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prabhjot ARMA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

loveu for this

megical kriyaansh

u roke it

what a talent

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Puja

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Congrats for new thread...!!!:D
n awesome updates...
Adorable!!!

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priyasogani8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

eee mast majedaar shaandaar wow yaar...

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kuhu bhatta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

awsummm update,,,,,,,,luv it,,,,😃

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Diya_luv_D3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Awesooome dude

Ur ff is like a addictive drug

Cant stop reading

Please updaate and pm me

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Here's the update.

Chapter 11:
The day at college was very tiring. Rey couldn't meet kriya and neither could kriya. Both of only had some glimpses of each other. Kriya was busy with the girls whereas rey with the boys. Rey was eagerly waiting for the rehearsals to start so that he could meet her. They were sitting in the class and rey was constantly staring at her.
Vi: oye rey tu baar baar kriya ko kyu dekh raha hai?
Re:mai mai kaha dekh raha hu..tu kuch bhi mat bol.
Ni:jhoot mat bol humne dekha...
Re:aisa kuch nahi hai hai samjha.
At that time rey's girl friend priyanka came. She hugged rey and kissed him on the cheek. At that point of time kriya turned around at saw priyanka kissing rey. She was shocked and angry at the same time.
*****Kriya's P.O.V*****
How dare that girl..uski himmat kaise huyi rey ko kiss karne ki. Aur yeh rey unki itni himmat vo mere saamne kisi aur ladki ko kiss karne de rahe hai...arrgghh mujhe kyu fark padh raha hai, vo rey ki girl friend hai toh vo dono kuch bhi kare mujhe kya...par mujhe itna bura kyu lag raha hai??
*****P.O.V Ended*****
Rey saw kriya staring at them. It was clearly visible on her face that she was jealous. He wantedly pulled priyanka close to him and started talking to her, playing with her hair. Kriya's jaws dropped down. She felt like smacking him first. Swayam who is observing all this chuckled. He knew that his best friend and his sister are in love with each other.

Rey wantedly was making kriya jealous. He knew that he loves her but just wanted to confirm kriya's feelings for him. Now seeing her jealous he is sure that she loves him but is unaware about it. Thanks to his mom and sharon who made him realize his feelings for kriya.
*****Flashback*****
Before entering into the class rey was in the RH and then Sharon entered.Rey was lost in his own thoughts. He was thinking about his mom's words.
Sh;Rey kya soch raha hai?
R: nothing I'm just confused.
Sh: confused as in??
R: Im confused about my feelings for kriya.
At this sharon looked at him with her one eye brow raised. She placed her hand on his shoulder and spoke
Sh: rey mujhe sab kuch batao. Jahan tak mai tumhe jaanti hu tum toh kabhi bhi itne confused nahi the. Whatever the situation be you were the one confident then why in dilemma today?
R: I don't know shar, I mean I love to spend time with her, her eyes, her smile, her innocence everything makes me go crazy for her. Her sad face makes me upset. A day without talking to her makes feel its the worst day ever. But I'm confused is this only friendship?? Or something else??
Sharon smiled at him.
Sh:rey I'm so happy...
Re:kyu??
Sh: arrey budhu I'm happy because you are finally in love.
Re:love??
Sh: haan idiot love..Rey tumhe abhi bhi yeh realize nahi huya that you love her. Tumne hi mujhe bataya tha when I was confused about my feelings for swayam. Tumne hi kaha tha that when you want to spend each and every moment of your life with your special ones, their smile, their sadness everything thing affects you then it implies that you are love with that person, Remember. Toh what are you thinking about go and tell her.
Re: no shar I can't. First I need find out about her feelings for me.
Sh:okay, but Im very happy. She hugs him tight and he responds back equally.
Re:thnxx shar, you are the best
Sh: I know
Re: but shar, agar swayam ko pata chala about this then how would he react.
"I don't have a problem" came a voice from behind. Both of them turned around and found swayam standing there with a smile.
Sh: tumne humari convo suni?
Sw: yup..and rey I'm soo happy finally you are in love.
Re: tujhe koi problem nahi hai??
Sw: of course not dude. And he hugged him.
Sw: vaise dude thanks for making sharon realize her feelings for me,nahi toh pata nhi mera kya hota?
Sharon blushed at this and went away from there.
Sw:chal, see you later
Re: byee
Re(self talk): yes yes yes...whooo I'm I LOVE WITH KRIYA...so lets begin...
*****FLASH BACK ENDS*****

Soon the lectures finished and all the girls were in the locker room getting ready for rehearsals.
Sim: guys I was thinking ki aaj shaam hum log shopping ke liye chale??
Ri:shopping!! Awesome idea simmi.
Vish: dude no plzz again shopping..tum logo ko aur koi kaam nhi hai kya?
Sh: uffo vish chalna shopping chalte hai
Kr: mujhe bhi yeh acha idea lagta hai
Vish: fine!! chalo then par abhi lets go for rehearsals.
Girls:lets gooo

Boys except rey were waiting for the girls in the rehearsal hall. Finally girls arrived. Before entering into the RH kriya saw rey with a girl so close in the corridor, they were talking. Rey saw kriya from the corner of the eyes and then purposely he pulled the girl more close to him and here kriya is burning with jealousy. She irritatedly walked inside.
Ni: finally tum log aa gaye.Chalo lets start the practice.
They started their rehearsals and in between there were few duet steps and while doing these steps kriya didn't even look at rey. Rey thought "arrey isse kya huya?"
Re:baat cutter kya huya??
Kr: kuch nahi...She said not irritatedly
Re: toh fir tum meri taraf dekh bhi nahi rahi..maine kuch kiya??
kr: nahi aapne kuch nahi kiya...aap toh kabhi kuch karte hi nahi ho?? bas mai hi pagal ki tarah gussa ho jaati hu.
Rey was controlling his laughter as he knew she was talking about the corridor incident.
Re:arrey par batao toh sahi kis baat par gussa ho??
Kr: vo aap...She stopped in the middle and thought "mujhe kyu itna farq padh raha hai aur mai rey se gussa kyu hu?just because vo apni girl friend ke saat hai"
Re:kya huya tumne answer nahi diya??
kr: umm kuch nahi..
Re:toh tum bekar mai mujhse gussa ho
K:rey bola kuch nhi plzz aur questions mat pucho
Re: okk

They all were busy in the rehearsals and suddenly a voice cam from behind "bhaiya". Everyone turned around and ans saw it was Pihu..
Everyone(except kriya): Pihu tum!!!!
Pihu was standing there at the door with a huge smile. She saw rey and immediately ran towards him. He picked her up in his arms with a confused expression.
Re: pihu tum yahan kya kar rahi ho??
Pi:mai aapse milen aayi hu
Re:lekin mana kiya tha na maine ki tum colg nahi aaogi toh fir kyu aayi??
Pi:aapko acha nhi laga mera surprise jao katti aapse nahi baat karni mujhe aapse. Saying this she got down from his arms and went to sharon making a crying face.
Pi: sharon di dekho na bhaiya ko unhe mera surprise acha nhi laga.
Sh:kisne kaha acha nhi laga?? dekho hum sab kitne happy hai..
Pi:par mai bhaiya se baat nahi karungi
Ne:okk not talking u
Re: arrey meri princess gussa hai mujhse
Pi:yesh
Re:acha baba sorry...
Pi:koi baat nhi..saying this she kissed him on the cheek..
Kriya was observing all this and she a sweet smile on her face on seeing rey and Pihu's bond. Pihu saw kriya and she went to her.
Pi:so aap ho kriya di..hii I'm Pihu
Kr:hello..aur tumhe mera naam kaise pata??
Pi:rey bhaiya ne bataya
Kr: rey ne?
Pi: haan bhaiya ne..aaj kal bhaiya sirf aapke baare mai hi sochte hai aur
...Before she could complete rey put his hand on her mouth. All start giggling and kriyansh get embarressed.
Re: chalo guys lets practise
Pi:mujhe bhi dance seekhna hai
Re:abhi nahi baad mai
Pi:nhi abhi plzz
Kr:okay abhi
Sh:guys lets call it off for today...abhi lets teach Pihu dance and fir thodi der baad hum girls shopping ke liye jaa rahe hai
Pi:yayyy and mai bhi aapke saath shopping chalu?
Kr: of course cutipie..

The boys sat at one corner and the girls were teaching pihu dance. In between pihu couldn't get a step proper then kriya sat on her knees and helped Pihu in getting the step. All this while rey was smiling on seeing this. In just some time Kriya and Pihu got gelled along so well. He came back from his thoughts on hearing Pihu's voice.
Re: haan bolo Pihu
Pi:bhaiya jaldi taiyar ho jao mai na kriya di aur sharon di aur aap bhi chaloge. Swayam bhaiya, vicky bhai sab log change krne gaye hai aap bhi jao
Re: haan jaa raha hu.

Every one reached the mall and each couple was scattered in different directions. Kriyansh and Pihu were together. Kriya was busy selecting cute frocks for Pihu and was making her try them while rey was busy observing these two. He smiled on seeing them. While Pihu had gone to the trail room kriya turned around and found that rey was staring at her. She felt a little uneasy as everyone present there were looking at them. On seeing kriya become uneasy rey straightened himself. Kriya took a green tee with her and asked rey to try it. Rey gladly took that tee and went to the other trail room and at the same time pihu came out. Pihu selected a dress for kriya and asked her to just try it once. Kriya saw that all the trail rooms were full except one as the its door wasn't locked from inside. As soon as she opened the door she saw rey standing there shirtless. She couldn't stop herself from gawking at him. Her eyes roamed around his well built body. Rey immediately pulled kriya inside due to which she lost her balance and banged into him. He quickly locked the door. Her hands were resting upon his chest and they were sharing an intense eye lock. Rey slowly pinned a few strands of her hair that were disturbing their eye lock behind her ears. Kriya was the first to come to her senses.
Kr:rey unmm
He didnt let her speak and put his finger on her lips. Kriya was constantly moving to free herself. Finally rey loosened his grip. Kriya quickly went to the door and was about to open it. Before she could open the door rey spoke leaning towards the wall.
Re: tum door open karogi aur sab log hume saath mai dekhene toh kya sochenge ek ladka shirtless aur ek ladki saath mai trail room mai kya kar rahe hai??
Kriya stayed quiet because she had no answer for his question and also he was right. She innocently spoke
Kr: ab kya kare
Re: abbb...saying this he moved forward n kriya moved backward n hit the door. He kissed her at the edge of her lips. Her cheeks flushed and she looked down. He was about to say something but they heard a few sounds from outside. It was as if a girl a was crying. Rey immediately recognized the voice. It was Pihu crying. Rey told kriya to go out first and he came out a few minutes later. When he came out he saw pihu in kriya's arms and her head on kriya's shoulders. She had stopped crying now. On being asked by rey why pihu was crying kriya replied that she was alone as none of them was there and got scared and now she is fine. Rey smiled on seeing them like this. The whole gang now went to the food court. Even there pihu didnt leave kriya. She was sitting in between kriyansh and was holding kriya's arm and talking to her. It was as if pihu was kriya's little sister not rey's. Finally while going home pihu came to rey.

~~~~~Pihu n Rey in car~~~~~
Pi:bhaiya kriya di bahut sweet hai
Re: i know
Pi: vo bahut caring hai
Re: i know
Pi: vo bahut helpful hai...un hone aaj mera bahut ache se khayal rakha aur mujhe dance bhi sikhaya...she is soo nice...mujhe vo bahut achi lagi
Re: mujhe bhi
Pi:toh aap unhe bol kyu nhi dete ki vo aapko pasand hai
Re: bata dunga bahut jaldi
Pi: acha bhaiya ab aapko kriya di bahut pasand hai toh aap mere saath time spend karna kam toh nhi karoge?
Re: noways princess...tumhari jagah koi nhi le sakta
Pi: acha bhaiya...
Re: no more questions pihu
Pi;okk
And they both reached home.

hows it?? Do hit the like tab and do comment plz.

Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

res.

unres..

luved d update...

it was damn awesome...

rey's feelings for...

kriyaansh are confused for their feelings...

rey making kria jealous...

kria n pihu share a sweet bonding...

kriyaansh trial room scene was awesome...

luved pihu's n rey's convo ...lolz...

update soon.

Edited by cool_star14 - 13 years ago

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

res
***Unres***

awesome part...
really loved it to the core

rey kriya ko jealous feel karwa rah tha... hehe 😆
i can imagine that scene... kria full on jealous.. superb

rey nd kria convo b/w dance was amazing
even i cnt control my laugh at that time

nd pihu' s entry
Surprise for rey

kria nd pihu's bond was beautifully shown...
akhir jaldi hi bhabhi joh bane wali hai pihu ki..

nd the trial room b/w kriyaansh was mind blowing...

overall it was cute, sweet, awesome, hot nd funny too..

update soon

as cnt wait for it

thnx for pm

Edited by GayatriJethani - 13 years ago

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

It was amazing...especially Rey n Pihu's sweet brother-sister bond...then Pihu n Kria's convo n then Rey cums n puts his hand on Pihu's mouth!!! Rey making Kria jealous...then Rey pukking Kria into the changing room n the kiss!!!!! it was sooo cute n amazing,!!!! really loved it...each scene was awww!!!:):) really loved it!!!!! plzzz update soon...n thanx 4 the PM!!!!!!!:):)<3