-:PaRdEsI jAnA nAhIn:-(ak)LAST PART PG30

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: kyph05

awwwwwww ofdouse why nott ur the sweets friend 😃😃😃
thx alot for a sweet comment 😃😃

awww ur sooo sweet also😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: Pooja922

awww ur sooo sweet also😃

thx alot ur also sweeet 😳😳

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Arra Dollie

@insia12

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Posted: 19 years ago

#33

just started reading it must say its fantastic u r a gr8 writer kashish!

Edited by me_iq - 19 years ago

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: me_iq
just started reading it must say its fantastic u r a gr8 writer kashish!

awwwwwwwww 😳😳thx alot 😃😃😃

kashish 😃

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@ruby89

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Posted: 19 years ago

#35

aww i jst read it. its good. the first part was soooo funny, do continue soon. and keep sahil out or im going to have to come and beat him up too 😆 . continue soon it sounds really good 👏

-Ruby

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: ruby89
aww i jst read it. its good. the first part was soooo funny, do continue soon. and keep sahil out or im going to have to come and beat him up too 😆 . continue soon it sounds really good 👏

-Ruby

lol when i need help beating sumeone am asking u 😳😳 lol😆
thx for the comment hope u continue reading
kashish 😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#37

PART 3

k- wat
a- well acually the car brokee down
k- omgg
it started to rain
k- noee watt
angad looked around
a- mmmm..... i dun 😳
k- angad doo sumethingg
kripa then was about to run under the tree when angad grabbed her hand and pulled her toward him
they both stared in each other eyes
the song played at the back
aashiq bannaya aapne (slow version)
they both dance slowley
they were soo closeee
angad then trowled kripa
so noe kripa back was againt angad stomahe
angad kissed kripa on the neck
then kripa turned around nad hugged angad then started dancing slowely
then kripa and angad kisss
kripa then sneezzed
k- angad am getting sickkk
a- awww my jaannnn is getting sick
k- angad am serious take me somewhere warm
angad then looked around nad spotted a cottage
a- comme i found a cottage
k- angadddd i can't walk am tired
a- kripaa common
k- plzzz lift meee
a- fineeeee
angad lift kripa then both stared in each other eyes as they walk toward the cottage
they reached
angad knocked on the door
there was no one there
then both entered
kripa put on the fire
kripa chanced her cloth into the new ones she brought and soo did angad
kripa was drying he close when angad came and hugged her from the back
k- angadd
a- lovee uu
k- mee tooo
angad then lay kripa on the floor and went on top of her
k- angad
a- shhhhhhhhh.........
angad went close to kripa then the camera

NEXT DAYY
kripa opened her eyes
kripa woke up angadd
k- angaddd gettt uuppp
a- kripa let mee sleeep
kripa got up and changed and got ready to goo
k- angadddddddd
a- kripa let mee sleep
k- okie then u won't listen kripa got water and dropped in on angadd
a- KRIPAAA(got up)
kripa started to laugh and started running angad got up and ran after her
kripa was runnin and didn't see there was a glass table p front angad sawww
a- KRIPAAAAA
kripa look up and hitt the table and the galss scachted
kripa
a- KRIPAAA
kripa was on the floorr bleedding and in soo much pain
k- a..nn..gg..aaa..dddd
angad went on her knee and grabbed kripaa
a- kripaa😭😭😭
k- a..nn..gg..aa..ddd
angad lifted kripa angad carryed her outside. there was no car that were stopping
a -kripa don't worry everything will be fineee
k- a..nn..ggg..aa..ddd
angad ran to the hopstial quiekly and when he reach kripa was ............................................................ ..............

I HOPE U LIKED IT!!!! 😃😃

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago