OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp)

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melanie

@Black_kittykat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Very very nice, liked it very much

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

🤣 wat a slap to daadi !!
sooo cute !!
i wish it happened in d show...*sigh*

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shagun-rocks

@shagun-rocks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

omg, dadi's plans back fired!!...*doing a happy dance *...couldn't be more happier!!..this is awesome stuff!!...i just mentioned in gayathri's post, that you two are one hell of a mother-daughter combo!!...such amazing writers in the same family!!...totally envy your skills...just kidding!!...anyways fabulous job as always dear...so glad you penned something based on the new promo...

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anu

@anu17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

this is really awesome os...

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Dadi got an apt response...my heart is doing a dhinka chika...

You would continue, right?

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love_arshi

@love_arshi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Amazing, as always, Smita! I love the OS. 😉

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*ArShi*

@hetalmkn

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Wow... this was just so awesome... i could picture it as though watching an episode of it... was tooo good... plzz update soon part 3 and plzz pm me... plzzz

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Loved it...the cat and mouse game arnav is playing with Khushi was a delight to read...the poor girl is out of her Mind with fear and nervousness...he is such a Rakshas but Khushi's own adorable Rakshas.