OS in 2 parts: Rasams and Suhaag Raat (Comp)

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Loved part 1. Wonderful OS.

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Avani

@highonshows

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

oh god,...ThnQ for that timely *Breath...* as i too felt like i has stopped...felt like i had my breath caught in my throat...

Oh my god...that was a huge tease...Arnav is not playing havoc with Khushi's brains and senses but everyone on IF n around the worlds...

This is worse than Insane,...If sirf Suhaagraat ke naam pe yeh haal hai tou,...actualy suhaagraat pe kya hoga??

my brains can not even imagine...

n now ur OS like that is not even helping...Geez feeling like a teenager again...how romantically insane. 😉

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sow2428

@sow2428

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Beautifully written and the apt pictures.Eagerly awaiting your part 2

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KKKA

@KKKA

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

FANTASTIC ...AWESOME

ROMANTICALLY NAUGHTY N EMOTIONAL

IF YOU ARE UPDATING PLEASE PM ME

THANKS

KKKA

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sruthirishi

@sruthirishi

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

BEAUTIFULLY written...

can't wait to read more...

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Sanam07

@Sanam07

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Someone better get this across to the CVs before they shoot the episode...don't believe they can do better than this ❤️ Brilliant!!!!!!!!!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Really good! True to character ... And the ending.. I loved.

"You get your rasams, and I get my Suhaag Raat" - loved it! So ASRish!!

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aadyakali

@aadyakali

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Lovely OS... it is an utter pleasure to read yout work. Pure .. unadulterated bliss...

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Spriha

@KaranShilpa:)

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

You are so good dude! I LOVE the way you werite so simply, yet so intensely! Me and my friend were just discussing how sweet and real and yet romantic you are in ALL your OSs! Plz keep writing more :D

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OmNaMaSteOm

@OmNaMaSteOm

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

i missed my first page

hmmm lovely OS as usual

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