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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#341

Well that was an incredibly beautiful update and Oh My God their first kiss was just simply awesome.

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#342

I've gone all mush reading this!

Uff can these two get any cuter?

This was just love ❤️

And the kisses!

You blew away my mind with them 😉

Lovely update!

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Sonia

@sonia_92

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#343

awww the incorporation of the movie was beautiful! it's one of my favourite movies too!
the perfect first kiss, the perfect idea of perfection! I loved how arnav was ready to change himself, also jis acknowledgements was endearing! beautifully written chapter

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thebubblespop12

@thebubblespop12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#344

So perfect!! I want an Arnav, where do I find one??

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#345

Amazing update...loved it!!

From the starting I loved the scene when Arnav read Khushi's text and smiled,They way he was caressing her name was very romantic!!

I loved the idea of a movie date...I'm happy Khushi chose a romantic movie that too 'PS I love you' it reminded me of Barun!!

And Arnav is scared of Khushi's father...that is a fact guys are scared of girls father!! LOL

Now coming to the best part of the update the Kiss😳that was very very romantic..it was very nicely written and that dialogue before the kiss was perfect for that situation!!

The title of the chapter was very complicated..I didn't get that at first but in the end of the chapter I get to know that the title was actually a kiss!!

All in all it was a very romantic update...beautifully written...

Do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

Edited by --Amy-- - 13 years ago

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#346

Things are progressing ...yay...

Loved this chapter and i am glad they were no interruptions !!

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#347

WHAT A PERFECT CHAPTER!!

seriously awesome! love his feelings and the way you have put his thoughts and emotions!

so damn good! love the kiss and the building relationship!!!

THANK YOU for the pm and update!!!

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#348

a btful chptr once agin..:)loved it..wndr wt wud hav hppnd 2 Arnav if Khushi's father wud hav cum..lollets nt get 2 it.:Dits one of my fav movie too.:)n Gerry..:)no cmmnts ova him..dt wud make me in a mmess statin abt Arnav n Garald in d same cmmnt..so lets escape dt..:)Arnav z plannin 2 take dis rltn ahead..oh i so wish dey do it soon..:)perfect kiss,,n perfect use of his Profession in describin a kiss,,loved it..:)do pm me wen u update more..😛😛😛thnxxx😊

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roseycheek

@roseycheek

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Posted: 13 years ago

#349

awww..tat was too cute!! it was a perfect piece of writing as well!

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frenzyy

@frenzyy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#350

jus caught up wid al the parts... soo beautiful & romantic.. simply love it.. arnav s afraid of her dad😆 the bonding reln s soo beautifully portrayed... she made him sit thru a romantic movie though he liked it too... finally the kiss was amazing😳 plz pm wen u update!