Kriyansh FF- I will Always Love u#2 chk index/p155

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To the Second Thread
of
"Kriyansh FF- I Will Always love u"

I still don't believe that the old thread is completed.

I'm dancing like a maniac. "Dhinka Chika"

All thanks to my lovely spamming queens meow, candy, sweets, K, cookie, Kesha, mish, himani, angel, kuhu_Arsha...hope I didn't miss anyone😳...Thank you sooo much guys..Love u🤗

And The most important thing thanks to all the readers for supporting this FF and reading this. Love you all...


Updating in few mins...


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My other works:

Kriyansh OS-Celebrations of love:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2963242/celebrations-of-love-a-kriyansh-os

Kriyansh OS-meant to be together: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2979270/kriyansh-os-meant-to-be-together-epilogue-pg-25

Kriyansh OS- Promise to never leave you again:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3074539/kriyansh-os-promise-to-never-leave-you-again

Kriyansh SS- True Love v/s Evil
Thread1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2994759/kriyansh-ss-true-love-v-s-evil-link-to-thread2-pg1
Thread 2:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3176147/kriyansh-ss-true-love-v-s-evil-2-chk-pg23-pms-ltr

Kriyansh SS- Love Stories are Made in Heaven:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3143289/kriyansh-ff-love-stories-made-in-heaven-1

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Posted: 13 years ago
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INDEX

Thread 2
Chapter 9-pg 1
Chapter 10-pg 8
Chapter 11-pg 15
Chapter 12-pg 22
Chapter 13-pg 34
Chapter 14-pg 42
Chapter 15-pg 49
Chapter 16-pg 67
Note- pg 74
Chapter 17-pg 78
Chapter 18: pg 98
Note-pg 105
Chapter 19: pg 108
Chapter 20: pg 126
Chapter 21: pg 133

Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yayy!!!! first one to comment
Congrats for the new thread...
you truly deserve it...
now coming to the update it was simply awesome...
Kriyansh fully drenched must be luking super hot😳
finally he kissed her...yippie...
those idiotic boys😡so cheap...but y to fear when rey is there...😆
Good job👍🏼
Edited by krasforever - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats for 2nd Thread 🤗.
Edited by Roxxy47 - 13 years ago
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As Promised here's the update. Enjoy.

Rey and kriya got into the car and rey started driving. At first both of them were quite but then rey started a conversation.
Re:so, kaisi lagi tumhe yeh party...
Kr: I loved it bahut achi thi...bahut maza aaya
Re:aur humara dance??
Kriya became silent. She went back to the flash back thinking about their dance. It was rey who brought her back.
Re:tumne answer nahi kiya...kaisa laga humara dance??
Unknowingly kriya's cheeks turned red and rey was observing all this. He didn't even miss a single expression of her.
Kr:ummm acha laga
"sirf acha??" rey asked teasingly..."ummm bahut acha laga" replied kriya.
To avoid more questions from him she started looking out side. Suddenly it started to rain. "Roko roko roko rey car roko" said an excited kriya. Rey immediately stopped the car and asked "kyu??"..."arrey baarish ho rahi hai aur mujhe baarish bahut pasand hai aur yeh toh mumbai ki pehli baarish hai isse kaise miss kar sakti hu???" answered kriya. She was about to go out side but rey stopped her.
"arrey paagal ho gayi ho kya? baarish mai bheegogi toh bimar hojaogi" said rey.
"i don't care...mujhe baarish mai bheegna hai bas" said kriya and she immediately got out of the car. Rey too got out.

Kuch Khaas hai from the movie Fashion-http://youtu.be/KchkSmNR1rk

(music)

kriya gets out of the car and goes in the nearby garden enjoying herself in rain. Rey to gets out of the car and leans against the door watching kriya.

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Kriya was playing and twirling in rain. Kriya insists rey to join her but he refuses. He feels some sought of different feeling. He felt like taking her in his arms and just be like that forever. Both of them are completely drenched in rain. Rey couldn't take his eyes of her, Her saree completely struck to her body making her look hawt.

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

Kriya could feel rey's intense gaze over. Even she was feeling different. She turned around to look at rey who was already looking at her. He had removed his jacket and due to the rain his white inner shirt had become nearly transparent almost revealing his body. She was finding it hard to look away.

(music)

He started walking towards her. With each step he took her heart beat increased. He gulped on seeing her. Seeing him gulp made it difficult for her to breathe properly. He smiled inwardly on seeing that even his gaze had an effect on her.

Kuch saaz hai jaage se jo the soye,
Alfaaz hai, chup se nashe mein khoye,

There was no necessity for words to speak about their feeling right now. He reached near her. She was looking down. He pulled her towards him with his one hand on her waist and made her look in his eyes. And just started swaying in the rain.

Nazrein hi samjhe yeh guftagu saari,
Koi arzoo ne hai angdayi li pyaari,

She was shocked at once on this reaction of his. When she looked into his eyes she got drowned in them. Both of them were feeling the same passion and desire and were moving along with each other.

Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,

Both of them were asking each other through theirthat what is this?? Is this love or something else?? Maybe yes this is love.

Naa inkaar hai, naa iqraar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad'

She turned to leave but he caught he wrist and pulled her back. Her back hit his chest. He slowly moved her hair towards one side and slid his right hand down her right arm intertwining their fingers and started kissing her on her nape and shoulders. He was sucking water drops on her neck.

(music)

Kriya had her eyes closed and was breathing hard. She was going weak in her knees so she leaned over him for support. Rey turned her towards him.

Kehna hi kya, mera dhakal naa koi,
Dil ko dikha, dil ki shakal ka koi,

Again their eyes spoke with each other, Her strand of hair was interrupting their eye talk, so he gently pinned it back of her ear and started caressing her cheeks. He kissed her on her cheeks.

Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi,
Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi,

Kriya was trying hard not to let her emotions out but looks likes her heart is not in a mood of listening to her. His on touch sent shivers down her spine.

Kyun Yeh Pukaar Hai
Kyun Bekaraar Hai
Shayad yeh pyaar hai, Pyaar hai shayad,

He lifted her in his arms and twirled around and kept her down. Again they started swaying. Both of them were feeling restless. At that moment they had a pure desire in them, desire to make each other their forever.

Jadoo sawar hai, naa ifteaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad,
Pyaar hai shayad..

There was seriously some magic spelled on them. Rey started twirling her round and bringing her more close to him with each and every twirl. May be they were sharing the passion of love.

Ooo..
Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Haii..
Ra ra re'na na na
Ra ra ra ra..
Na re na..
Pyaar hai shayad
Pyaar hai shayad
Yahi..

Kriya had her eyes closed and was just feeling this special moment. At last he stopped twirling her. Both of them were lost in each others eyes. Her lips were pink and were shivering may because of the cold or because of the proximity they were sharing. Rey slowly inched forward. Kriya could feel his hot breath against her skin. Their lips were a few inches apart. he was waiting for her to respond. Since she had already closed her eyes she slid her hand around his neck indicating him to proceed. Suddenly realization struck rey, and he didn't want kriya to feel awkward. So he just let his lips stay on her hers, just inhaling the fragrance of the other. At this action of rey kriya thanked him for not kissing her actually by tightening her grip around his neck.

Slowly they parted away. kriya was looking down blushing hard. Eventually the rain also stopped. She didn't want to face him so she started walking. Rey was just standing there for a few minutes thinking about what happened just now. He ran his fingers through his hair and followed her. While they were walking back towards the car, a few drunken people were present there. They were staring at kriya dirtily which made kriya feel disgusting and awkward. Rey on seeing this pulled kriya to his left side since those boys were on right. When Kriyansh passed through them they started passing dirty comments on kriya.
Boy1: hey baby zara hamri taraf toh dekhlo.
Kriya ignored it.
Boy2: Areey kahan ja rahi ho, humare saath bhi toh time spend karo
Again kriya ignored whereas rey was trying hard to control his anger.
Boy3(to his group): guys dekho kitni mast item hai
Boy4: haan yaar iska figure toh dekh, They all were looking at her from top to bottom and were passing comments. This was enough for rey to beat them up. He turned around and immediately punched one of them. Soon the fight started. While fight was going on one of the boys asked rey "abbey lagti kya hai yeh teri". Rey was facing kriya and he replied "meri girl friend hai vo...dur raho usse".

When he said girl friend kriya looked up as all this while she was crying. As she looked up their eyes met. From back one of the goons brought a thick wooden rod to beat rey. Kriya noticed this and she immediately pushed rey aside and the wooden stick hit kriya's shoulder. She cried and winced in pain. Rey couldn't see kriya crying so he bet them up with all his might. Some how kriya stopped him and those boys ran away. Rey saw that kriya's shoulder was bleeding. He asked her to sit in car and he sat opposite to her. He immediately took out the first aid kit and started wiping the blood. Kriya clutched his hand as it hurt her soo much. This time rey was a bit gentle. He was finding it difficult to wipe the blood under her sleeve.
Re: ummm kriya vo...vo...kriya didn't understand what he was trying to speak. She followed his gaze and understood. She tried pulling down her sleeve but couldn't do it properly. Then rey placed her hand on her shoulder and slowly pulled down her sleeve. His mere touch was making it difficult for her to breathe. He quickly bandaged her shoulder and pulled up her sleeve. Kriya thanked him for this and then he dropped her back to her home. Before going inside kriya told rey "thanks for making this evening special" to which rey smiled.


So hows it??? Sorry if you felt its a little short😳. good or bad??? jaisa bhi hai like and commenting is a must. Criticisms welcomed.😊
P.S the next update will be after next Thursday as I have my exams starting from tomorrow.
P.P.S pms later


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Edited by lovely7010 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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for 2nd thread...hope to see more threads of this FF
and about update...it was awesome
kriyansh romance in the rain...waooo that was amazing and rey fighting for kria and called her his girlfriend was amazing...and the way rey took care of kria was superb
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratz for the new thread...


and awesome chapter loved i...
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CONGO FR THE NEW THREAD TWINKI
Hope u make many more lyk this 🥳


cuming to the updte
it was as awesumm as always 👏
luvd it ❤️
awwiiee kriyansh convo soo sweet 😳
luvd the way rey was teasing kriya 😛
then kriya dancing in rain nd rey admiring her 😍
luvd the song perfectly fits the situation
aaahhh kriyansh almst kissd bt stppd 😳
achaa hua warna baadme gadbad ho jati toh
those boys were soo cheap arhh...😡
achaa hua rey ne unki achi pitai ki 👏
aah kriya ko chot lag gayi 😒
luvd the caring rey
updte soon

Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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congo shongo 4 new thread🥳🥳

awsummm update,,,,,,,,,dancing prt was amazing,,,
eagerly waiting 4 nxt chappy😃
Edited by kuhu_Arsha - 13 years ago
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Superb part 👏...
Haye dancing in the rain 😍...
The song sequence was Romantic 😳...
N their kiss was mEgical ☺️...
Wow Rey in action 😎...
Rey bandaged Kria, so Sweet 😳...
Awesome part 😃...
Loved it ❤️...
Continue soon 😊.

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