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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
i just happened to read this..n let me tell u ...am in love with it...ur fabulous👏from how anjali lost her kid..to shyam s change...asr losing his family n love of his life..to la n nk s life..to khushi s kids n bonding with nk n la s kids...every single thing was amazing...as par story line no soft corner for asr for making khushi feel so helpless n not trusting her...after all relations depends on trust n not just love...when is the next update...???can u please pm me...???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
once again awesome 😉 Pm when you continue lovely!!x
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
love the story
read it all at once cant wait for next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Wowww...wht a story...i m in love with this SS..u r just amazing..Plzz PM me whn u update the next part..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
👏 just read the story, wow ur such a good writer, plz pm me wen u update 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
fabulous updates... loved it... interesting... i hate arnav when he didnt trust her.. continue soon
pl pm me when u update next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was really good n thankz for update...i hope soon arnav will know abt his kidz!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
thats really wonderfull that khushi is so strong to defend herself...waiting to see the reaction of arnav after the truth of his kids comes out...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

Ok,,,, thank you so much guys,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,I AM VERY MUCH HAPPY THAT you all liked my story's progress and its twist,,,,,and twist,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, and thank you very much for the comments,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

So here you THE NEXT UPDATE,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

PART 15

AT NIGHT RAIZADA MANSION

DINING TABLE

After freshening up kids and khushi were came down

KHUSHI *** Anjaliji jiji do you need any help ???

ANJALI **** No khushiji we are done everything,,,,,,,,,,

[khushi now know that shyaam completely changed NK told khushi everything but khushi stopped not to mention anything about arnav,,,]

ANSH *** Mamma can you make sugar free jalebis for us...

ASHER **** Yes mamma me too want jalebi...

NIYA **** Maa me too...

ALAAP **** Maasi I want it too...

KHUSHI *** Ok beta I will make,,,,,,

[Then khushi moved towards the kitchen... anjali wanted to ask khushi about the kids father ,, because she didn't know why she was feeling that ansh and
asher are her chotte's kids. but khushi's haalath now anjali know very well .. so she doesn't wanted to put something to khushi...]

After making both jalebis with and without sugar,, khushi served everyone jalebi...

ANSH *** Mamma it's very good...

ASHER *** Nice mamma...

NIYA **** Maa too good...

ALAAP *** Maasi really good...

ANALJI **** We are having your jalebi after 4 years khushiji...

PAAYAL *** Khushi you too have jalebis,,,,,,,

KHUSHI *** WO jiji mein apni jalebi khane ki aadath 4 saal pehle chod di...

AKASH **** Khushiji...

KHUSHI *** I don't want to be in my past jijaaji,,,,,,

Everyone stared at her for some time...

ANSH *** Aunty,, aaj bhi wo chote uncle nahi aavoge khane ke liye

KHUSHI *** Chote uncle...

ANAJLI *** Wo chote ki baat kar rahi hai khushijji ...beta he always eats in his room,,, wo neeche nahi aate...

KHUSHI *** Anjaliji...

She knew why,, she didn't asked anything further...

ANAJLI *** Haan khushiji its been 4 years,,,, he never seated with us for dinner nor for lunch or break fast...

KHUSHI *** Beta doesn't force anyone for anything ok... if he wants he will have ok...

ANSH *** But mamma,,

KHUSHI *** No more arguments anshu.. Now eat...

All of them had their dinner...but arnav was there at the steps hearing the conversation,,, today also ansh an asher cared for him. But his khushi...once she cared for him,, only him, now she doesn't cared for him,, he silently returned to his room,,,,,,,,,,

He thought he wanted to ask khushi about her husband,,, but no courage,,,,, if he will get any chance to talk to her he will definitely ask her about her husband... all of them were returned to their rooms...after tucking ansh and ashu,, khushi moved to arnav's room.. To give something... she knocked his room...no response ... Again she knocked ..but there is no response..

ASR *** HP I told you go from here with the food,,,,, just get out,,,,,,

Khushi saw arnav at poolside bed...she shocked,,,,,,,,the footsteps again disturbed arnav ... he stand up and shouted ,,thinking it was HP,,,

ASR *** I told you...

Then he saw khushi there.

ASR *** Khushi...I ,,I am sorry ,,,I didn't knew it was you ,,,,,,,

KHUSHI *** Sorry Mr.araizada,, I think I disturbed you...

ASR *** No ,,khushi ... tell me what is the matter???? Anything needed???

KHUSHI *** Yes I want to give you some thing ,,,,I mean ,,,,I want to return something ,,,,,,,,

ASR *** Khushi what is it????

Khushi handed him his mother's bangles,,,,,

ASR *** Khushi,,, no this is yours khushi... Please keep it

KHUSHI *** No Mr. raizada ,, I don't want this,, take this and keep it ,,,, when you will marry hand over to her,,,,,,,,,

ASR *** No khushi.. I will never marry anyone else...

KHUSHI *** Ok that is your problem,,,,,, and if you will ,,then never break her heart and trust please...

ASR *** Khushi ,,,please ,, just one minute,,, I want to talk to you...

KHUSHI *** No Mr.raizada...I don't think we have anything to talk...

ASR *** No khushi please listen,, I just wanted to know about your husband ...I mean ansh and asher's dad...

KHUSHI *** Yes,,,, but why you want to know about him...

ASR *** Khushi,, I just want...

KHUSHI *** He is nice one,,,

ASR *** But the kids told you were separated...

KHUSHI *** No he is a nice one,,,,, he loved me... but he is,,, he is, no more...Please don't ask anything more please,,,

ASR *** Ok khushi go and sleep...good night...

KHUSHI *** You are going to sleep here,,,,,, why..

ASR *** Its my routine,, khushi now go...

KHUSHI *** Ok goodnight...

Khushi didn't asked him to have food also ,,, he is very sure that khushi is really moved on...Now the bangle is with arnav,,,,,,,,, arnav slept keeping the bangle with him,,,,,

In the morning...khushi bathed and made the kids ready,, too,,,,,

Arnav is late ,,, so he hurried to bathroom,,,,,, for bath ,,, then the kids [ansh and asher came there]

KIDS **** Chote uncle,,,

Then they heard the water sprinkle sound they waited outside,,,

Then ansh saw arnav's laptop and mobile on the table, ansh has a keen interest in laptop and mobile just like his dad,,, on the other hand asher was checking his plants,,,,,,,,Then ansh saw his mothers bangles which their daadi given to their mother,,,,,,,

ANSH ** Ashu look mamma's bangles...

Ashu came inside,,,,,looked at the bangles,,,,,,,

ASHU ***Bhai its looks like mammas... but ,,,,mamma will never... give this to anyone you know na???

ANSH ** Yes ashu but its here ,,,,,,,,,,,,

Then they saw arnav coming from bathroom...arnav also saw the kids watching the bangles...

ASR *** Hey what are you doing here...where is your mamma...

ANSH ** We are came here to tell you that we are going naani's house,,,,,,

ASR *** Ok good bye...

ASHU ***One minute chote uncle...

ASR *** Yes...

ANSH ** What is our mammas bangles doing here

ASR *** Huh??? [arnav astonished and asked]

ANSH ** Yes,, you know it is our daadi's ,,,,,, papa gave her...

ASR *** What????????[arnav really shocked]

ASHU ***Yes,,,, mamma told us that our daadi gave this bangles to our papa so that he can gave her mamma,,,,,

ANSH ** But what is this doing here???????

ASR *** WO I think your mamma forget it here

ANSH ** No... mamma never forget this,,,,,,,, we know... she will keep it safe...

ASHU ***Are you stole this chote uncle ?????...

ASR *** No...[he shouted]

NOW ONE IMPORTANT SECRET OF HIS LIFE REVEALED,,,,,,,,,,

He is her husband ...

He is the father of ansh and asher,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He cant even hug his sons,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

His sons doesn't know about their dad,,,,,,,,,,,,

He just looked at his sons with teary eyes...

SO THAT IS FOR NOW...

Hints,,,,

Mamma daadi's bangles,,,,,,,,,,,,

I want answers khushi ??????????

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome one dear!!!!!!!!!!!!! reli looking forward to ur nxt part!!!!!!!
keep it up gal!!!
pm me... love pri

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