Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*
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SO, I was just going to read the update and go to sleep, but i gotta say this!PROOF READ, sister!!! I get so tired of reading one scene four times just because you randomly pop in a character that is not suppose to be present in the scene.Example: Shilpa Karan boxing!Shilpa managed to put a blow on Rey's face with her bare hands.Seriously, REY!!! *shaking my head*Writer like you, needs to know the importance of editing!I am right there with Karan on one thing! Even, I am bit confused on their mission, but oh well, being a reader I think I am suppose to fall for all the suspense and mysteries! lol :pOne query, who is Khushboo? Was she mentioned before. I kinda dont remember all of the side characters mentioned till now..Now, am off!! Update soon, miss!
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