Dekh Ke Chalo| Part 22 | Link for #2 PG 122

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#611

excellent update...another twist...do continue soon

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norolim

@norolim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: dumas
hope you fell better i have the flu also and it really sucks to be sick everyone really walk on egg shells around asr because of his temper poor akash hope it just because he is afraid of his temper and noting to do with his blood thanks for the pm awesome update

Thank you so much for the concern :)

Aww, dont go hating my Arnav. I love him 😆 And get better :)

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#613

Loved the update..the first part was very cute..khushi s antics were sweet, anji and vivaan certainly seem to adore her..
Akash had certain issues, but why would anjali s voice about being pregnant serry him off so..he desperately needs someone, enter payal!!! Or is she his past???I like the way you include certain harsh realities in your stories, like the abuse and now something regarding akash..
I had though Arnav would be sponsoring rahul, but now??

Get well soon dear, done forget you have a kiss to complete 😆 ..just joking, take care of your health..

Edited by peepli - 12 years ago

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avchowdhury

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Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Great update looking forward for the next update

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Originally posted by: dreamyshadows
Lol, digest? You say it like a bad thing 😆 And thank you 😊

Digest as in better understanding. you suddenly introduced akash as an illegitimate son with a dreadful past. so soche ka padi in mami espeak 😆

sorry but your anjali is coming across as a ditz who seems to care more about her chhonu rather than her chote. she didn't go into his room to pacify him when the bomb exploded. she didn't chose to raise the issue again in private. For crying out loud, she should know her brother better.

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sweatmango

@sweatmango

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Posted: 12 years ago

#616

Awesome update. Get well soon.

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#617

Wait a minute here. Did he just abuse Akash? My God! He is violent! And quite a baby! He was so hurt that his sis didn't tell him first before Chonu!! (This is quite funny, eh? I mean considering he is a grown up and so strong in every other way!) Love Kushi. I just love her character. She has a sense of humor and she is sensitive and emotional and passionate (which he noted right away) but she still prefers to cry in private. I would love for him to catch her sobbing her heart out! Wonder what he would then...

I just have one question. When you mentioned previously a few chapters ago, "...he could never control his arousal.." (don't know if these are his exact words) and he loathed himself for it. Now what did you mean. Did his arousal stem from his memory of his abuser? Was he aroused because of her? I hope not!

Loving this FF. Must admit, I wasn't too enthusiastic at the beginning, when I read about the sexual abuse. But I don't feel disgusted so far. Must be the way you are divulging the bits and pieces. So subtle, so that we do not get overwhelmed! Thanks for doing that. I feel that means you have decided to tackle this issue with sense rather than sensationalism!

Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting for the next update. I wonder if he will be at the committee and refuse her Rahul's scholarship?

Waiting...

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ducky_anne

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Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Do get better soon! I liked the update, it had great chemistry between Khushi, Anjali and Vivaan! Poor Akash though! Arnav is so tact-less sometimes, but I guess he wouldn't be Arnav if he wasn't!