
Sharon—I saw it a day before yesterday my baby!
you were crying soo much..more than me!
Kria—and you know what..you were right from the start! Mom loves you more than me!
Sharon came closer and hugged her tight!!
Both were on the verge of crying but someone interrupted the family scene..
They both jerked and looked at the person with weird looks..accompanied with swayam!

Sharon-kria-swayam—"Oh no!"



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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
res!!
**unres**
yeppieee...me first!!!

dost kya update tha...too much...three much...magarmuch yaar!!!
seriously yaar swarons feelings beautifully written...
swayums bond with sharons mother is just perfect...
nd the way kriya teased him ...gosh i remember the way me n my sis use to tease our gju!!!...
update soon dear so that we can know who is the person...i guess its rey!!!
luvd it dear update soon!!
Edited by Luvsd3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
this is not fair... ek toh itn alte update karti ho..upar se itna chota...
but hamesha ki tarah perfect update 👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey surbhi...i was waiting for this post ...& i just loved it ...Awesome post ...i like the naughtiness in your writing...i loved the way swayam is trying to mend his mistake ... he is so cute ... my fav lines from this post ...😊

"Swayam She is super angry at me...swayam you are gone! But if I am not wrong..for just few seconds she stared at me..and that too in a pretty weird way..umm..dunno! maybe she is'she is missing me!!!
oh yeah baby..you are bloody missing me!!
"😎

why these two are so adorable ...WOW ... Swaron ke fingers bhi ek dusre ke saath romance karte he ...i loved the part she felt that his fingers proposed to hers ...loved the swayam-sharon-kriya convo ...jijaji wala part ...cute ...😃 ..& who is this new person ...i guess its Rey ...can't wait for next part... october se pehle update kar dena plz 😆



Edited by dips098 - 13 years ago

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