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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#11

hahah....they're such a cute couple.....continue soon! wonder who that person can be

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: .:KYPHlOvEr88:.
not good?? That was better than good!!!!! It was mind-blowing!!!!!!! 👏

thx alot 😃😃😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sour Skittles
dat waz fab 👏!!! lol a-k get in trouble...lol..by who? dadi 😆 cont soonnnn
himani

lol 😆
thx for the comment 😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: lucky-moon
nice part and that person must be dadi i guess

thx alot for the comment 😃😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Pooja922
hahah....they're such a cute couple.....continue soon! wonder who that person can be

lol i agree thx alot for the comment 😃😃

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Hawa

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Posted: 19 years ago

#16

lol ak in troule already 😆 😆 ...i wonda who tha person izz 😕 ....nice concept for tha story!!!cont soon 😊

xoxoxo- Hawa 😛

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Pooja

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Posted: 19 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: kyph05

lol i agree thx alot for the comment 😃😃

thanks? i should be saying that instead of u!!! thanks for the new fanfic...its sounds awesome!😛😛

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Pooja922

thanks? i should be saying that instead of u!!! thanks for the new fanfic...its sounds awesome!😛😛

thx alot 😃

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kashish

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Posted: 19 years ago

#19

PART 2
angad and kripa turn around
and all u seee is that person is also holding the hose
and the spray angad and kripa
k&a- MUMMY
m- Why can't i have the fun
the all started spraying in each other and angad and kripa got soaked
k- mummy when did u comme
m- oo is just came
a- u scared uss
m- am i sacary
k- nahi mummy angad to pagel haa
a- wat did i doo
m- anyway i have to go noee
k- but u just came
m- commom it ur first day after the wedding and u pple have to spent some time together ight ??
angad and kripa blushed 😳
m- see mummy noe everything
a- kk mom bye
k- bye
the mummy left
kripa went up stair and took a shhowere and angad took a shower in the other room
after 1 hour
they both came out
angad was wearing a little blue collar shirt with black jeans
kripa stepped infront of angad, angad couldn't take his eyes off kripa
kripa had light make up on and her hair was cruled and she was wearing

a- wow kripa u look beautiful
k- anything new to say
a- i love u
k- angad let's goo
a- were are we going?😕
k- i don't noe 😕
a- then why are we all ready
k- i dunn
a- kk then lets sitt at home and stare at each other
kripa hit angad playfully
k- angaddd ur such a nice husband(being carcastic)
a- that i am any dough
k- ur a very lazzyyy husband
a- that i am
angad started laugh
k- fine am going
a- were 😕
k- on my own to sahils house(he liked kripa and was sorta of a nerd)
kripa starts smileing
k- sahil iss so funny he take mee were ever i wannaa goo awwww
he just love him (joking with angad)
angad was getting jealouse
k- omg angad am smelling something burn 😉
a- ............
kripa started sniffing near angad
a- wat
k- the burning is comming from here
a- no wat me jealose no way and for sahil never i just hatehim
k- that my point
a- am not jealous
k- awwww just addmitted it
a- if ur done can we gooo noe
saying that angad walks away
kripa get happpy and goes in the car
angad comms in sit in the car with our saying anything
k- angad were are we going
a- surprise
kripa was happy cause she loved suprises
it was silent in the car when they arivved
a- here u goo kripaaa goo
k- ahh sahil house are u kinnding mee
a- goo u wanted too
k- angad tell me am dreaming
a- goo he's waiting for u i specail called him and told him ur comming
k- angad tum bina am not going to his house
a- he's waiting
k- angad i hate u
a- love uu goo noe
kripa slowly stepped out of the car
k- angad i was jokee take mee home
a- gooo i'll waitihere or shall i goo
k- no no wait here
a- kkk
kripa was walking toward sahills house
kripa whispered to herself
k- omg angad why did u bring me hear ereere
i hate sahil 🤢
sahil was looking out of the window smileing at kripa
kripa gave a fake smile back
k- ommmggg god plz help
then all of a sudden angad beeped kripa
a- commom on back kripaa
kripa turned and ran back in the car
and shut the doorrr
k- uff that was closeee, lets goo before he get out
angad drove the car away
they both enjoyed there daii , they went shoppign and went other fun places, kripa and angad were haveing soo much fun
it was night noe angad and kripa were going back home when the car stopped angad went out to check
a- the car broke down
k- wattt
a- so that mean 😉(angad stared at kripa with a naughtly look)
k- wat😕

I HOPE U LIKE IT ????
the story just started soo it might noe bee soo good but in the middle it'll get better when everything just settles kkk

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago