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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 9

Veer couldn't locate her anywhere unless after few seconds he heard some noise behind a tree... Frowning angrily he walked towards the tree..he wondered if she was mad...he thought again...he took another step when he saw her standing against the tree with her hands at her back...what was she trying to do"i am trying to hook my bra" Aarti whispered while looking at his puzzled features...

It was impossible for Veer to think of any solution...he seemed all confused...should he ask for his jacket...she was impossible...he came to teach her a lesson and here she's coming up with her problems...

"will you help me hook my bra please" she said innocently...

"stop it" he bursted angrily...
" don't you have anything else...rather than frustrating me" he was about to leave...

She took off the jacket...and stepped closer... "won't you help a girl in need???...please Veer...i know it is frustrating...but i can't go like this...please...its just a hook..."

That was not easy for Veer...he was angry...but then he saw her innocent face...she was pleading him...if she wanted his help, why is he having a problem...he thought...

"do it yourself..." he said while dusting his jacket...

"please Veer...how can you leave a girl in need...please look at my clothes...and i can't hook it myself...please..." Aarti was about to cry... She looked miserable...

Veer didn't knew what to do...but he thought of helping her... "fine...but what do i have to do??"

"nothing...just lift my top and hook my bra...its not that difficult" she said ...though she smiled inside...

Veer was rather in a difficult state...he had always fought...beaten people ...but that was much easier then helping Aarti...

He came behind her...Aarti closed her eyes...as she could feel his hands lifting her top... She wanted to hug him...but she controlled...she bit her lower lip...

"what should i..." Veer didn't look at her back...instead he faced the other side...

"if you look at the straps of my bra...you will be able to see..." she smiled mischieviously...

Veer unwantingly looked at her fair back...her skin was glowing...she had a beautiful back... He tried to lift the top and saw the straps of her bra hanging loose around her skin...

The moment his fingers touched skin...Aarti closed her eyes...his touch was tormenting her...she felt like an electric current touching her skin...

He slowly hold the straps with his hands and tried to hook them... "now how should i..."
Veer seemed all confused... Aarti was enjoying each and every moment...she loved his touch...

Veer saw one hook on one side of the strap and an eye on the other strap...

Aarti was still in a dreamland when he looked at her... "next time don't call me for help"

Aarti smiled while Veer walked away annoyingly...

"i know you will think about me..." Aarti was overjoyed...


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Uday and Sameer were waiting for Veer...it was almost evening... "what is taking Veer so long??"

Arjun was surprised "well i still can't believe that Veer went to drop a girl in her hostel"

Uday "its true...and who knows Veer may fall in love with her"

"this will never happen" replied Veer angrily...

Sameer and Uday looked at their angry friend who had no place for emotions in his life...
"what took you so long...did you drop her to her room?" Said Uday who was trying to guess the confused expressions on Veer's face...

Veer was quiet...how should he tell them what was he doing... "no and don't ask me again" he looked rather irritated...

"girls are a nuisance...hopleless and difficult to handle" said Arjun...he opened a bottle of soft drink...

"Veer you must have some drink and relax" Arjun offered the drink to Veer...

Sameer was looking at his watch again...

"this must be the 50th time you are looking at your watch" Arjun said while gulping...

"Sameer...stop wasting your time" Veer said while throwing the bottle away...

Sameer looked at his friends who were the biggest enemies of beautiful girls... "you all are too much...i mean why do you think girls can be a pain"

Veer nodded his head "look at you...you are least bothered about anything else in this whole world...and i bet you will soon go mad"

Sameer smiled... "well can't say anything right now...i am getting late...will catch you all later"

Veer and Arjun weren't happy... "God save him"




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Sheetal was getting ready when she saw Aarti entered the room...
"lala...hmmm...nanananana" Aarti was singing in love...

Kirti made a bad face... "why are you wet??"

Aarti crossed her arms... "i am coming from a pool of love...my beloved gave me his warmth and made me wet" she opened her cupboard to change her clothes...

Kirti watched her sister who was smiling in her own world... " you know what Aarti...you have lost your senses"

Aarti turned at Kirti "why are you worried...i have lost my senses...you have all your senses in right order"

Kirti nodded her head and picked up a magazine...

" hey Sheetal...where are you going??" Aarti asked while touching her dupatta...

Sheetal looked shyly... "going to meet someone..."

Aarti teased her "oh really...hmmm...but Sheetal what will you do??"

"do what??? I mean what do you mean???" Sheetal asked curiously...

Aarti smiled and took her dupatta... "well..well, as far as i know you...you will sit with a dupatta over your head and keep shying..."

Kavita picked up another pen from her table... "stop it both of you...and Sheetal you must stay away from these boys...they are idiots who only want a girlfriend for there sweet selfishness"

"if Veer loves me for that sweet selfishness...i would happily give him what he wants...but..." Aarti responded...

Kirti looked at Aarti "you are so horrible...i mean it...you want to do what any girl would avoid doing...and would think at least hundred times... "

Aarti took out another pair of dry clothes... "its because they are scared but i am in love and there are no bounderies in love"...

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update
aarti is too much
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update dear...
Ooh wht happn veer? U r going to teach a lesson to artina then wht happn? I must say that arti teach a lesson to u that never try to think to taught a lesson to her..she is much smarter than u ...
Nw wanna see her more naughtines towards veer...
Waiting for next
update soon
luv u
sultanahabeeb thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks 4 pm nd waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh god arti is gone insane in love
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Posted: 12 years ago

simply amazing..

awsum n adorable part..

loved it so much...

aarti is really naughty...

making him do something...he didnt even dreamed of...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 6-

hehehhe..
her hero.. beating all oder zeroes..
mastt line thi ye di..
lovd the whole ud like blast..
superbo dis ws just the i say- dhanvi di types..
full of a roler coaster ride..

arti is unpredictable..
seriously..
bechari sheetal..
really lucky to hav a friend like arrti,...🤣..
yes di, dis is really wat i m sating..
dnt call it joke..
such character.. crack r necessary in life..
juzz like me..
dey make u love ur life..

dats wat ma friendz say aba me..
dey say.. dey cmt imagine deir life widout ma pranks n idiot stuffs, non sense joke, n specially ma fights n skirmish wid teachers..


ooo...
veer k daday trusty h.. good ..
verna beta tumhe kabka out of colg kerr dete..

wen i shouting madly in class on a girl.. teacher( bad timing) entered..

den i did OUTSTANDING PERFORMANCE...

((that is, standing out of class..))

since den, i hate dat gal like everything n nothing..

o ma god, sammer is big flirter..
i likd him..im sry, but i m not...
hahhahahha...

aarti, u r amazing..
god she is bestest.,
she kissed him all ovr his face..
n he ws mesmerzed..
lovely wrk aarrti,
u r juzz blasting..

amaing di..
dnt know wat will veer do if she cmnt like dis..
hope he kisses her in fruestation..
finger crossed..
reading next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter7-

i m done wid chapter 7 also..
yipeeeiii!!!,...
it ws magical..
though it ws not veer n arti..
but...sameer n sheetal r complete opposite to veer n arti..
i found it sooperbo..
his really lov sheetal.. but she is nervous..

cute couple...

but our arrti is cutest...

lovely shovely oye..
aarti had a sleepless nite..

if the reason wud hav been dat she ws doing studies.. den i wud call it a big fake..
hahaha..
but reason is veer..
so i cn understnd..

bechari ko sone bhi nhi dete h...
:P

oops! sachi main.. uss ladki ka kya jo veer ki life main aayegi...

n uss ladke ka kya jo aarti ki life main aayega..
A BOY FR ARTI- dats more woorying..
cn anyone endure dis crack jack nuts...

but want eva it is..
veer the warrior is title..
but i read dis ff fr AARTI- THE CRACK JACK.. more...

i lov her more..

reading next nw


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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 8-
u noe di wat..
i like vikram..
reason one- he consider arrti as sis..
good.
reason two.. he is cool, juzz like veer..

but why is veer a enemy of him.. i wonder..
things to exopose soon i wish..
stry is a complete roler coaster ride..

sheetal is so shy, she luks such a sweet dis way..
arjun n kavita... big doubt.. cn lov bloom here too??
wat eva,,
but i m in lov wid dis stry..
such a awesome blast dis is..
lov is in air all around..
so much lov lov n lov...
every kinda a lov stry is here...

but di.. punch of dis ud ws-
Veer and Vikram watched two sisters fighting...they nodded their heads and walked away...

its really funny to imagine dese sisters here..
god dey r perfect...
cn anyone say, dey lived in same womb fr 9 months...

lovely wrk di, dis is ur creation.. juzz amazing..

aarti n veer pool scene..
oye hoye..
kya hot h..
mastt h...

dis gal. crack jack... she pretended her being unconcious to catch his arm longer..

''oops! her bum...!!...'' 🤣..

veer will not leave her dis time..
yes veer, catch her, n dnt leave her eva eva...
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 9-
so now i m on track.. just to be not on track again...i mean, ma cmnt to dius ud is early.. but lets see wat aba oder coming up...
so todays last cmnt..
but di, u made ma day here...
thnx fr dis lovely shovely stry..

dis is d best subject fr boyz i think..

''bra hooking!''

veer, so hw ws ur first expirence of BRA HOOKING class..
u liked it??

i noe u will say a BIG NO..
but u lovd it na...
u will think abt it..
i m sure..

so, in dis lecture of BRA hooking... u learnt to hook a bra..
NEXT LEESON.. be ready for unhooking the bra...ā˜ŗļø..
sry di.. naughty gal i m..
but,.. wat to do..
i ducnt hold dat joke..

but, veer, ur dedication in clas.. ur concentration is really wonderful...

so were gazing her back, scrutinized her curves of glowing back...

u loved it???

sameer n arjun..
y r u so bothered fr veer..
he is busy in lecture.. vry imp lecture...

sameer., sheetal is waitng..
go dude..

hope sameer is not it fr his sweet selfihness...

sheetal will be broken i feel..
arti..
chappy i lov u cho cho much...

sachyy muchy i lov u ...

''god save him!..''.. ~~FROWN~~

god save u both..
veer n arjun..
i dunno hw u living on dis earth wid out a girl in life...

:P

lov u di..
cmnts wil be late..
but wil be der...

lov u.
tata

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