Virman FF: Afsana Tera Mera!! NEW Part 15- Pg67

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Hey Guys!!
This is a new story that came to my mind of Virman. I hope that you all contnue to suport me further as you have done in the past with my other works. So here it goes...
-Luv Pari
Virman FF: AFSANA TERA MERA

Character Sketch

Vadera's:

Virat Vadera: son of Vishal and Vanshika Vadera both passed away in a car accident when he was 8, he then went to go live with his Bua until he was 14, since there was no lady in the house, although his Bua adored him, his Chachi was the one who filled the spot for his mom when she married his Chachu. He is now set to become the next top business tycoon.

Dada Ji (Vishamber Vadera): Virats Dada Ji, he is a man of discipline and hard work who started his own inport/export business empire from scratch called V.Vadera Empire. Although he was strict with his principles, he is also very fun loving and caring, he adores all of his gran/grand-kids equally. The hardest hit he had in life was losing his Elder son and Bahu in an accident, his only strength was Virat after that. His biggest confident is his best bud Abhimanyu Chaudhry.

Chachu (Inder Vadera): Youngest son of Vishamber Vadera, A big business man, who has been handling the family business for 12 years now. A strict man, but loves his nephew Virat a lot.

Chachi (Kadhambari Vadera): Married to Inder Vadera, is a typical Bahu and takes great care of the house. Loves her newphew Virat like her own son, he was only 15 when she had gotten married and had instantly bonded with the little boy who craved a mothers love.

Shlok: Inder and Kadambari's son, is 8 years old and very attached to his Virat Bhaiya.

Bua (Swamini Chopra): Daughter of Vishamber Vadera, married to Ram Chopra a very big textile industrialist.

Ram Chopra: A textile Industrialist, doesn't play when it comes to business, but at home all he does is play.

Viren Chopra: Son of Swamini and Ram Chopra, is 27yrs old and has stepped in his dads shoes by taking care of the family business. Is very sweet and caring. He is also Virat's cousin + best friend, they are extremely close.

Jeevika Viren Chopra: Recently married Viren 6 months ago, is a doll and very caring.

Khushi Chopra: Virens younger sister, she is 24 years old, is sweet and a very outgoing person.

Chaudhry's:

Manvi Chaudhry: 23 years old, very sweet and caring, a little shy too, she doesn't trust people easily, but once she does she puts everything she had in it. To her loved ones she is loyal and trusting to a fault.

Dadu (Abhimanyu Chaudhry): Manvi's DadaJi whom she calls Dadu lovingly. Once a big business man, and now retired, he started the constuction company Chaudhry and Sons, which is now handled by his two sons. A very carefree man, who enjoys life. The apple of his eye and his ladli is his grand-daughter Manvi. He and Vishamber Vadera, have been best friends since elementary school.

Papa (Shashank Chaudhry): Younger son of Abhimanyu Chaudhry and also the father of Manvi and Jeevika. Is a family man, his life is his wife and two daughters.

Ma (Shruti Chaudhry): Typical wife and mother, adores her two daughters and showers everyone with love. Adores her nephew Arnav a lot.

Badai Papa (Madan Chaudhry): Elder son of Abhimanyu Chaudhry, is strict with all the kids since they needed at least one firm hand with everyone else pampering them. Is a good man at heart.

Badi Ma (Pinky Chaudhry): married to Madan Chaudhry, is best friends with her devrani, is very outgoing and fun loving. Really adores her niece Manvi very much.

Arnav Bhaiya (Arnav Chaudhry): Son of Madan and Pinky Chaudhry, a man of principles and hard work. His only weakness is his two sisters Jeevika and Manvi.

Note: This is just mainly background information, the characters will develop more as the story moves us.

Part 1

Vadera Mansion- Chandighar (6pm)

Inder entered the house after a long day at the office. Stepping into the hall, he was surprised at not seeing his wife standing there waiting for him like she usually did at this time every day.

"Kadambhari! Kadambhari!??", Inder called, looking for his wife as he headed upstairs towards his room.

"Papa!? Are you looking for Mama?", Shlok asked him, coming downstairs towards him.

"Haan Beta, where's your Mom?" he asked his son.

"She's been in the kitchen the whole day Papa, and hasn't stepped out since she stepped in this morning", he answered.

"Arre..kyun?", Inder asked confused.

"Uff-oh Papa, lagtha hai app bhool gayai hai kai ajj kounsa din hai..", (Uff-oh Papa, looks like you've forgotten what today is..) Shlok answered.

"Mathlab?".

"Ajj Virat Bhaiya wapas ah-rahain hai, tho Mama unki sari favorite dishes banarahi hai, subah se..", (Virat Bhaiya is coming back today, so Mom is cooking all of his favorite dishes since this morning..), Shlok said in an excited tone.

"Arre haan! meetings kai dhoran yeh tho main bhool hi gaiya..chalo main tumhare DadaJi kai saath jakai baatai kartha hoon, kitchen main gaiya tho jhootian hi paregi.." (Oh Yeaah! In between all the meetings it totally slipped from my mind!!..i guess ill go chat with your grandpa some, because if I step in the kitchen right now, ill get shoes thrown at me!), Inder laughed knowing his wife and headed towards his dads room.

Two days ago, Virat had called and told them, that he was finally going to come back home after 3 years of studying in the USA. Ever since then, you could say the whole house had come alive. His wife had made all the servants run on their tip-toes as they cleaned the Mansion from corner to corner. She had gotten Virats room sparkled and had also gotten his clothes ironed just in case he might need them, not to mention the dishes she was cooking as well.

Then on the other side there was his father, who had ordered the latest Lamborghini as a return home gift in Virats favorite color, sea green/blue to be at the house early this morning to await his grandson. His Dad had also spent the previous day at the office, remodeling Vishal Bhaiya's grand cabin that had been locked since the accident, for Virat. Although even Inder had to admit, if his Dad hadn't done all that, he himself would have.

It felt like a dream that Their Virat was finally going to be coming home after 3 longg years! He had gone to study at Yale University in the US, as his Dad had done so before him and now he would finally be back home where he belonged. Sometimes Inder would mistake his nephew for his brother, and although it sounds weird, it made him feel proud. For his nephew was the exact persona of his older brother from looks to habits to deeds.

Entering his dads room, Inder sighed upon seeing him admiring the old family picture albums.

"Bauji, doesn't it feel as if happiness Is coming back to our house after a very long time?", Inder asked his Dad as he sat beside him on the couch.

"Haan Beta, even I feel the same, its as if Virat took all our joy with him and is now bringing it back..", Bauji replied.

"I just wished he would have let us all go to the airport to pick him up, instead he made us all promise that only Viren would go to pick him up..", Inder said sadly.

"Even I was thinking the same thing, but what to do, we promised him..", Bauji replied.

"Wait..I guess, for him to come home..", Inder replied sadly.

Vadera Mansion- 9pm

Kadambhari kept pacing impatiently in front of the doors, as both the Vadera's and Chopra's were gathered in the hall waiting for Viren and Virat. All of their eyes were constantly jumping from the clock above the fireplace to the front doors and back. Finally around 9:15 the doorbell rung, but instead of anyone running to open the door, they all froze in their places, afraid that it all might be just a dream.
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So?... How was is??...Should i continue??..Do hit the like button and comment!
-Luv Pari

Index:

-> Part 1- Pg 1 -> Part 2- Pg 5 -> Part 3- Pg 9

-> Part 4- Pg 12 -> Part 5- Pg 17 -> Part 6- Pg 22
-> Part 7- Pg 30 -> Part 8- Pg 36 -> Part 9- Pg 41
-> Part 10- Pg 46 -> Part 11- Pg 50 -> Part 12- Pg 56
-> Part 13- Pg 58 -> Part 14- 62 -> Part 15- Pg 67
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
liked the character sketch
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Sounds great as usual loving virat and ur previas story came to sucha sweet end awww god.bless you and plezzz can u pm me [:D]
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😃 plz continue, cant wait 2 read more and pm me 👍🏼
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Interesting concept Plzzz continue soon
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Good going dear
Keep it up ❤️
nice title dear i want ask u one i knw it is suspense what was d prologue of dis ff...
eagerly waitin 4 ur next update and thanx 4 d pm dear. ❤️
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Great start
Like the character sketch
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Nice character sketch n a very gud start... All froze so i expect Manvi to open da door Hehehe... Cont soon thanx for pm!!:) btw obviously virman noe each other since dey r family frnds ryt??
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Nice start!...
There's a "Arnav & Khushi" in this FF...interesting!..
Continue soon please & thanks for the pm...

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Awesum...wow vry much amazing concept
plz cntinue soon pari as m vry much excitd 4 d nxt part
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