FF arshi : and he returned! part 16 updated!!!!! - Page 20

Created

Last reply

Replies

969

Views

285.3k

Users

111

Likes

2.5k

Frequent Posters

rosalinda92 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika


o my gosh!!!! how can i FORGET YOU !!! 😲
you're the one who gave the THREAT!!!! 😡 but LOVED IT! 😛 it was REALLY SWEET 😉

sorry sorry! i will make a longer update for you! happy??? 😃
thnx a lot! um really happy to know that you love my FF and waiting this eagerly! 😳
and no problem!


lol i think i can work in a gang or something 😆 for giving you this threats 😃 but what can i do i cant get enough of your FF 😳
Mushfika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rosalinda92


lol i think i can work in a gang or something 😆 for giving you this threats 😃 but what can i do i cant get enough of your FF 😳



awwwhhh! i will try to make a LONG update next time!
😳😳😳
Edited by Mushfika - 13 years ago
Mushfika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!😍 i have got the SWEETEST readers EVER! thanks to all of you for your sweet comments 🤗 ! love you all ❤️

Especially you guys! @
coronapsyche @SWETA
@
rosalinda92 @varshamaharaj
I was laughing like HELL reading ur comments !🤣
But sorry to say but i still can't promise if i will b able to give a long update NEXT TIME...but i promise i WILL make it up inshallah whenever i'm free!

Really appriciate it guys! thnx a lot to you all once again! 😳 🤗

Edited by Mushfika - 13 years ago
rosalinda92 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Mushfika

OMG!😍 i have got the SWEETEST readers EVER! thanks to all of you for your sweet comments 🤗 ! love you all ❤️

Especially you guys! @
coronapsyche @SWETA
@
rosalinda92 @varshamaharaj
I was laughing like HELL reading ur comments !🤣
But sorry to say but i still can't promise if i will b able to give a long update NEXT TIME...but i promise i WILL make it up inshallah whenever i'm free!

Really appriciate it guys! thnx a lot to you all once again! 😳 🤗


honey its our duty to make those comments👏 coz u take from your time in order to write this FF 😳so i think we do those comments to express our love for you ❤️ and am sure next time you will try your best to write longer update for us😳 coz u will not let us down 😳
thank you for your sweet reply to my comments 🤗

Mushfika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rosalinda92


honey its our duty to make those comments👏 coz u take from your time in order to write this FF 😳so i think we do those comments to express our love for you ❤️ and am sure next time you will try your best to write longer update for us😳 coz u will not let us down 😳
thank you for your sweet reply to my comments 🤗



aw! 😳😳 yah ok...give me some time to write a long 2 then...i thought i would write parts short but would update everyday! but since you guys want a longer update, i will need some time! 😉
Mushfika thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 13 years ago

First of all, wanna thank all of my devoted readers for your nice comments. 😳

@coronapsyche@rosalinda92 thanks for your sweet threats which has LED me to make this update (hope long ENOUGH for you 😛) 😆😆

@sweta thnx for understanding and giving me courage when i was really tensed about what you guys gonna do after THAT short update me 😉

AND THEREFORE, I HAVE MADE AN ATTEMPT TO MAKE A BIT LONGER UPDATE (NOT THAT LONG BUT HOPE AT LEAST NOT THAT SHOT 😉)


ENJOY!


PART:5


This time arnav was sure that something is wrong'' terribly WRONG!

Arnav got up from his seat to go to office

Arnav: ok di, I'm going to office.

Anjali nodded smilingly. Arnav turning to nani and payal

Arnav: payal, nani! You're here all day today right?

Nani realizing the reason of this question smiled

Nani: yes arnav bitwa don't worry! We'll take care of khushi.

Arnav nodded and looked at khushi who was lost in her world.

Arnav: khushi I'm leaving'. Khushi?

Khushi realized arnav was talking to her: yes, yes arnavji?

Arnav : . Please take care of yourself! Do NOT step into the kitchen for ANYTHING. OP is here. Whatever you want, just ask him. And after you're done with your breakfast, GO TO THE ROOM AND TAKE REST! DO NOT DO ANYTHING ELSE! And Take you tablets in time! *he ordered*

Khushi smiled as she nodded. Arnav left for office.

OOo

It was 2 pm when anjali's cell phone rang.

Anjali: yes''yah yah! Ok'.

As soon as she hung out, she left from the back door without telling anyone.

Nani was in the living room talking to payal when she remembered.

Nani: payal bitiya! We were supposed to go to the temple at 2:30 r8? Remember what pandit ji told us yesterday? Today's pooja is really important for us to attend.

Payal: o yes nani! I totally forgot. But khushi will be alone at home.

Nani: no anjali bitiya is at home! If khushi bitiya needs anything, she can ask her. And OP is here as well. She'll be fine. Let's tell anjali bitiya that we're going to mandir.

Payal: yah okay'..

But she stopped.

Payal: but nani! If we tell di that we're going to mandir, she'll insist to take her too. And you know hwhat her condition is'..and the mandir we're going to is really big and we need to do the ritual has of going up to the mandir in bear feet. You know how she really strict in these case. I don't think it will be a good idea to tell her.

Nani: I think you're right. Then let's go. I'll just inform khushi bitiya and subhandra about it.

Payal nodded.

Payal and nani left for mandir. And anjali was out! Khushi and dadi was alone at home.


OOO



Khushi was resting in her room when her cell phone rang.

she picked it up...

Arnav: missing me?

khushi widened her eyes as she didn't see who it was at first: n...no

arnav: NO??

khushi nervously: i... i mean yes

Arnav smriked and said huskily: yes?

khushi: uff! arnavji! stop teasing me.

Arnav: ok ok...did you take your medicines??

khushi: oh! i totally forgot! i will have now

arnav: WHAT THE! khushi? you haven't taken your medicines yet?! dhyan kaha rehta hai tumhara? you were SICK in the morning khushi and you're telling me that you FORGOT!!

khushi: i'm sorry Arnav ji. i'll have now. now should i hang up?

Arnav: hmm...it's in the table!

khushi smilingly: yess boss

arnav smirked: bye sweetheart.

khushi again widened her eyes with shock as Arnav never ever used "SWEET HEART" to call her.

Arnav was smiling thinking iof her reaction.

khushi shyly : LAAD GOVERNOR BHI NA! bata nahi kya kya bol te rehte hai khushi was about to take her medicines when subhandra called...

Subhandra: eh chhokri! Khushi!

Khushi went to her room.

Subhandra: what are you doing? Do I need to tell you that I need tea at 3:00?? Go and make a cup of tea for me.

Khushi : yes dadi! I will ask OP to make some tea for you!

Subhandra widened her eyes

Subhandra shouted: WHAT DID YOU SAY? YOU'RE GONNA ASK THAT OM PRAKASH TO MAKE TEA FOR ME? TUM HUMEIN NOKARON KE HAAT SE CHAI PILAUGI???!!!!

She came to her and took her hair into her fist

Subhandra: how DARE you!

Khushi: AAah! Dadi'..Choriye hamein! Daard ho'aahhh!

Subhandra kepting pulling her hair then said: to jah! Meri liye chai lekar aa!

Khushi leaving with no choice went to the kitchen. She got a bad headache as subhandra pulled her hair violently. She started weeping''she started crying out of pain.

She turned on the stove with her left hand as her other arm was bruised and started making tea.

As the put the pot on the stove, she hissed in pain as she can't bear any weight with her bruised hand. but unable to do anything, she was forced to do so.

When she was about to pour the tea, she had a contact with the hot pot which burned her fingers.

Khushi: ouch! Ahhh!

And all this time, two eyes full of anger and pain were looking at her.

OOo

Here nani and payal were on their way to the mandir

Nani: payal bitiya! We should have told anjali bitiya''she will stress otherwise.

Payal: no nani. It's okay. You know how she would insist to come withus . and you know it's not good for her health.

Nani nodded I approval.

When they reached the mandir, the went climb the stair bare feet.

As they reached in the mandir nani told payal that she'll be back in a few minutes.

Nani: payal bitiya, I will meet pandit ji for to let him know that we're here

Payal: ji dadi ji.

As nani went to the pandit, she saw a familiar figure standing far with his back to nani's face. Nani tried hard to look his face but he didn't turn. As the man finished he turned left and went.

As nani saw his face from the side, she was shocked!

Pandit ji came'..

Pandit : ji, you wanted to fix a date for the pooja?

Nani still with her shocking expression!

Pandit: Excuse me!

Nani immediately went to payal. She was out of her breath.

Nani: pa'payal payal bitiya.

Payal: what happened nani?! Are you alright? What's wrong?

Nani: woo'..humm'.i'.

Payal: yes nani'?

Nani: I saw damadji! I SAW SHYAM!!

Payal dropped her thali of pooja from her hand'

xxx

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PRESS THE LIKE BUTTON...TOOK A LONG TIME TO THINK AND WRITE...PLEASE LEAVE Ur SWEET COMMENTS AS IT WILL ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE MORE 😳😳


ABOUT pm

again, those of you who want PM, buddy me!

if you have any problem in opening the link, DO LET ME KNOW!

THANKS FOR YOUR COOPERATION! 😃😳!


PART 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3132359/ff-arshi-and-he-returned-part-16-updated?pn=41


Edited by Mushfika - 13 years ago
lbsitw thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
good its really good...i hope arnav comes bak in tym...do cvontinue nd pm me wen u update!!
kriti_atharv thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsuuum update dear...this dadi is really geting on my nerves now...i mean she is sooo evil...but wait a minute someone saw khushi in pain...who was it????hope it is our dear arnie boy...nani saw shyam in the temple...wow...cannot wait for the next part n thnx 4da pm dear...
Saraprincess thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update plz do update soon I want to read more...
scorp1AN thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 13 years ago
this is so interesting! hope arnav gets to know how khushi is being treated by dadi! poor khushi! please update soon! loving the story more and more! can't wait to read the next chapter!

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse · 7 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 1 months ago

A story filled with Love Affection Care and Respect ... This story is made up in the Backdrop of North Indian background but the story is going...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 1 years ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1021 page no 31

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 5 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".