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Posted: 12 years ago
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So uh... hi.. Yes, yes, I know, I took FOREVER to upload this. But hear me out, please. I had the rough draft written down. Then I sort of procrastinated in typing it down, and in the process I lost the papers. Finally today as I was finding my History assignment, I found one paper deep in my bag. -.- I have no idea where the other one is.. *sigh How ever this is not an excuse, but I AM SORRY OKAY. :/ I am not happy with this chapter, but I knew if I was going to be fussy I would just more time. So here it is... enjoy!

Part 3

Arnav sped through the streets of Delhi, furiously, panic vibrating around his car. The boom of his voice terrified the vehicles around. Every other vehicle moved out of the way as he honked and took dangerous turns. With the same amount of speed his car sped on the road, the beat of his heart thumped faster, reminding him to hurry to his destination.

Deep down in his mind the memories that were stored especially for themselves, were colliding. Flashbacks forwarded in front of his eyes, capturing each moment they spent together. Tears of fear and joy streamed down his tired face; the mere thought of seeing her again terrified him to the core, but the thought of losing an opportunity like this made him tremble. Once again guilt washed in to his system when he remembered that fateful words his angel whispered'


"I gave you everything to you Arnav' How could you just throw me? I am your wife' You promised'"


He promised... he promised, but he destroyed it. Completely threw away the precious sacred bond that they created together. He was a despicable human being who didn't deserve to live in this world. Then why was he running to seek her? Why was his heart beat suddenly beating so fast, as if he has run a marathon?


It was simple; Arnav Singh Razaida's life belonged to her, and without her presence, he was just a lifeless soul.

***

''I am sorry Di, but we will have to wait for another car. It's fried, completely fried,'' Akash exclaimed disappointed, eyes still fixed on the car engine. Anjali sighed, and paced back and forth, frustrated at the turn out of events.


''Well I guess we will be late to the mandir. That's okay Akash we can wait, it won't be problem.''


Nani got out of the car her hand on her chest, frowning very hard at the ground. Something was going to happen. She just couldn't figure out what, but there was something strong tugging at her heart. Either it was negative or positive, she did not know, although the feeling was strong.


Anjali noticed this and walked over to Nani.


She touched nani's shoulder, ''what's wrong nani?'' Nani simply frowned more and turned to Anjali.


''I just feel like something big is going to happen... but I am not sure if it is negative or positive...''


Anjali gasped, ''Nani I have been feeling the same thing... Ever since this morning my heart has been trying to tell me something.''


Payal joined them, her eyes full of confusion.


''I have been feeling the same... I don't know... it is something so strong and difficult to understand,'' Payal explained, worry etched to her tone.


''Oh betiya's, I really hope this feeling gets a positive out come...''


''Me too Nani, me too...'' Anjali exclaimed thoughtfully...

***

''Khushi, we are going over to the other side of the mandir. Will you be okay here?,'' Garima asked Khushi, concerned.


Khushi nodded and forced a smile, ''yeah amma, I will be okay. You all go, I need some time alone with devi maiyya anyways.'' Garima kissed Khushi's forehead, and walked out with the rest of the family.


Pain inflicted Khushi's chest the moment she stepped forth in to the mandir. Her eyes roamed around the place, taking in the memories that were slapping across her face. This was the very place every everything crumpled, and here she was today, once again standing on the pieces she left behind. Drops of tears fell down to the floor, trailing along the way, as she walked in front of Devi Maiya's idol. The goddess she always ran to stood before her, proudly as she always have been.


'Forgive me devi maiyaa... forgive me for running away from you. Forgive me for hiding, and never coming to ask you for help. But here I am today, before you, begging for your forgiveness. I promise you that no matter how much painful my life might be, I will not run away from you. Ever. That is my word.'


Khushi continued to pray, her eyes closed tightly, whispering to her devi maiyya. Oddly enough her heart started to tug, making Khushi snap open her eyes. Deep in her gut something was beginning to happen. A new found feeling was beginning to emerge, and her heart rate was increasing. Fear gripped her body; these overwhelming emotions only appeared when...


''Khushi.''


She turned knowing exactly what her eyes will witness.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6yPgAnFUV4o[/YOUTUBE]

Yeah, it's short, but this was all I found in that paper. *sigh So I have re-write and think through the next part. I WILL UPLOAD THE LAST PART NEXT WEEK I SWEAR. No seriously I will okay? I won't keep this long. I have an entire week off from uni so :D

But comments will be nice.. O:) Seriously thank you guys for the patience, and the stalking, and the begging. <3 Please forgive me.

PS: When I wrote this part, it was before Khushi and Arnav's wedding. I was hoping for some serious shit to go down so that I will be inspired more, but lol that went whoopy doooh. Oh well.

Edited by Dalmuthuya - 12 years ago
thulasi_arshi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
awesome..written beautifully😊
Edited by thulasi_arshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Hey!
Pretty intense and emotional stuff to read.
Just had me thinking about what'll happen next ... 😕
Arnav and his anger! Jeeez maaannn! The guys needs to reign it in for f***s sake! 😡😡😡
His biggest downfall. If he learns to control it, I think that'll be one heck of an accomplishment! 👏
Written well 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
very well written!!
please continue soon
Jyo.Arshi.IPK thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
yoshi !!!!

why did u stop nw !!! OMG pls cntinue soon !!!!

and pls unite them soon...itna dard acha nahi hai !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
amazing.. 😊
plz update soon..
& plz give us happy ending.. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
i just read it all..
its soo intense n emotional!
please please please update soon!
i'm waiting for a more intense confrontation n arnav telling hr wat she means to him,hw he cnt live without hr..

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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Amazing👏
I loved the update😃
Pls update soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
OMG...THis was reallly a very intense and a very emotional update yaaar...cant wait for one week to get this updated...update faster yaaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
loved d update
update soon yaar
thanx for pm😊😊😊

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