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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: segad
Creep, slimeball, jackass any other words I can use for him in polite company?

Glad that his boss caught him in the act. I hope that suspension is without pay as otherwise it is a paid vacation😡

Congrats on moving beyond SRK😆 in your choice of lyrics

I can assure you that 'Crazier' (used in Chapter 3) did not have SRK in it. :)

Thank You for your comment! Glad you are liking the story! :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 13 years ago

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#232

Omg...that creep!!!?
Great update...yay!!!arnav...good you beat hum black and blue...
Loves it!!so sweet!!!!

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#233

ohh loved it very much dear..

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

Loved the update and I am also in love with Dr Arnav Singh Raizada... So Shyam got punches both in the show as well as in your update as well and he totally deserves it.

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soniachammu

@soniachammu

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

no comments or i can say simply awesome

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

lol you know the first thing I did after reading was check the time you updated! :p Apparently you can add psychic to ur bunch of multiple talents Rae! :D Shyamu here and on the show got beaten up by ASR! :D

I loved how Dr Mishra intervened and did not fail to dish out exactly what he deserved without too much delay! And Arnav's concern.. Awww! :D I loved the moments they are sharing in the car okay. Its their equivalent of a poolside almost! :p

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

I just wish shyam's threats do not hold true or materialise whatsoever so he really freaks me out. Arnav is really cute in this one and has a good sense of humour too

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Dating in full swing huh? Me likey :D

This Shyam creepo. Good Arnav punched him. But why just one black eye why not two?

I am really liking the way this story is moving and wah such quick updates (please don't tell me that I jinxed it :( )

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#239

Firstly, let me tell you I'm so happy you turned this into an SS!

Doing my happy dance!

Secondly, what a cute couple! Thir date was cute, their talk with each other is cute! And Jha is annoying. But Dr. Mishra seems cute too!

Sorry i haven't been on IF, health and other reasons.

I would love to get more PMs, thank you for the previous ones! 😊

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Gargee

@Gargee

Navigator

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#240

Well Helllooo!!

Hey wait a second. Why was there no PM for me? *crosses arms and taps her foot, indignant* I have been a sincere and regular reader and have commented. Go on! Go on! Check! *Juts her chin out*

Anyways *claps excitedly* Loooved ittt!!! And he actually rearranged Jha-the-Jackass' Face! Wooohooo! Go Arnavv! 😃

Well, I loved this chapter- and so I wan' more!! Come on! Write the next one up! Chop Chop!😉

Cheers!

G <3