Veer (The Warrior ) RTMC FF 21 on pg 47

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Mayuri Dev

@mddmayuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

awesome cs...

and superb uds...

ud soon

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sultanahabeeb

@sultanahabeeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

hi itne jaldi up wow,ist sight mein love nd 2nd sight confession hmmm. . . . . .

thanks dear ,thank u ,thank u so much itne jaldi up ke liye

next day kya hoga hame aur ek up chahey

plzzz

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sultanahabeeb

@sultanahabeeb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

nd hame character sketch ki passand aya nd ek aur request hai with ur next up plzzz vikram ki gang ke bare mein thoda bata dejey, so that veer ke opposite gang ke bare mein bhi kuch maloom hojaye

once again thanks

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Rukmini13

@Rukmini13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Sorry for late commnt...
But all parts are awsom...awww ma heroin ki entry was so cute...she is so lovely dovely...
My my whta first meet..just awsom...love the way u described it...
Awww...ma princess fall in love to her prince charming...why not after all they are made for each other...
Omg wht she say nd that too in front of whole students!!!! Really she had that guts...veer kele liye perfect hai...
Ab kaha jaoge bachhu aur kitni during bhagoge vapas to anahihe humari princess kele pas...luv the all parts...
Waiting for next one...
Luv u

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Priya Sharma

@Priyart12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

awww kya ladki h
mst bindas
1st sight me love
second sight me propose bhi kr diya 😉
good girl
jab veer unique h to uski gf bhi to unique hi hogi na
di like CS
bhut kuch pta chla
specially about vikram
w8ing for next ud 😉
luv u di 🤗

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Radhika Sharma

@ridzzi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

haila what a girl...khule aam confess kar dia n veer itna gussa...god...but don,t worry sam arti will make him smile n confess his love too...n that too infront of every one...
but one thing i liked in this part is vikram,s part...i mean he is nice...he is not just doing time pass with kirti...he actually loves her...n i like it...
n arti ko ready hote dekh mujhe ek hi baat yaad ayi...

Sajna h muhe sajna k liye
Sajna h mujhe sajna k liye

update soon
luv u :-)

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Hayeee I m Loving this ff yaar:-):-) Omg Aarti wow What a Brave girl:-) Amazing Story:-):-) plz cont soon:-):-):-)

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riya

@Riyaa16

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

Lovely
awesome
mindblowing ud di

loved it thoroughly
kya ud tha

i just loved aarti
oh she wore suit 4 him

haye kitni cute lag rhi hogi aarti

rishabh ka toh band hi baja diya vikram ne lovely scene

or yeh aarti ne usko brother bna liya

wow our aarti is vry daring
she admitted her love 4 him infront of whole colg

wow kya ladki h yeh i just love her
muahhh

yeah aarti ab hum sbko pata chal gya that u r a mad
for veer
hehehehe

hona bhi chahiye wo itna handsome jo h

or yeh ranga wants to break his bones or what?

Well wo veer ka kaam h

me to pagal ho gyi aj yeh ud padhkar

kya ud tha funny n cute

di i love u 4 this story
muahhh

ud soon pls pls
luv u

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maria

@maria_awan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Nice dear but why veer is like that he should little nice to her and aarti should nt bow downinfront of him easily jaani yeh kaam to larkon ka Hota haina