SwaRon SS--Hopes and Desires! Last part on pg 60. - Page 12

Ye kya tha itne ache point pe rok diya
Perfect update
I loved kriya's role in d update
Use kya pata swaron ki fIrst night pe swayam was sleeping like a horse
It was an awsum update

it was awesome ,swayam with sharon mom it was nice and with kria it was super . i guess the person is rey .please update soon 😃

hey surbhi first of all you are a very skill full person i must say that...now i have read all the parts in one go...so i am being late in commenting...sorry for that but i loved your concept and enjoyed reading this swaron married and now fighting very cutely...man they are so adorable...their charm is just too different altogether...now i am commenting about all the three parts here...

first part was very cool and introduction was given in a very special way...i loved the way you described their clothing for the party...and than a lil angry sharon not giving attention to swayam..and swayam as usual like the majnu he is trying to catch her attention...but the chit sharon gave to swayam which revealed that swayam slept at their first night so sharon was angry and that was just master strock...i was really laughing at reading that...

second part was super cute...swaron still doing the same sharon avoiding and swayam doing tricks to catch her attention...and i really loved the way you shown both of their's expression when pehla nasha song was played...but wait in the end sharon changed the song and that too tum to there pardesi man that was on hell of master strock...it left me laughing uncontrollably...

third part was amazing..the detailing banquet hall and all was superb...and here also swaron usual tiff was going in its cute way...but the sharon and her mom convo was really good and than what swayam said to her mom that was also very sweet of him...after that the unexpected entry of kria...and kriyam and krisha bond was so nicely described...i just loved that part most in the third update...ans in the end who is this entry that has made everybody so shocked...

waiting for an update now to find out who is it...i guess its rey but wanna see an update real soon...thanks for pm...and yes i loved this os...

fab update dear but a bit chota types!!! 😃

and yaar the tadka you and sonal add is just tooo good!

loved it!!!!

Wow it was awesome i was waiting for this update Swaron romance 😳 , u have written very beautifully iam waiting for the next update

Really nice update Surbhi !!

❤️ where is d update plz do soon