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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part 😃...
Well!! I actually thought that Kria will introduce Shivam as her Boy Friend...
But yahan toh baat he kuch aur nikli ...
Waise acha hai , a change is good 😆...
Hmm...Shivam inviting all of them to his parents Anniversary , interesting ...
Rey kese jal raha tha when he saw Kria and Shivam together 😉...
Even though the story is proceeding slowly slowly But I'm loving it ❤️...
Waiting to know what happens next...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

rofl... just a frnd 😲

fir theek hai.. 😛

varna hum to darr hi gye they 😆

hahaha... rey ki haalat ... bechara 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thats A very swt update 👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
nyc ff...
read all the parts in a go...
clear all d mu's soon...
swaron n kriyaansh ko jaldi milado...
make rey more jealous so that he can confess soon...
update soon...
do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nikkreyarshafan

nyc ff...

read all the parts in a go...
clear all d mu's soon...
swaron n kriyaansh ko jaldi milado...
make rey more jealous so that he can confess soon...
update soon...
do pm me...


thanks...
next time i will surely pm u...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Continuing my ff Not in My Destiny

Here comes Part 8:

Recap: All friends decided to go Panchgini.

Shivam : kria…hamara plan work to karega na…

Kria : ofcourse…u don't worry…

Kria , Neha, Vishakha and Sharon were in the car of Shivam whereas other were in Rey's Car.

After some hours…they reached the Farm house of Shivam.

Shivam : kria kisi bhi chiz ki zarurat ho to bata dena…

Kria : its ok…

Rey was listening and he was furious to see them.

Tani : Rey…hum lunch ke baad bahar ghumne halenge…mujhe Panchgini dekhna hai…

Rey: Tani hum sabke sath aye hai…hum sab ke sath bahar jayenge…

Tani was really upset with Rey's behaviour.

Tani (to herself): rey ne pehli bar mujhse itni rudely baat ki…

Rey ignored tani and went to his room.

Kria and Neha were getting ready in room.

Neha : kria…after long time we are together…

Kria : ha…

Kria : neha…tum kuch dino se bahot alag behave kar rahi ho…

Neha : kya…kya tumhe pata chal gaya…

Kria : ha…mujhe hi nahi sabko pata chal gaya…

Neha: kya…mere aur Vicky ke break up ke bare me sab ko pata chal gaya?

Kria : break up ?? me to tumhari Improved English ke bare me baat kar rahi thi…kya tum aur Vicky ab sath nahi ho…ye kaise hua?

Neha : neha caught Vicky red handed with other girl.

Kria : neha…vicky aisa nahi kar sakta…

Neha(crying on kria's shoulders) : but he did…

At Garden area,

Kria was enjoying evening walk. She saw Vicky trying to peep in Neha's Window.

Kria : ye tum kya kar rahe ho?

Vicky: me…me to bus neha ko hi bol ne aya tha…

Kria : Window se?

Vicky : wo kya hai na…neha thodi filmy hai…to filmy style me hi bol raha tha…

Kria : mujhe neha ne sab kuch bata diya hai...tumne aisa kyun kia?

Vicky : neha ko misunderstanding ho gayi thi…

Kria: to tumne neha ko kyun nahi bataya…

Vicky : bahot try kia…par neha mujhpe trust nahi karti hai..

Kria: do you love her?

Vicky : kya mujhe prove karna hoga…

Kria: ha… par mujhe nahi neha ko…

Vicky : kya tum mujhe help karogi?

Kria: ha… agar neha abhi bhi tumse pyaar karti ho to…

Vicky : thanks kria…

At kria's room,

Kria(to herself) : pata nahi kitno ki lovestory ko sahi track par lana padega…

Kria texted to Shivam to meet her on tarace after dinner.

Precap : Kria trying hard to sort out differences in Two lovestory but a new story is created.

Do like and comment.

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Posted: 12 years ago
yppp superb chpterrr
n kriaansh ki story toh ban kar hi rhegi ji
love it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nature2

yppp superb chpterrr

n kriaansh ki story toh ban kar hi rhegi ji
love it


unki story forever rahegi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. . .
Itna chota update,
so,chota coment. .

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