Originally posted by: SIZZZLER
Thanx ARZOO for this lovely N detailed feedback.
V appreciate that U like our writing,take as a compliment. And V, S3J believe, that love is not dependent on only hugging or kissing. Writing romantic scenes need not necessarily involve this. It is after all the small things that matter. Small things like SAMRAT accompanying GUNJAN for the function, GUNJAN ensuring SAMRAT's comfort and there we have it...SaJan magic...still intact.
Yes, now, after GUNJAN is in his life, every time he gets angry, it is not anger, it is his possessiveness for her, even more, the fear of losing her is what makes him react such. GUNJAN is unaware of his feelings for her, so his mood swings surprises her. She has, as yet not understood why he gets angry so easily when it is about her.
SAMRAT has grown up on his own, no one to take care of him when he was unwell and so, so much pampering does not go down well with him. Whenever he is with GUNJAN, he drops the mask of a shrewd businessman and becomes the SAMRAT he would have loved to be and would have been, had his mother been alive. So he comes up with plans to get GUNJAN get back with him.
SAMRAT understands how it feels to apologize for no fault and so, he understands how AASHU would have felt as SAMRAT knows it is not Aashu's fault. However, what SAMRAT does not realize is that it is GUNJAN who has asked AASHU to apologize, GUNJAN is someone AASHU loves and so, it is not humiliating for him to say sorry. The case with SAMRAT was different, but gradually he will understand.
It is such small gestures that tells us the love and faith he has on GUNJAN. The ritual talk has shaken SAMRAT, but whether he will understand or still continue to think like he as yet does... Wait and watch.
We plan to update soonish.
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