ARSHI FF:ONE NIGHT STAND 2 (cr) THREAD TWO

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pantrossy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#961

Super update... I love the bond between khushi n gul... Acer dared to sit on ASR's shoe...ha ha ha
I felt so bad for khushi when Arnav shouted on her.. Poor girl... N i was hell shocked by his last behave... I know whenever she was around he cant control himself but that was too much after insulting her...

The must amazing part when gul said "maa" .. I was thinking about ASR's reaction what if he heard that ...?

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goguma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#962

there is something abt kushi that draws everyone to her!
lnow, even gul feels close to her...
this is nice..

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dhwanimehta23

@dhwanimehta23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#963

nice update!!!!!!!!!!!!!😊😊😊

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mahamzara

@zarie_eman

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Posted: 13 years ago

#964

update...

arnav's reaction is unexpecting☺️☺️

4 PM...

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#965

hi there

so lately all i think about is u'r crazy, out of control ff.

Gul and khushi bonded. Arnav surely cud c through that since khushi's aerola was all soaked in gul's saliva.

though arnvas's last reaction was shocking ,it was highly apt for the situation.

this wud b the bst way to scare khushi off so she doesn't dare going to gul again. he wudn't was his n gul's hopes to go up only to b crashed by a female again.

anger & frustration was highly evident but one can not miss the frightened arnav...who was terrified coz he can't keep himself away from khushi n now gul too. arghhh must suck to b him.

so powerful n yet so helpless.

luv u'r work.

Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago

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MithilaTorr

@MithilaTorr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#966

It really is good. A very different POV. Life could turn around when you have such circumstances

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

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Posted: 13 years ago

#967

Okay so i adored gul and khushi connection. But the last bit?? What the??? Like what in gods name is aSr playing at??! Lol the guy bi polar !!

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 13 years ago

#968

whaat the hell just hapnd :O

i read ur entire ff..relli different..pm me pls :)

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anuramesh26

@anuramesh26

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Posted: 13 years ago

#969

hi girl! Wooh hooo! you know i was on vacation and trying to catch up with the updates,and thats when i read ur ONS 2 - and guess what once I started just couldnt stop until i came to chapter 11.

Must admit - didnt expect a dark fiction from u dear (not in wrong sense). It requres a lot of judgement and i appreciate your efforts in censoring the mature contents on the forum and respect that u display for the forum rules and others POV. 👏👏👏

The story line is really wonderful! Feel sad for Arnav! Always admire kushi's strength. Misha and Gul are absolute angels *muah*. Acer tho rockstar hai - acer ki jai ho he had the guts of sitting on ASR without his permission. What was the last line?! ☺️ And he was planning to stay away from her eh!?

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Ishrafan11

@Ishrafan11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#970

Awesome update loved it love the bonding of kushi gul and acer so cute gul calling kushi ma already aww so cute last two lines were unexpected and hot lol cant wait to read more thanks for the pm.