Not in my Destiny... - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
Great part 😃...
Gang kabhi nai sudhre gi...
Always trying to make 'Couples' 😆..
Ahem!! Rey ko bohat jalan ho rahi hai 😉...
Isn't he happy with his current 'GF' 😳...
I'm liking this new , nice Shivam...

Story is going good ..
Loving it ❤️...
Continue soon..
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyccc storyyy... lovingg it...
n yaaar couples huh kitne couples banaogiii <3
update sooon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..😊

Loved it...😃

I guess.. she's just caring for shivam alot...😛

But everyone & rey is thinking otherwise...😳

Coz thats why rey will think she is with shivam..

But.. in actual rey will realize his love for kriya...😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates :-) love seeing Rey jealous
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Posted: 12 years ago

Continuing my ff Not in My Destiny

Here comes Part 10:

Recap : Rey angry on Kria and She slapped him.

Kria felt very bad as she slapped him but Rey was heartbroken and decide to leave from there.

Rey to friends : guys…office me bahot important kam aa gaya hai…mujhe jana hoga…

Swayam : rey... ek din bad chale jana…abhi weather bhi thik nahi hai…

Rey : don't worry swayam I'll take care….

Tani : rey…aap kisi aur ko kam assign nahi kar sakte ho…please ruk jao…

Rey : Tani..mera jana zaruri hai…(looking towards Shivam)

At Kria's room,

Vishakha : kria…rey jaa raha hai…

Kria was lost in her thoughts.

Vishakha : are u listening? Rey jaa raha hai…

Kria(to herself) : mujhe rey ko thappad nahi marna chahiye tha…mujhe rey se maafi mangni hogi…

Rey bid goodbye to friends and went by his car.

Kria ran towards his car but he was gone far from kria.

At night,

Kria was watching news on TV and some lines were flashing in News channel.

Breaking News : Bahot Barish ke karan Land Slide hui hai…kai logo ke phanse hone ki Ashanka hai…

Vishakha : kria…ye news me jis area ke bare me bata rahe hai…wahi rasta Mumbai jata hai…

Kria : what? Rey bhi wahi raste se…

Kria was trying to call Rey but in vain.

All friends tried but Rey's cell was switched off and Tani was out of control(crying).

Swayam : guys…me aur vicky police station jakar rey ke bare me janne ki koshish karte hai… tab tak tum Tani ka khayal rakhna.

Sharon : tum apna khayal rakhna…

Kria(to herself) : kab tak mai aise hi wait kar sakti hu…mujhe jana hoga rey ke pas…

Kria to Shivam : mujhe gadi ki keys do…

Shivam : mujhe pata hai tum rey ko dhundhne ja rahi ho…par tum akeli?

Kria : Shivam…ab is bar me rey ko kho nahi sakti…

Kria left and searched many places but rey was nowhere.

Kria was struck in Jam.

Police : mam, aap iske age nahi ja sakti…aage bahot badi landslide hui hai…

Kria : par mera jana zaruri hai…

Kria got off from car and went towards the affected area.

Kria(crying) : rey..tum kaha ho? Kab se tumhe dhundh rahi hu…

Precap : Rey found Kria.

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome updt
bt itna chotu sa
nxt time bada updt chahiye
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u update...

nic update

but chotu tha nxt time bada karna nd jaldi fast
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was great and fabulous... rey was just try to tell kria that shivam i hate it...
any how rey left in anger for mumbai and news was flash all over...
kria went for a rey search of... precap it get interest to read more...
do continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
itna chota update😒
bt i luv dis chappy,,,,waiting eagerly 4 nxt update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rey gussa ho k ghar se jaing ...
N then woh phas gaya😲...
This is so not good 🤔...
Kria Rey ko khud he dhoondne mikal pari , control nai hua hoga usse 😉...

Nice part 😃...
Though the story is proceeding slowly But I love this story ❤️...
Will be waiting for the next part...
N thanks for the pm 😊

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