Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47 - Page 8

Originally posted by: disha15

reserved :)

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Tell me something,is there any genre in writing that you're not good at? 😆 you've mastered everything!romance mein toh aap bhai kamaal ho hi(tum mero ho bein its brand ambassador) and horror (now with shikar 😳.romance+horror-deadly combo!) and now action also! 😃 bas ab comedy baaki hai 😛(btw many ppl have been telling me that they want an RT-MC comedy ff.start kardo na woh bhi 😳 )... hello- ma jigar ka tukda ws comic.. sooper crack n crazy stuff...by dhanvi di

Originally posted by: sweetsanyo

res will edit 2omorow

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u noe di.. wat ma cousins say..

if u r mad at some one due to sm reason..

to it to fullest...

wat wrding dey use is- pitoo pitoo...AAPNE BAAP KA MAAL SAMJHKER PITOO...!!'''

(consider the man u beating - a property of your father...)

amzing know..

so here to , i ws cheering veer wid dis.. AUR MAARO AUR MAARO. AAPNE BAAP KA MAAL SAMJHKE MAARO..

haq se maare, lath(leg) se maaro.. punch se maaro, chate se maaro..

aapne baap ka maal samjhke maaro...

lovely dhisum dhisum update.. i lov all dis stuff...

but why did it end..

god dese tearchers hav such a bad timing..

local h sab k sab...

aieee...vikram... beta yeh aatitude kisse dekha rahe ho..

humare veer perr koi farak nhi padta..

u r flop in frnt him...

lovely update di.. loved it..

is it our mugzz...

but di, i dnt want mugz LIKE TOUCH ME NOT...

i want me equal dashing n smashing as veer.. TAKKER ki bandi honi chahiye.. plz...

ud soon di..

lov u..

maaro maaro, apne baap ka maal samjhker maaro

Originally posted by: pranita1202

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this comes 2 my mind after enjoying this action packed update

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UUP-uZeV0_w&feature=player_embedded

(Heeyyy..
Tali bajawe naache gaawe

Heeyyy..
Tali bajawe naache gaawe
Rab howe sarik jeene ke jasan mein) '- (2)
Apni tho baat margar kuch nirali hai
Apne toh khoon mein ishq ki lali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

Dhoop tashan hai, raat tashan hai
Apni tho har bath tashan hai
Kaise bhi halat tashan hai
Waise insaan hai
Tede apne karam huye hai
Hum suraj pe garam huye hai
Kabhi sharam pe sharam huye hai
Thode naadan hai
(Humpe hai rahe teer sikandar ka
Humpe kurban ha neel samundar ka) '-(2)
Hum jaise hai, kismet ke lakh sawari hai
Apni tho baat magar kuch nirali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

(Tali bajawe naache gaawe

Heeyyy..
Tali bajawe naache gaawe
heyyy
Rab howe sarik jeene ke jasan mein) '' (2)
Apni tho baat margar kuch nirali hai
Apne toh khoon mein ishq ki lali hai
Hoi apna jeena tho'jeenaaa'
(Tashan mein tashan mein
Tashan mein tashan mein ) '- (8)

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That was sooo goood

so apart frm stating the obvious how gr8 it was lets see how feel abt the update

so action was gr8

i loved veer's entry especially the sarcasm abt hockey stick😆

veer is full of attitude , the way he says vikram to take rahul's place

i love to u named veer archenemy 'vikram'

(i don't know if people remember the in PRC who had bad 4 sanyo n kidnaps her i.e her almost fiance was also vikram , i that track i soo wanted prithvi 2 kick the crap out of vikram but that didn't happen , )

so cooming back 2 now

the way u said he caught basket ball without seeing , i had a drool worthy rajat's image in my mind 😳

so he is a fighter👏

so the gal is mugs or not

might b or not

i guess not

so veer gets punishment to do hostel chores

hope wen mugs will enter he gets duty at gal's hostel😉

Originally posted by: Shraddhamurat

Veer stands for injustice thats really cool nd nice 😊

now and then he enters into a fi8 against injustice.

The man harassing a gal iz such a coward
well veer taught hm a nice lesson

Originally posted by: disha15

reserved :)

EDITED.

Tell me something,is there any genre in writing that you're not good at? 😆 you've mastered everything!romance mein toh aap bhai kamaal ho hi(tum mero ho bein its brand ambassador) and horror (now with shikar 😳.romance+horror-deadly combo!) and now action also! 😃 bas ab comedy baaki hai 😛(btw many ppl have been telling me that they want an RT-MC comedy ff.start kardo na woh bhi 😳 )

This update was fully action-packed(ofcourse u already know that,you only wrote it afterall! 🤣 ) I loved Veer's character! He is so righteous!You've done a great job in showcasing his characteristics.

Super update!Btw ahem,humaari heroine kab aayegi? 😛 or wait,was that girl in the market her only? 😲

Originally posted by: aru_86

wow great update..m feeling like watching a film

Originally posted by: swati_prithvi

wow nice ud.. full of aggression...fight..anger.. Veer fights against injustice.. well this make him different.. he is strong..brave..fearless.. & gud frm hrt...😛

bt he doesn't wanna show d soft part of his heart to any1..

got punishmnt of purchasing vegetables... ha ha ha...😆😆

thn agn he saved a gal..

gud..Veer is gr8..

luvd d ud..

waiting for d nxt part..😊