Dekh Ke Chalo| Part 22 | Link for #2 PG 122 - Page 64

loved it

Originally posted by: segad

Digest as in better understanding. you suddenly introduced akash as an illegitimate son with a dreadful past. so soche ka padi in mami espeak 😆

sorry but your anjali is coming across as a ditz who seems to care more about her chhonu rather than her chote. she didn't go into his room to pacify him when the bomb exploded. she didn't chose to raise the issue again in private. For crying out loud, she should know her brother better.

Jumping in with untold things is my habit, is it no? 😆

Originally posted by: peepli

Awww..you replied to my comment...am honoured 😳

Awwie! Thank you so much :)

Originally posted by: ducky_anne

Do get better soon! I liked the update, it had great chemistry between Khushi, Anjali and Vivaan! Poor Akash though! Arnav is so tact-less sometimes, but I guess he wouldn't be Arnav if he wasn't!

You have the flu, hope you get well soon and I think the medicines are getting to you ,this was a brilliant update and if you hadn't told me that you were sick I wouldn't have known. The update was great and didn't falter to impress because of your sickness, don't call your work crappy it was brilliant like always (ok done with my scolding) :)

Khushi was far too cute, I thought she would act all tensed and agitated in front of Arnav but she was in full happy mode and being her normal self around him. The face making thing was too funny and what she did with Vivaan was sweet, love their bonding, well atleast she gave a smile to the Not So Responding Raizada.

That's so good that Khushi was able to do somethiug for Rahul hopefully the committee will agree.

So another appearance in the shape of Akash Singh Raizada and that too a half brother...WHAT THE!!!

Interesting twist, just please tell how Arnav's parents died and how come the sibblings are darastically opposite to their parents having no.influence of their parents' upbringing(thank God for that). They truly were so bad.

How come Akash came to them a month ago and where was he all this time?

Again Di's apology got delayed to her Choote, what's up with Akash why did he react so severely to Anjali's pregnancy??...something to do with his past I guess.

Till now Khushi is linked with Arnav through mutual Di, mutual jiju, mutual neice or nephew, mutual friend lets not forget mutual school now do I sense another coincidence and mutualness in the shape of Arnav's half brother Akash and Khushi'sfriend Payal?

With the luck these two have what's the need of stalking each other when their destinies are doing that for them ;)

And what's up with the wallet still missing???

Great update ,loving my fav ff more and more . Get well soon,God bless you and thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: zunara_ali

You have the flu, hope you get well soon and I think the medicines are getting to you ,this was a brilliant update and if you hadn't told me that you were sick I wouldn't have known. The update was great and didn't falter to impress because of your sickness, don't call your work crappy it was brilliant like always (ok done with my scolding) :)

Khushi was far too cute, I thought she would act all tensed and agitated in front of Arnav but she was in full happy mode and being her normal self around him. The face making thing was too funny and what she did with Vivaan was sweet, love their bonding, well atleast she gave a smile to the Not So Responding Raizada.

That's so good that Khushi was able to do somethiug for Rahul hopefully the committee will agree.

So another appearance in the shape of Akash Singh Raizada and that too a half brother...WHAT THE!!!

Interesting twist, just please tell how Arnav's parents died and how come the sibblings are darastically opposite to their parents having no.influence of their parents' upbringing(thank God for that). They truly were so bad.

How come Akash came to them a month ago and where was he all this time?

Again Di's apology got delayed to her Choote, what's up with Akash why did he react so severely to Anjali's pregnancy??...something to do with his past I guess.

Till now Khushi is linked with Arnav through mutual Di, mutual jiju, mutual neice or nephew, mutual friend lets not forget mutual school now do I sense another coincidence and mutualness in the shape of Arnav's half brother Akash and Khushi'sfriend Payal?

With the luck these two have what's the need of stalking each other when their destinies are doing that for them ;)

And what's up with the wallet still missing???

Great update ,loving my fav ff more and more . Get well soon,God bless you and thanks for the PM.

Lol, okay 😆 You really do make me feel better. Dont worry, Im not on any meds as such. Just painkillers and asthalin. 😃

Nice update... Lyk d bond b/w Khushi nd Anjali

Loved the conversation between Arnav and Khushi.

Originally posted by: MsIPKKNDManic

First, how are you feeling now? Any better?

The Anjali/Vivaan/Khushi scenes are just so ... domesticated, in that they act like a proper unit - she's like their laadli daughter and they the worrisome parents. It's cute, but I think the man-child over there may have some problems in dealing with the attention batwaara 😆

Speaking of whom, at least he's just observing her, as opposed to scowling or something :P

Details, again - the whole 'coffee' thing. You have a real knack of explaining and going into a lot of depth into your writing ... it really helps us - well, I can only really talk about myself :P - to truly understand the little nuances of the characters ... it's nice :D

Ooh, finally, we are faced again with Akash ... and wow. They don't even know which parent was responsible? They have not had the best childhood! :/

But in that respect, it's really nice to see how far they've come and how each of them uses their past experiences to shape their present - and consequently, their future.

Obviously, not everything has been revealed yet, but Anjali - the soft, caring, nurturing one decides to love and be loved. She doesn't believe in revenge, or grudges and just wants to ... well, mother everyone, I suppose? Make up for what she possibly didn't have?

And then we have Arnav - obviously, he's faced a lot more trauma than just negligent parents. And the way he uses that fire and anger at what is possibly his helplessness at the time of the situation to propel himself is admirable, yet scary at the same time, because you're not sure of just how far he can go.

And now we have a new enigma of sorts ... Akash. I already feel for the poor guy, and I can only hope he proves to be an invaluable addition to the Raizada trio.

Also, you state that Anjali and Vivaan had accepted him with open arms - does this mean Arnav is still a little hesitant to accept him as a brother?

I wonder why Akash reacted like that to the news of Anjali's pregnancy? Hmm ... :/

Written great, as always, and waiting for the next one! :D

But get better soon if you're not already!! :D xx

nice update - waiting for the K's meeting w/the School board;