Virman FF: Afsana Tera Mera!! NEW Part 15- Pg67 - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Dina_VirMan

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FINALLY Update kiya tune! I seriously thought you wouldn't update till next year!🤣
Awww this one is dedicated to me! 😳 🤗
Coming to the update is was awesomeee as usual! 👍🏼
Hahah the cockroach part was Hilarious poor Manvi! 😆
I Love way the way she was sticking onto Virat when she was scared and the way he saved her was just awww
ROFLOOOLLL Hahahahha Only you can think of "HP limited" LMAOOO! Typical you! 🤣🤣
I wish virat has to now go to London under family pressure then VirMan get upset cause of that and then maybe that will make them realize their feeling 😆😉

Acha so after how many months will update again?? 😕🤣


Haaan FInallyyy, FOBLLL i knowww 🤣 Haan for you my Babyyy 🤗
LMAOOO i had fun writing the cockroach scene 😆 thank youuu 😳
FOBLLL you noticed, the HP part..??! 😉 of course, if I'm writing it will be there 😛 🤣
Awww no such separation plan yet 😛 FOBLLL nahin I'm hopping next week latest 😛😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ShivRajput

Hayeee.. Nice update.. now even elders knw abt der changing behaviour.. Pari now I want Some seperate scenes for Virman.. let dem also knw abt der feelings yar.. 🤣
Loved it.. Continue soon!!!


Awww thank youu Shiv Bhabhiii 😳😳, achaaa?? inbox me types of scenes so i can get some ideas kinda lost 😕 thank youuu 🤗 haaan will try to update next week 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vamps1996

ahhh finalllyyy update ka wada pura ho gaya it wasnt a filler 😵 it was awsomeee really loved it captain ji ur story is just full of life and makes em smile while reading the fun part was the cockroach scene lol 🤣 loved the arnav manvi bond and virman scene was tooo adorable 😳 hope the elders think about bringing virman togetherrr yippeee update soonnn


FOBLL haaan finallyyy 😆 awww thank youuu 😳 FOBLLL, just keep reading to find out 😛😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankzmishra

the update was just mindblowing pari 👏👏👏 pm me too next time 😊


Thank youuu 😳 will dooo 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vibhubebo3

OMGGG :D Pari I read This ff when I wasn't even here on if !! ROFL :D but now I red whole ff again !! Coz U haven't updated so long -_- but der aaye duruat aaye"! I really loved this ff then also n now also. Actually fact is ur ffs are really opposite to ur real personality. I mean full of innocence. Lil bit nokh jhok... Which is always a treat foe me. Loveee U !! Do update fast fasttt. N arnav khushi's character n that too as virman's siblings..! Ps - love ittt awesome update as alwaysss. love bebo ! ^.^


FOBLL haaan i had posted it in VC 😛 hahhaah sorry, will update regularly now 😆 awww thank youuu Vibhzzz😳 nahinnn i am innocent 😳 avvi mujhe tum sable badnaam kiya hua hain 😛 and i love family and family ties and traditions 😛 hahahah love you tooo nd thnk youuu 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Gosh how much I missed this story
Awesome update loved arnav and manvis
Nok jhok and manvi trusting virat was so cute
Loved the ending beautiful update continue
sooner and do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am new in this forum I read your story its very nice I have doubt virat know he love manvi or just attraction update soon i wating your update and add me your buddy list
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pariii! Finally you updated! 🤣
And, and,... It was absolutely flippingtastic!
The cockroach part was too funny 😆 Poor Maanu!
I loveed the way she trusted Virat to help her! They are soo adorableee
And then Shruti and Pinky Chachi! I love these two! <3 To be honest, I Love the whole family! 😆
"HP Limited, a company in London" 🤣 Only you can think of this!
Maanvi's restlessness when Virat wasn't around was too cute! Their little banter in the end, aww Bless! <3
Overall, loved every part of the update!
Keep updating regularly now! 🤣 Mwuah! Love you! <3

-Krupz-
Edited by forever_young - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yeeeksss Pari Bahu updateddd Nicee oneee ...VirMan getting closer
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Posted: 12 years ago
A great update. Plz update fast.

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